Unconditional Love |SS| Chapter 3 page 19 - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for mentioning me,...glad u liked my comment
Natz it was so short!!
We want a longer update yaar..
Next update shud be realllyyy long
Hope virika become friends soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update... very well written 👏
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It was really an awesome one..
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Posted: 12 years ago
WAOOO...

WHAT A BRILLIANT UPDATE...

AN EXCEPTIONAL PIECE OF WRITING
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Posted: 12 years ago
nutty!!!! jst read both da updates!!!
dey r awesome!!!
really loved da concept...
loved da first meeting of virika...
nd da frnds of jeevika r nice😆
precap is very interesting...
ha ha jeevika's frnds drooling over viren😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 3 :-

Jeevika and her friends were busy in finding the bag .It's getting late and dark but they wanted to find it at any cost.
Viren was searching for jeevika , he had her bag in his hand. He got his eye on jeevika and moved his direction towards him. When jeevika's friend saw him approaching towards them,they forgot about the bag and started running mad...drooling over him.
Niks :-Omg! Omg! He's so hot...
Falak:-Is he really coming to us...pinch me please!

Their eyes were fixed on him, mouth hung open.
Jeevika who had just seen Viren felt like only she had gotten the right to praise and see him madly but she wasn't acting as weirdly as her friends.
Viren came near to them and gently says :-You please
Falak and Niks together :-me...
Viren :-No she (pointing towards jeevika)
Falak and Niks (jaw dropped) looked at jeevika with astonishment.
Viren showed the bag to her but jeevika was busy gazing him.😉
Viren:-You lost your bag
Jeevika was still looking at him,widening her eyes.
Jeevika : -Thank you! Sorry😳
Viren chuckled slowly because this was her first reply or sentence she spoke to him first time and now she has repeated it again.
Viren:-My pleasure😊
He stood there for a while but got no response ,they all were staring at him.He left.
Jeevika gave the bag to niks and falak and soon they all set off.

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Its about 7:00 pm .Jeevika dropped falak and niks at their places and was heading towards her house that suddenly the traffic jammed,a building was on fire .The roads were closed .Jeevika was annoyed by this,she as stuck in the traffic for about half an hour.Her home wasn't far off, almost five minutes of walk.She kept on horning and the people around were getting irritated 😆.She was busy doing this that she saw two eyes staring her,when she carefully looked at them she got a flashback that how today she was about to fall and a guy saved her.The same ironic feeling started entering her soul.She wasn't wrong it was Viren.She waved him a "Hi'.
He waved her back giving a polite smile. Jeevika really wanted to talk him so she started talking about non-sense stuff but Viren was enjoying it .
Jeevika:-My house is just five minutes from here...I'll feel good If you'll come and have a cup of coffee.
Viren:-So nice of you but...
Jeevika:-This traffic isn't goanna over until half an hour😳
Viren:-OK😃
Jeevika felt overjoyed.She felt delighted walking with her recent crush.Soon they reached her house.Jeevika asked him to have a seat and went to the kitchen.
It was the first time she was making coffee for someone else except her. She presented him the coffee in a mannerful way & stood impatiently to know his opinion on the taste.
Viren took a sip and unpleasant expression surrounded his face and got a little cough.
Jeevika (anxiously):-Is the coffee good?
Viren:-No..Actually I don't take black coffee.
Jeevika:-I'm sorry! I didn't know it.
She rushed to the kitchen and started looking for sugar.After creating a great hustle bustle in the kitchen she finally found sugar box,she added five spoons of sugar in his coffee 🤣
Viren swallowed the coffee inside 😆...It was the sweetest coffee he ever had drunk.
Jeevika : -How is it?😳
Viren (trying to give a smile): -Good, in fact very good😆
Jeevika dear where were you :Her dad spoke out in a gentle voice.
Then he looked at Viren.
Jeevika: -Dady, I was stuck in traffic, Anyways Meet him.. I just met him.

Viren stood up in respect. His dad gave him a smile and asked him to sit.They both started their conversation .Jeevika was least interested in their conversation and was getting bored .She was yawning and was about to sleep.

Viren: -Uncle you've a great experience.

Jeevika's dad : -Son, If you've any problem regarding the business you can ask me.
Viren: -Thank you so much! Can I get your number please?

Dad (giving a weird laugh):-I don't remember my number...If you can give me.
Viren :-Sure

He called out the digits of his cell number.
A bright glimmer came in jeevika's eyes.
Yay! I got his number without any effort (she thought)

Jeevika's dad:-Son ,It was great meeting you,I 've an urgent meeting ...'ve to leave
Viren( giving a gracious smile):-Same here uncle,I think even I'ld leave.
Jeevika'sdad left and Viren also followed the route towards exit gate.
Jeevika asked Viren to wait for a moment. Viren stood at the door ,waiting for jeevika.
Jeevika brought a big red rose with her and handed it to Viren.
Viren was surprised but delighted to receive it.
Jeevika:-Actually there was no other flower in the garden.
Viren:-No..no Its ok,So sweet of you! Thank you
It was really nice meeting you!

Precap:-
Jeevika went to church to find the answers of her questions
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It's all.. I hope You'll like it.
It's a long update
I 'LL continues the update If I'll get enough likes
P.s Pms will be sent to those who 'll like and comment
Thank you
Love
Natasha




Edited by Natasha137 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
unres
yaay im the first one to comment wohoo🥳
m vey happy😃
it was such a funny update i totally loved it❤️
oho jeevs has a crush on viren hayee😳
omg omg five spoons of sugar it must have been the best coffe😆
without askig him she got virens number so lucky😊

Edited by 9999P - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res
Unres
Urgh again 2nd -.-
Stupid lappy got hacked 😡
Anyways the update was very cute😳
Loved it ❤️
Viren no doubt is very hot ☺️
Jeevika staring at her 😆
It was very nice 😊
Cont soon 😉
Edited by Virika11 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
haw cherry b dhamki de rahi pm na deny ki 😒

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