virman - sahiba..spl note pg. 15

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Ankita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

diii the update was super awesomeee... 😃👏

loved it very much.. ❤️❤️

the masti they all do was amazing 😃

their haldi ceremony became a holi celebration haha 😆

and then the dance part was also fantastic di 😃

bt then the kiss

koi nai something is stored for us in the future right 😃

manvi is feeling little bad about the kiss that virat and divy were doing 😭

bt thats a good sign that she is in love 😉

so update asap di 😃

and ya lo apna cmnt kardia ab khush 😛😆 *runs off* 😆

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shilpa09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

oh mahi... part 4 mein jis tarah se virat ne manvi ko samjhaya... that was awesome...

he is right... for good memories..we have to be part of it...

lovely yaar...

and mini.. i really can understand what she might be going through... new shaadi..and all expectations...

u potrayed them very well...:)

u know what i love about ur ff... ur dialogues.. they are very well written... simply superb..!!!

thnx 4 pm dear..

now let me jump to next part...

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shilpa09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

ahh... no... viru boy kissing another girl...

mera toh heart attack karwa diya mahi tune...

hehehe... over drama ho gaya na...

but dear... this was lovely... i really loved it to core...:)

the last para..where u showed how manvi was hurt seeing virat kissing divya was amazing... now i think jealousy starts...

maybe... manvi realizes her love for him soon...

thnx 4 pm dear,..:)

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avika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Awesome it was unexpected that she will get top know soon that virat has gal friend.really can't wait for next update soon mahi n hope new morning brings new hope tooo

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Bhabani90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Update yaar.. Waiting kab se.

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maahiya90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

#treasure#

i knw that i feel for you...isiliye mein tumharey saamne nahi aana chahti..kyuki mein derti hu kahi tum meri aankhey na padlo..kahi mere dil ki baat meri in aankho se zwahir naa hojaaye...i know but m sorry mujhme himmat nahi hai tumhe face kerne ki...

loves

mahiya