In search of a groom(A VIRMAN OS)NOTE:page_9

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Posted: 12 years ago
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oye preeto writer cum artist this is amazing .. 👏
Loved it ❤️
Its really interesting very well written 😊

Bt confused virat sach bol raha hai ya jhoot...😛
Par usne jo bhi kaha it was soo cute sari feelings bina saans liye keh daali
Aur manvi ne bhi haan kardi 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg priety ths was so good i knew it he must be smthng else nt wat he told
Hayee tht phne cnvo tht conversation
Humm no words to describe hw much i like ths os
Plz mke one mre part virman meeting plz plz plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was such a cOool OS...
"Maa insisted with a pout. Uff her pouts are irresistible. How could papa used to resist those God knows"
Only Manvi can think that way...😉
n im going with copypaste...
Want part 2...
Wanna see her reaction on seeing him☺️

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res 😊
Unres 😛

Preity amazing OS ⭐️⭐️.. You have to continue it.. Please ..
Coming to the update its awesome 👍🏼.. Loved the beginning.. It was very realistic yaar.. Manvi's mom is super cool 😎.. I liked her mom more than Manvi here 😃.. Her dialogues are well written and funny also 😛.. Manvi Mukherjee!! Nice Preity.. Bong connection 😉.. Virat fell for her and left his job also.. How sweet .. Please I want to know how Manvi will react once they meet each other.. Loved the way Virat expressed his feelings.. He was quite nervous.. Liked that 😆.. Beautifully written Preity 👏👏👏.. Loved it.. Do continue soon.. Thank you for the scrap 😆.. Take care 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome os preity...👏👏👏...really loved it...⭐️...the way u described everything was superb yaar...👍🏼...it was really interesting yaar...😃...hayee...loved the way virat confessed his love... ...simple..😉...ab mujhe next part chahiyee preity...wanna see manvi reaction seeing him...plz update karnaa...thank u so much for the upcoming pm...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Commenting after a very long time.
Am very sorry for previously not commenting in updates .Sorry.Sorry
Loved the Os.Loved the way U have shown Virat Vadhera.So sweet .Love the bonding between Manvi and her mom.Love ur style in this OS.So lovely and realistic and love the whole OS so much.Thank u for all the pms .thank u😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey preity superb OS!!!!!!!!😃 da way virat tld his details.. lol😆 tere sare works ka index dena.. wanna read dem all...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Mind-blowing os preity...
Guess wot m stuck in the same situation as Manvi's ...my parents r behind me for marriage n poor me ...dunno for how loong will i able to run away...so cud connect well to ur story...😆
Well...Manvi z lucky to have such a super-kewl mommy...i luvd her character...
Virman phone convo was just super-adorable...poor viru wz soo nervous dat he told his whole biodata in a single breath...mm sooo luving this...❤️
Could u plzz cont to 1-2 chapters more...atleast their first meeting...plzzz
Thanx in advance 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awee priety tis is so sweet n nhpce
lovd it
do try n write more os!

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