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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: imsid

when r v getting a next update? Tmrw?


yeah...
Nd
for today.. I already updated one part in morning...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey!! congratulatiooons! and a big THANKS for continue the ff!!:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: sweets1126

Hey!! congratulatiooons! and a big THANKS for continue the ff!!:)


thank u...
Nd
i m just thinking abt it...
I m not sure...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART-121
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NEXT DAY..
Maanvi busy in kitchen with cooking lunch..virat just finished their packing for night flight..he put their bags on side of bed nd locked the wardrobe..
V-walking towards maanvi-maanvi..sari packing ho gai hai..maine tumne jaisa kaha tha waise tumhare sare dresses cupboard me achchhe se rakh diye hai aur sirf Jitne kapde tumne kahe the utne hi pack kiye hai..aur baki k 2 bags Jo tumne gharvalo k liye shopping ki thi usise bhare hai..he saying with coming towards her nd hugs her from back..
M-with cutting salad-smile-thank u..ab tum Jake baitho main ye cutting karleti hu uske baad sirf rotiya banani hai..
V-tight his around her stomach-no..main help karva deta hu..nuzzle her neck..
M-bilkul bhi nahi mujhe tumhari is help ki koi jarurat nahi hai..try to puss him..
V-achchha baba thik hai..koi sararat nahi karunga..lekin lekin help to karnedo..subah se akele sab kar rahi ho..
M-achchha thik hai..tum ye salad Kat lo aur Jake vaha pe couch aur chairs Jo hai unhe thik se kardo..lunch vahi karna padega kyuki dining table sirf 4 logo ketlu liye hi hai..tab tak me rotiya bana leti hu..
V-okey..
Nd virat helped her nd she went towards other side..
After sometime both finished their work..nd go for fresh nd up one by one..
Virat come out from washroom wearing his white sirf with wiping his face with towel..he walked towards dressing table when he saw maanvi stood in front of mirror brushing her hairs..he smiled nd come near to her..he threw his towel on bed nd hugged her from back when she bent to put comb on table..she feel his arms around her stomach..she stood up properly nd looked him through mirror..
V-resting his chin on her sholder-aaj saari kyu?
M-placing her hand on him-kyuki aaj hum ghar ja rahe hai..aur agar bua ji ne mujhe western dresses me dekh liya a to mujhe vapis rihshikesh bhej dengi..smiled
v-achcha..he smiled nd dug his face in her hair..
M-aur waise bhi waha sirf Di aur jiju ko hi is bare me pata hai..
V-turned her towards him-to kya hua?..apne husband k saath uske kahene pe ye kapde pahene the..jab mujhe koi problem nahi hai to unhe kyu hogi?..aur honi bhi nahi chahiye..
M-achchha baba thik hai..ab chhodo sab ate hi honge..try to free herself but he pulled her close..
V-noughtily-ab tak aye to nahi na..aur waise bhi thik hai na jab tak nahi ate hum thoda romence kar lenge..smirked
m-puss him back as he leaning close to her-nahi virat abhi nahi..
But its to late..he starts kissing nd nuzzling her neck..she try to puss him but he didn't want to stop..
M-struggling to stop him..bcz she knew he would not stop until..-virat..bas naa..plz..
Just then they heared big knock on door..both imigeatly looked towards door..
V-pulled back-inko invite karke galti kardi..make cute angry face..
M-smile-achcha ab chhodo..nd free herself..
He moved away nd follow her with adjusting his hair..she opened door after adjusting herself..she saw everyone stood with big smile..she welcomed them..virat also smile nd invite them to come inside the flat..all come inside nd hugged them one by one..maanvi make them set on couch nd she bring soft drink for them..after some time they start lunch..ria nd kia both helps maanvi in kitchen work nd they enjoyed their lunch in virmaan house..
After lunch everyone cheating with eachother..maanvi in kitchen..just then kushal got call so he excuse with everyone nd walked towards balcony door..in few minutes maanvi come there with tray..
R-sach me khana bahot hi achcha tha..
M-thank u..
T-Maanvi ab kya lai ho?
V-toy khane k baad agar lassi na ho to punbiyon ka khana khatm nahi hota..
Ki-wow lassi?..thank u yaar..
All smiled nd takes their glass of lassi..
Maanvi took other plates from there nd walked towards kitchen..she abt to come out from kitchen when she saw kushal looking at phone with big smile..she walked towards him nd stood near him..
K-noticed her-woh..bas nia ka phone tha..
M-smile-woh to tumhara face dekh kar hi pata chal raha hai..waise kab mil rahe ho usse?..apni dil ki baat batane..
Just then virat saw them..he excuse from other nd walked towards them..
K-next week se hum ek saath me ek project pr kam kar rahe hai..lekin tumhe to pata hai..woh mujhe aur mere bare me sab janti hai..mere hang out..meri girlfriends..pata nahi kaise react karegi..ase me apni feeling batana sahi hoga?
V-shook his head nd smile-bata k to dekh..
K nd m turned towards him as heared his voice..
V-come near to maanvi-agar tujhe samjhti hai to ye bhi jarur samjhegi..
K-lekin main is chakkar me uski friendship bhi na kho du..
V-pulls maanvi close to him-dekh teri situation mere jaisi hi hai..hum dono bhi pahele ladte the.phir dosti phir best friend..aur jab mujhe apni feelings k bare me pata chala Maine bhi khudse batane me sochta hi rahe gaya..aur yakin man ye bat maanvi k samne bahot buri tarike se aai thi..isse pahele ki yaha asa kuch ho use bata de..varna use kho dega..
M-virat sahi hai..
K-okey..main use bata dunga..thanks guys..
All smiled nd walked towards other..
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con..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Niaksharma plzz plzz wen you have finished your next update,plz pm me ...Do you know. I have read this story from z start to here ..i have become a great fan of this story...Plzz do pm me on your next update 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OKEY...
GUYS... I HAVE TO SHARE SOMETHING WITH U ALL...
I PERSONALLY UNDERSTAND THE PEOPLES U SEND ME PM...ABT MY UPDATES IN THIS STORY...
ND I M SORRY IF I HURT SOMEONE... I DON'T WANT TO DO THAT...ND I DIDN'T DO THAT PURPOSELY...
I PUT KUSHAL'S CHARACTER NAME FOR OTHER REASONS...I NEVER THOUGHT ABT THIS TRACK...I ONLY USE THIS NAME WHEN LONDON TRACK STARTED... THEN ONE OF MY FRIEND SUGGESSE ME TO PUT NIA ALSO HERE... THAT PERSON WANT NIS'S CHARACTER NAME ND THEIR UNION HERE... THAT'S WHY I PUT THIS TRACK HERE... ND THIS IS STORY... NOT REALITY... I JUST USED THEIR NAMES FOR MY STORY CHARACTERS...
IN THIS STORY THIS TRACK JUST FOR THAT PERSON WHO WANT THIS KIND OF TRACK... ND THIS IS JUST LIMITED TO HERE...AFTER THIS ONLY VIRMAAN HERE IN THIS STORY...
2ND THREAD TO NOW...I WILL THINKING THAT I CONTINU OR NOT...???...
ND I DON'T NO HOW MUCH I CONTINU THIS STORY...BUT THIS TRACK WAS FINISHED HERE...ND NOT BCZ OF THAT MESSAGES BUT ALREADY I DECIDED NOT TO STARCHED NIA-KUSHAL STORY... IN VIRMAAN... I JUST DO THIS FOR THAT PERSON WHO WANT THIS... ND I M HAPPY TO MAKE THAT PERSON'S WISH FULFIL...
BUT IN THIS TERM IF SOMEONE HURT I HAVE NO PROBLEM TO SAY SORRY...
ND I M NOT THAT KIND OF PERSON WHO GAVE EVERY EXPLANATION FOR THEIR WORK...BUT ALSO I CANNOT REPLY TO ALL THAT PERSON SO I GAVE MY VIEW BY THIS POST... ND ONE MORE THING I DON'T LIKE OR U CAN SAY I HATE BAD LANGUAGES...SO I REQUEST U DON'T USE THAT LANGUAGE ...IF U DON'T LIKE SOMETHING JUST SAY IN SIMPLE WAY I TRIED TO MAKE IT COVER...
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BUT ITS JUST ENTATANMET STORY...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: VirmaanSaraa

Niaksharma plzz plzz wen you have finished your next update,plz pm me ...Do you know. I have read this story from z start to here ..i have become a great fan of this story...Plzz do pm me on your next update 😛


thank u so much...
I m glad that u liked my story...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Great update kushi...it is so cute and sweet...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow!!! Amazing!!! Congrats for your third thread 👏
And update was great...do update soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: yaminnthida

Great update kushi...it is so cute and sweet...😃


thanks...

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