Virman FF: Tale of two people:*Note pg 140*

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Anjali

@cutiepie2244

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Hey guys r u liking my story??? plz give us ur views as its my first time so don't know how to write n what to write... but if i will get good response like this i will surely improve my story... n if at any point u will see that its not going good so plz let me know.. feel free n i will never ever mind i promise😊😊... i will dis continue it... But if u all like it i have a surprise 4 u..😉😉

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M really over excited by ur response.. my 1st part didn't reached at high point as only 14 likes n 2 pages of comments... but i will wait c0z i know that many will comment n read afterwards... so will wait..😊😊
I have 3-4 ideas in my mind related to this story so m thinking it to change this "OS" into "SS"... WHAT SAY????
It depends upon ur response n likes on 1st part.. this will decide whether i will change into "SS" or not...😊😊
N if i will convert it i will surely give the character sketch of this story as its most important...
So What say? "OS" or "SS" ????😉😉
Will b waiting...😊😊

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_Shru_

@_Shru_

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

plzz plzzz convert it into an ss!!! 😃 ur an awesome writer nd ur story is very interesting.. i wud luv 2 read mre... plzz make it an ss nd do cont soon😊

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@wanderlust09

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Hey Anjaly dear...

Cuming to the update...Is dis ur first piece of work dear????

Itz an amazing story...u hav penned down beautifully ...

Luving the story so far...Virman luv each other but y isnt Manvi admitting it...😕

Wil wait for the story to unfold...

Plz cont soon n would luv to recieve pm for ur future updates!!!

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

ofcoz make it a SS...

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Natasha

@Natasha137

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

SS ofcourse😊

continue soon!:D

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floral

@floral

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

anjali make it an ss dear i loved it sooo much .and thanks for the pm👏👏👏😊

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Selina (bt 4 close friend Sia)

@Siaa96

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

SS cuz its awsome love it yaar

thanks for pming me

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Ashvi

@_Virman_

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Oh my god this is awesome os i am sorry i didn't comment earlier i was very sick so by the way this is awesome continue soon and thanks for the pm

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Sofia

@SweetAngels96

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Ofcourse change it into ss!!! N plz update soon

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Anjali

@cutiepie2244

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: naina927
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oh my god meri angel... are you sure it is your first piece of writing...??? because it doesnt look like one and on the top i am now unable to believe it after i have tha first part...
it was fabulous darling...!!!! trust me...!!!! continue it asap and next time complete the flash back...
i literally had tears in my eyes when virat was dying to hear manvi expressing her feelings for him and the part when manvi said that she was no one to him... i could feel virat's pain...
i really loved virat's dialogue where he said that he should leave because he has failed in everything in life... let it be his personal life or professional front...
i must say the manvi you portrayed was the manvi we gotto watch in the beginning... her reaction was so very typical... the cvs changed manvi's character after the cancer track n now she is no longer the manvi we all saw in the beginning of the serial... i miss that jhalli mast maula manvi...
in short i loved the first part to the core and especailly the scene manvi gets hurt and virat comes back to her n starts scolding her and manvi thanks him for giving her HER virat back...
now u have to continue soon and i want the precap soon...
please...

love
naina (ur maina...) 😃

Ooh mine mine such a long n colourfull comment... loved it dear...Ur words were such amazing... i didn't knew that u liked it so much... yup i will complete the flashback in the next update 4 sure.. n will give the precap soon...