Virman FF: Tale of two people:*Note pg 140* - Page 19

Originally posted by: shruthi13

res

unres

yayy im first😉

wow super se bhi upar wala update tha!!!!!!!!

i was literally in tears by da end of da update...

da way virman emotions were written... fab job anji...

poor virat... he is so hurt...😭 par manvi aisa kyun kar rahi hai...

Maanvi: Virat plz just leave .. Chordo mjhe...

Virat: (After a long pause)... CHOR DIYA...

Maanvi turned..

Maanvi: huh...

Virat: (expressionless face)... Azad kiya tumhe,, apni life se,, apne dil se,, apne pyaar ki dor se... Ab na tum meri kuch aur na me tumhara... Ooh sorry.. me tou tumhara kabhi kuch tha hi nahi... But u know what.. me tumhe kabhi maaf nahi kar paaunga.. Chah kar b nahi..

des dialouges were jst awesome... nd one mre part which touched ma heart

Virat: Pyaar ka gehra samandar jo sirf paani ki ek boond ko tarasta raha.. jise kabhi apni pyaas bujhane ka moqa na mila,, vo badnaseeb hun me.. jis ne chaha apna banaya.. jis ne chaha chor diya...

Maanvi: pyaar ko khamoshi ka naam de kar dil mein ese qaid kar liya,, ese chupa liya k kabhi jata hi nahi paayi, kisi ko dikha na payi... Apne pyaar ko,, apni zindagi ko kabhi khush hi nahi rakh paayi.. Jise khud se zyada chaha vo alag hogaya... jise apna bana chaha.. haalat ne banne hi nahi diya.. Ek patthar ki moorat ban gayi hun me... jis mein khamoshi aur dukh k elawa aur kuch nahi... Ek esa samandar jo dekhna mein tou buhat khubsurat hai magar dur khara insaan kya jaane k is ki gehrai mein kitna dard chupa hai...

Virat: ek dusre se alag jee rahe hain.. Vo do dil jinho ne kabhi saath jeene ki qasam khai thi vo aaj ek dusre se juda hain.. itne juda k koi unhe kabhi paas nahi laa sakta... Dono paas ho kar bhi dur hain... Par dil mein ek aas hai,, ek umeed hai k kabhi tou khatam hongi yeh duriyaan,, yeh tanhaiyaan,, yeh judaaiyan...
Kya vo dor phir bandh payegi???? kya do dil phir ek honge???

im toh totally bowled over by dis update... it was so emotional yet so beautiful... i still cnt beleive dis is ur first tym writing... ur dng a fab job dear... luving ur story so much... plz cont soon cz im really waiting 2 knw abt da secret... plzz plzz plzz update soon nd thnx fr da pm😊

Originally posted by: naina927

RES FOR UR NAINA MAINA

Originally posted by: little.angel56

Hey Anji,

Thank you for continuing firstly.. plus the update!
I have already told you that you're just awesome at your work everytime..and even in this.. the way you had described their emotions using the lyrics.. i mean it was so beautiful..

was really touched at the last line.. or infact the whole one was too emotional..and teary!

loved it! continue very soon! awesome writer ❤️

Originally posted by: LV88

awesome.. plz do send pm...