Virman FF- The curse (Vampire) ch15 part 1 completed

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LoverBollywood

@LoverBollywood

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Awesome yaar...

Too good pleasee continue soon...

Cant wait and thanks for the PM..

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AreejHash

@AreejHash

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Kameeni Bebz. tu itna acha likhti hai aur mjhe pata bhi n ahi :O awesomeee story! bus thodha aur romance chahiye tha! tumse mujhe umeed hai romance dikhane ki..! coming back to the story ! vibhu ITS AWESOME! I mean ! it is sooo awesome! u should publish ur stories now I am telling u publish thme! people will loveee it! specially the twihards!..! awesomely written! i wanted to read moree! updatee fastt! i was dieing to read ur stories! plus I loveee vampire stories! and now U wrote one! ilovee uu bebbzzz for this!! tumhari stories are like as if I am reading some writers sory or somethin! u should get professional with this! 1 thing i am sad is that itne jaldi manvi ko sach pata chal jata hai? thodha romance! pleasee :D love u bebzz!
-Areej

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Huma

@Huma0301

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: vibhubebo3

yeahhh !! Huma !! Its my first vampire story..! N its all my writing but in romance part I'll take help of my friend..! N I think I'll put some more romance then rest of my ffs...! As m happy to have less no. Of readers coz it sucks to pm :P I really wanted a system that the readers gets to know automatically wheneva i update LOL! :P As story's name is about death..! Actually i didn't get any effective name till now..! But I'll think about the name when story will be over. But this story is far different from Meyer..! She is a grt writer i can just copy her style in my writing..! But further there will be many funny n romantic moment coz Virat can read manvi's mind :P

yayeee nw that will be sumthin very worth while reading

especially if theres gonna be funny moments too - i can imagine that if virat can read manvi's mind

waoh cnt wait!!!

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Surish

@Surish

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Excellent, astounding, awe inspiring written excerpt!

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Huma

@Huma0301

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

wow wow wow bebo 😉extremely terrific bohath bohath bohath zyada acha tha i really loved the way virat cudnt resist anymore n sed i love u to her cho chweet n the precap omg its jus made me wanna read the next part really quick cnt wait for the update nw bebo plz jaldi karo na 😊

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Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Superb..~! read chapter 3 n 4 back t back...Amazing...Virat can listen to Maanvi's thoughts which is nice...O god...her thoughts r hilarious...n Virat's answer even more hilarious...Maanvi's dad vampire then how is she human,,|? Waiting for the next..:)