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Chapter 4 coming soon !!😛 thanku so so much foe support guys. Love U all ! Hav written chapter 4 !! Pms are send !!! If U want me to send U pms..! Send me buddy request. Give ur reviews too ! :)

Edited by vibhubebo3 - 12 years ago
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Chapter 4
He was not my dream, he was real


My eyes were heavy, I can't see anything due to tears in my eyes. He was digging his nails onto my waist like a knife in hot butter. I was moaning of pain. He was coming towards my face n bends down on my neck. I could feel his icy cold lips behind my neck. But in no time his weight was pulled up by someone. I wasn't able to see his face. Everything was blurry to me. I could feel blood pouring out of my waist. I could hear someone's loud ear piercing scream n after that everything was quiet. I was crying of pain, my hands were filled of blood. As if he took out some skin of my waist. Someone was coming towards me. But I was motionless, I could utter a word. He bends down n removed my hairs from my face. His icy cold fingers were tickling over my eyes n wiped my tears. I could feel his fingers running over my neck. I tried to protest but I was still because of his strong grip on another side of my waist. I tried to say something
'who R U'??. I was repeating same word again n again. He replied but I couldn't hear him. Now I could feel his fingers over my other side waist. N Moaned loud in pain. Tears were poring out of my eyes. But in no time the pain was gone. His hands had some magic. I took off his shirt n make me wear that coz a part of t-shirt near my waist teared up by that beast's nails. N he took me in his arms in a bridal style n started walking towards my house. I could feel his perfect abs, his bare chest touching over my body. A shiver runs from my head to toe. He was like an icy cold stone. His fingers were tickling on my back. I was loosing my conciousness. He stepped in towards a dark room which was mine. He put me down on my bed. He smells like peaches. I really wanted to see him. Again his fingers were tickling my cheeks. I stuggled to open my eyes this time n was shocked to see him really close to me. I gulped in nervousness. I opened my eyes widely n was mesmerized by his beautiful golden sparkling eyes. His perfect blood red lips. His strong jaw line. He was perfect. His small eyes staring at me, I could feel care in those eyes. N he smiles over me as if he was listening to me. He is a killer, he can kill anyone with that smile. Finally I said something. His voice was husky strong a manly voice.
'Stop thinking about me'!
I was shocked, how he got to know what I was actually thinking? N I protested by saying m not. 'Don't lie'! I know U R thinking about me'! He said
N he bends down over me with that same killer smile. His face was just inches away from my face. I was really scared with the awkward moment. I was already drooling over his perfect body n now he is don't such stuff. N I pushed him away n sits on the bed. He was beside me n I turned my face asking him to wear a shirt first. N he cracked out. I don't know why but I was seriously blushing. I even don't know him, an unknown person is in my room n more over shirtless n flirting with me. I don't know how I controlled my thoughts. N managed not to look at him. 'So U wann me to wear a shirt'?? Right'? He asked
'yeah'! Wear ur shirt n leave as fast as U can'!
'ohh, really.! So, give my shirt. N I'll leave'! -he said
'What'? I don't hav ur shirt'? What i will do with that'!
'ohh'! ( n he laughed again) his laugh was as sexy as he was.
n i remember i was wearing his shirt. N i asked him hesitating.
'W8 lemmi change n then I'll give u'!
'Yeah'! Sure go'! He said N he smiled again'!
I wanted to kill myself that some Unknown boy is sitting in my room n m not saying anything. What's wrong with U manvi. N I changed my t-shirt while fighting with my thoughts n came out with his shirt in my hands. N went towards him n gave him his shirt n he was standing in front of me staring at me. N I thought to ask him who is he'? N 'Who are u'? N who was he'? Why he was trying to kill me'? How U cured my wounds'? Why he said he was w8ng foe me from last 300 years'? How can someone live foe 300 years. Why he said he wanted to drink my blood'? N why U R so icy cold'? What's happening to me'?
N in no time he held my hand in pinned my onto the wall. Both my hands were immovable because of his unnatural power. I feel like he I'll freeze in no time. He was like an ice bug. His skin was really soft. He leaned over me pressing my body on the wall.
'Why U talk so much'! I can give answers of any of ur questions but this is really not a right time'. He said
I tried to speak but he shut me up by putting his finger on my lips. N dugged his eyes into mine. There was something in his eyes which was making me feeling really low. Like some drug. I was feeling like i was over drunk but why this Was happening to me. He lean towards my ear n carsing it with his nose.
'Manvi'! I'll be back I'll not let anyone harm U'. He said
My eyes were getting heavy. My vision was becoming blurry n i fainted over there. I don't know what he did to me after that. He was such a flirt. But inside I like that.
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Next morning I wake up but found myself on my bed. I was just wondering about him. Searching him in my room but no sign of him n ran towards mirror n took off my t-shirt from my waist to see my wounds but there was no sign of any pain. Even no marks. But how could this possible? Was that my dream? But I can still smell him near me. His perfume smell was still there. This can't be a dream. N I ran towards my garden where I was last night. May be those blood drops were still there. But no. Nthng was there. But when I rolled my eyes. I could see fire ashes near the tree. There I could smell peaches. That Was not a dream he was real. He came to save me. He was here. But why he left me. N what happened to me Last night. I was talking to him. I was asking him something. How he could left me like this. What Was his name? Who was he? All the questions started raising in my mind again. How can I feel such safe around him. Who was he? N I kept thinking about him whole day. That was weird. Someone came to drink my blood but how can someone drink blood'? What was his name'? I was fighting with my thoughts. This place is weird. I don't know how much it'll surprise me. It was 10 am in morning n I had to go with Rohan n my other friends. I don't know but they are really caring. We were going to watch 'Twilight' Breaking dawn part 2. It was the last part I really loved whole series if it. This story had a charm in it. I was madly n badly in love with this story. The way Edward save bella from every problem. I really wanted a lover like him. But I can scream like nerds that its a friction. Vampires are just in stories. They doesn't even exist in This world. But now I had a doubt on my own words. The man who came to kill me last night. The guy who saved me. I always think that my life is a normal life just with bad dreams. But now its changing with the time. Its my 21st birthday after 1 month. But why m feeling that, this could be my last birthday. But then I snapped back to real world which was fresh. I don't know but Rohan Nanda was different from others. I really don't know why he used to wear gloves. Wait..! Manvi shut up!! Its winter in Manali'. I was sick. I really don't know what was happening. Now m believing in vampires.
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I came back home. I was tired n it was 6 in evening when daadu came to me with bags in his hand. N I asked him ' what's on'? Why he had bags in his hands'?
'Manvi'! I need to leave now. I have an urgent meeting in London. I'll surely tell U when I'll be back.'- he said
'wait'? Daadu how can U do this to me'? I mean we met after 7 years n just n 2 months ur leaving me'? Why'?
'Manvi'! U don't worry my friend Vijay Vadera is coming here with his family. They all will live with U. They assured me that they will take care of U. I can ask them if U want anything'!
'No daadu'! I'll not live with anyone. I can live alone. I lived foe 3 years alone in that house just because of U. N now I can live without U ALL ALONE by my own.'!
'Manvi'! Don't create a scene.'! I can't leave U alone like this, its not a matter of 1-2 days. Its 2 months.'!
'So, U will not be here on my birthday with me'! Daadu its my 21st birthday.!
'Manvi, I don't care. birthdays come every year. It doesn't mean I'll leave my work'!
'Okay'! Daadu do what U wanna do'! I can live alone, I don't want anyone to be with me.'
I ran towards my room n closed the door behind. How can daadu leave foe 2 months'? I don't want anyone with me'! I can live by my own. N I took my car keys n left the house. I really wanted to spend sometime alone. Out of that house. I was crying badly. I was driving at a speed of 200 km/hr. I was testing my patience. I was feeling like I should not drive so fast. Betwn that I lost control Over my car n i couldn't see a huge truck coming over my side. It was very late to react n i turned the staring n lost control over the breaks. N my car hit the railing at the end of the road but due to speed my car wasn't stoping. It was a pond side n my car flew over the road. N in sometime i was in a lake into my car. It was filled with water. Doors were gone locked. I wasn't able to come out of my car. I was crying badly. I was trying alot n i opened the door but fate was against me. My head hit the car n i wasn't able to swim because of that hit over my head. I don't think anyone can save me. I was trying to swim but my eyes were getting heavier. My hands n feets were like paralyzed. May be i was near my death. May be this was the end of my life. N i was losing my conciousness slowly slowly. Only my dark fate. But this death would be easier foe me rather then this life.
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Precap
I never believed in miracles but this was. I was feeling my body. N i tried to open my eyes. I was on bed. But that's not my bed. Even this room is not my room. Where i am? I was feeling like i should write question papers coz i was filled with so much questions. i wanna ask someone now. But the room was dark, like it was night n i tried to stand on my feets n i could feel soft feather like carpet under my feets. But i really need to know where i m.!


HINT-' that house is Vadera mansion 'Virat's house'!



-----------------------------------chapter 5 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/78357507
Edited by vibhubebo3 - 12 years ago
aaliya172 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
the story is completely amazing.
loved it to the core.
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing update bebo :) loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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virat the vampire haan😃
Thats going to be amazingly awesome 😃

He saved her aww ...
And manvi ki to sawaalon ki list khatam hi nai ho rahi thi😛
The best part bt worst for her tht he can read her thoughts thts going to be fun 😉

And nw manvi going to stay with thf vaderas thts going to be interesting ...

Btw u have written manvis pov her thoughts nd all very interestingly and its really amazing ...😃

Thanx alot for the pm
Aur pls jaldi update karna
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesum... m luving it... update soon n do PM!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i knew it virat will save manvi.so vadhera's are coming to stay with manvi.i want more virman moments.pretty please😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its purly amazing...each n every word was so mesmerising, it was like everything was happening around me...dude u r a superb writer...cant wait fr virmans official meeting...cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing update ⭐️⭐️.. Loved it totally.. Virat is a vampire then.. And he can read her mind also.. Superb 😃.. Manvi asks too many questions 😆.. But cant blame her.. There are so many weird things going on around her.. This Rohan Nanda guy sounds fishy now.. I guess Manvi's dadu already knows all these things.. Loved the way you have portrayed Manvi's pov.. Its brilliant 👏👏.. Precap is really interesting.. Cant wait to read more.. Please continue soon if possible.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing update!!!! so virat is a vampire maybe nd i thnk rohan is da villian here... ur story is damn interesting... plzzz cont soon nd thnx fr da pm😊

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