Nothing Like Us:LAST CHAPTER on pg.30 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

wowww it was superb

story was beautifully written

u r grttt writer

thanks for the pms keep updating

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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
wow yaar, damn long part n indeed its the first story i've ever read with such a long update...
mind blowing story, feel sorry for jeevs but its alright viren is there for her, hope she realise his love for her soon n virat the beast never come back again

again its an awesome update
looking for more updates soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
uummm... aaa... arr... Srry nt getting enuf words to describe this... GOD THIS IS AWESOME... M TOTALLY SPEECHLESS... LUV D CONCEPT... EVERYTHING IS SUPERB...
Update soon plzzz... n Do PM!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Ufff I'm speechless no doubt your an awesome writer
But this was just great awesome outstanding
Loved it to the core the concept is awesome thanks
For the pm please update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Im horrible at replying with nice comments, but you'll have to bear with me.
This was super long and super amazing!!! I can see this must be close to your heart because i already feel affected from it myself. This seems to be a very emotional one. The rest you've written didnt show the struggling virika. This ones going to be very intense and hence BRILLIANT!
You put down their emotions beautifully! The friendship and live they share is on to cherish. Hope they get back together soon (which they will considering this is an ss and not an ff :D).
Cant ask you to update soon because you're already very quick. It saddens me to know you dont gt the response you deserve but i hope im playing my part in appreciating your efforts.

Love
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
Firstly I love long updates...and this was one of the best updates...👏
I always wondered why you have medical reference in all ur stories and that too with such accurate info on medical process...But after reading ur Note I really wish u enter into Medical school...All the best for that..😊

Loved the whole update and especially the flow of the story...
Viren is such a sweet heart...

Liked this part..


"He thought the past several years were like hell for him, but he realized that his pain was nothing compared to hers. Loosing your parents, baby, and true love. How had Jeevika coped up with it all?

Viren - "You have a reason to live, because you deserve it Jeevs.

Hope J becomes normal soon...😊
Thanks for the PM..
Cant wait for the next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
dat ws damn good
amazing
hats off
loved it😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
U proved again that ur such a brilliant writer!
Oh, wish i got half of ur talents seriously!
Virat as villain, is something new!
Poor Jeevika, but Viren's always by her side👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
OMG... Kays..Its absolutely brilliant..!!! Brilliant se bhi brilliant if i may say so.. Extremely well written.. It had me hooked up from the very first to the last sentence of the update :) I love the way the plot differs in each story of urs but the heart n soul of virika remains d same..that is wat makes virika so very special.. I love it how viren is so very understanding n caring towards jeevika.. I love d way Viren calls Jeevika as "Jeevs" in ur stories thats so very romantic.. :)

Loved the long update..especially the last sentence" ""He was going to do everything he could now to make her the happiest girl in the world. "" " wanna see to wat lengths Viren goes in getting back jeevika to normal...

Update soon :)


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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
awesome story! continue if possible!

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