Nothing Like Us:LAST CHAPTER on pg.30

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Fari_15

@Fari_15

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#251

Beautiful update!!

Loved the way u had portrayed virika's emotions!

Viren is such a sweetheart! Love him loads for being the human he is!

The ending was awww...they had a girl!! It was soo sweet!

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Navya

@shobrakapooor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#252

wow such a perefect ending for a perfect story...

well done truely amazing👏

Aaliya... sweet name... !

Viren is such a sweetie, he's like a stress releaser to Jeevs,!!

Lovely ending... seriously no words to describe👍🏼

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Amii

@Amii90

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#253

I am prob the late lateef so see this work and few others of yours- don't go on forum too much thus miss lot of these FF/OS/SS!! But anyhoo better late than never!

Like I say, I prefer to read more than write and this is def the kind of work I would read and actually loved to read this morning!! Simple concept yet works like magic due to your extraordinary treatment and superb flair with your writing! Detailed and descriptive narration of facts and plot and characters are well etched especially Jeevika in this work of yours stand out- one can feel her pain!!!

And yeaa you were right, its not good- its def better than just that!!! I would have made longer comment but time constraints so wanted to put this out there briefly and I will save the rest for your other work i read day before yesterday- "You are my Heartbeat"!!! Superb job!

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