Virmaan :U have to come back-its destiny not mistake: 1 : part-48+note - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
loved the update.Manvi ignores virat. wat he did was bad, but hope he seeks for forgiveness and she accepts it😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
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--VIRAT FEEL THRUSTY..HE FOUND
WATER JUG WAS EMPATHY..DABBU
USED IT FOR DRINK..SO HE COME
OUT FROM ROOM AND WALKED
TOWARDS KITCHEN..HE STOPPED
WHEN HE HEARED SOME
CONVERSATION..HE TURNED AND
SAW VANSHIKA AND MAANVI
STOOD IN BALCONY OF HALL..HE STOOD NEAR THE PILLOR AND HEARING THEIR CONVO..
VA-BETA I KNOW U HURT A LOT..7
SAAL SE JANTI HU TUMHE..KYA MAIN
NAHI JANTI KI TUMHE MARRIAGE
PR KITNA YAKIN THA..TUMHARE LIYE YE SIRF EK RASAM NAHI HAI..
MAANVI TURNED TOWARDS
HER..VIRAT CAN SEE TEARS IN HER
EYES..MAANVI HUGGED VANSHIKA
TIGHTLY..
M-I M SORRY VINU MAA..MAINE AAPKO AUNTY BULAYA..LEKIN MAIN
AAPKO JEEVIKA K SAMNE MAA
KAHENA CHAHTI THI..PATA NAHI
WOH KYA SOCHTI..MAIN VIREN KI
LIFE AUR DIFFICULT NAHI KAR
SAKTI..SHE CRYING..
VANSHIKA RUBBED HER BACK...
VA-MAIN SAMAJ TI HU BETA..BUT
MAIN HAMESHA TUMAHARE LIYE
VINU MAA HI RAHUNGI..KYA HUA
PINKI JI YAHA NAHI HAI TO MAIN
TO HU..
AND MAANVI NODDED IN YES..STILL
TEARS SLIPED FROM HER EYES...
VIRAT LOOKED AT HER AND FELT
GUILTY..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
Mind blowing update...Precap is Awesome...really loved it
cant wait dear...continue soon 😊 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Great precap dear.. Please continue soon.. Cant wait to read the next part 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
It's really nice story...so plz cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Lovely precap...my god it gatting intresting day by day...cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
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VIrat just looked at her..she is busy with talking to them with smile..
Vn-vese Hume jeevika k parents se bhi baat Karni hogi..kyu ki sab jante hai ki viren aur maanvi ki shadi hui hai to ab Der karna sahi nahi hoga..
Jeevika get worried after hearing this..just then virat come and put his hand on her solder..
V-aunty aap fikar mat kijiye hum kal hi chandighadh Jake apni family se baat karlennge..he smiled slightly..
Vanshika and rakesh nodded..virat looked at maanvi but she looked at vanshika..
R-thik hai bachcho ab raat k 11 baj rahe hai Hume sona chahiye..
Va-haa bilkul..ek kam karo humare yaha 2 gust room hai..ek me jeevika aur maanvi dusre me virat aur dabbu ruk jayenge i hope koi problem nahi hai..
V-ji bilkul nahi..lekin hum dabbu k ruk sakte hai..aap plz pareshan mat hoiye..
R-nahi is me paresani ki koi baat nahi hai..tum log yahi rukoge..plz..
Virat abt to say something when dabbu pulled him and wisheper in his ear...
D-yaar maan le na waise bhi ye lawyer hai ji..
V-chup kar..
R-ye dabbu sahi hai ab apna Sara saman gadi se nikal k le aao..
V-ji uncle..and he walked out with dabbu..
After few minutes all sat in their respective rooms..
In virats room..
Virat lying on bed and thinking abt maanvi..just he heared dabbu calling him..he saw dabbu stood in front of him with bottle and two glasses..he jumped out from bed..
V-dabbe ye kya hai?..tu yaha bhi suru hoga?..kisi ne dekhliya to?..he said in shocked..
Dabbu sit on bed and make him also sit in front of him..he make to glass of drinks..he try to gave him one glass but he refused it..
V-tu janta hai main drink nahi karta..with raising his eyebrows..
Dabbu took both glass and drink both in one shote..then he shook his head..now dabbu shook his head little..he loose his sense little..
D-in drank voice-virat tu janta hai ki kabhi kabhi na ye daaru achchi hoti hai..
Virat looked at him with confusing..
D-hu..smile..kyuki ye na Hume khudko bhul ne me help karti hai..and he again take drink..tu drink is liye nahi karta kyu ki tu drink handle nahi kar pata..hukk..but main is liye karta hu kyuki..kyuki main khud ko handle nahi karna chahta..
Virat looked at him and plased his hand on his solder..he realize that he get emotional..
D-virat hum tabse saath hai jab se humne music ko apna career chuna..ek saath itne plane banaye..vele giri ki..party..pub..flirting..raging..pranks..sab kuch..lekin yaar kabhi kisika dil ko nahi toda..kisi ki life se nahi khela..
Virat realize what he want to say..he looked away..
D-virat..aaj humne bina kuch Jane bujhe ek bahot badi galti kardi yaar..kisi ko bahot hurt kiya yaar..aur woh bhi ek achche dil k inshaan ko..his eyes getting wet..and he fall on bed..he get unconscious..virat turned and looked at him..he know that he drinked more..he make him sleep properly on one side of bed..he hearing dabbu who murmuring..humne galt kiya..i m sorry..virat covered him with blanket and sit again at the same plase..he looked down and thought abt it..he moved his hand towards his hair and start brushing him up..just then he saw alcohol bottle on table..he remember what dabbu said..me isiliye karta hu ki khud ko bhul jau..all thinks come out in front of him..his mistake..maanvis face..dabbus concern for her..his guilt..he snatched bottle answer start drinking..he finished whole bottle..and again lost in her thoughts..
Here before few minutes vanshika walked towards maanvis room..she looked for her but she found only jeevika sleeping on bed..she come out towards hall..she know maanvi loved balcony view from hall..she come there and found her stood near the railing of balcony..she come behind to her..
Va-maanvi..
Maanvi heared it..she hurriedly wiped her tears and clear her throats..
Va-beta soi nahi?
M-bas sone hi ja rahi thi..
She come besides her and put her hand on her..maanvi turned her face to other side..
Va-apni vinu maa se kabse apni feeling chupane lagi beta..
Here virens father called vinu to her wife so maanvi also used it.
M-nahi main kyu chupaungi..main to bas yuhi papa k bare me soch rahi thi..she try to controlled on her self..
Va-aur virat?
M-ignore it-main uske baare me kyu sochungi?..woh sirf ek mistake thi aur kuch nahi..
In virats room..virat feel little wrong after drinking..he looked for water but jug is empathy..he walked towards kitchen for water..he abt to passed from hall when he heared va and m talking..he go behind pillor and heared their convo..
Va-kya Sach mei..bhale hi tu virat k bare me na sahi lekin apni us shadi k bare me to soch rahi thina..kyu apni vinu maa se jut bol rahi hai?..kya main nahi janti ki shadi tere liye kya Maine rakhti hai..main kab se tujhe notice kar rahi hu..woh dard Jo teri smile k piche hai..
Now maanvi can't controlled she turned nd hug her tightly..tears fall on her cheeks..
M-i m sorry..maine itne saal me paheli bar aapko aunty bola lekin mere aapko vinu maa bulane pr pata nahi jeevika kya sochti..aap mere bina kahe mujhe samaj lete ho and she cried
virat saw her
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i can not long update than this bcz of the restriction of my phone...
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if u liked it plz gave ur feedback...
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Precap coming little late but i can say that in next part virat make her talked to him...
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Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
First
nice update dear
continue soon..
Precap..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Awesome update...virat feeling guilty is great...poor manvi...continue soon if possible...

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