Virmaan :U have to come back-its destiny not mistake: 1 : part-48+note - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
Mindblowing...
Ooh...so virat is feeling guilty
Felt poor fr maanvi...
Precap is quite interesting...
Plz pm me when u continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62

Omg this is getting so much interesting plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: princesshelen

Mindblowing...
Ooh...so virat is feeling guilty
Felt poor fr maanvi...
Precap is quite interesting...
Plz pm me when u continue


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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
Superb update.. Poor Manvi.. She is very hurt.. but the good thing is Virat is feeling guilty.. Please continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
wow loved the update.Read the whole update.Poor Manvi 😭😭😭.Felt so bad for her.Waiting for the pecap and the next update😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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MAANVI TURNED AFTER TOOK WATER BOTTLE FROM FREEZE..SHE ABT TO WALKED WHEN SHE SAW VIRAT IN FRONT OF HER..BOTH LOOKED AT EACHOTHER..ITS DARKLESS IN KITCHEN..ONLY DEEM LIGHT COMES THEIR..
MAANVI LOOKED AWAY AND WALKED TOWARDS HALL..
V-MAANVI...
SHE IGNORE HIM..
HE WAS ALREADY ANGRY ON HIMSELF AND ALSO DRUNKED..HE COME IN FRONT OF HER..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
Plz dear...continue soon...it's really a very nice update...and precap sounds really interesting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Cont soon dear...waiting for virman face off
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
i feel bad for manvi yr...jaldi milavo our virman ko
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART-8
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Virat stood behind the pillor and saw her crying..he felt more guilty..maanvi hugged her more tightly..vanshika cresing her hairs..
Va-nahi beta..bas..main samajti hu ki tum kya maheshus kar rahi ho..lekin don't worry pinky ji nahi hai to kya hua main huna..
Maanvi broked the hugged..looked towards sky..
M-with sobbing-vinu maa Maine life kabhi failure nahi dekha..god ne mujhe ek bahot pyar karle vale mumma papa diye..aur uske baad mujhe aap k rup me dusri maa mili..R K uncle k rup me ek dost aur viren k rup me ek best friend..meri life ek fairy tale ki tarah thi..aur main khud ko world ki Luckeyst girl manti thi..lekin phir achanak ye fairy tale Surprising story me change ho gai..tears continuesly sliped from her eyes..virat heared all this..
M-she wipe her tears-surprise k baad surprise..pahele achanak dady ka mujhe shadi k liye force karna..phir unka cancer..phir viren se shadi ka fesla..apne shadi k mandap me kisi dusre achnabi se shadi..vinu maa Maine apni fairy tale me kabhi kisi prince ki wish nahi ki..mujhe to bas mujh jaisa partner chahiye tha..jo life spend karne me nahi life injoy karne me mane..life ko smile se wel come kare..even in tough time..Jo family man ho..meri care kare..mujhe samje..aur meri jid puri kare..with this both maanvi and va smiled..
Maanvi wiped her tears and took deep breath..turned towards her and hold her with solder..
M-but don't worry..main har nahi maanne vali..akhir papa ki sher puttar hu..maa ki jhalli..RK ki rockstar..viren ki notanki..aur apki choclet cake..ase thodi na melt ho jayegi..apni life vapish track pe laungi..smiled..
Vanshika smiled and hugged her..
Va-i know..my choclet cake can do any thing..now lts very late plz jake soa jao..plased her palm on her cheek..maanvi smiled..
M-ji..aap chaliye..woh room me pani nahi hai aur aap to jante ho ki mujhe kabhi bhi raat ko pyas lag jati hai..
Vanshika nodded-good night..
M-smile-good night..
Vanshika turned towards hall and walked towards her room..virat saw her walked towards him..she abt to passed from him when he hide himself in dark..other side of pillor..he saw vanshika left from there..he come out and looked for maanvi..but she was not there..he looks for her towards kitchen..he saw her walked towards kitchen..he walked towards her..
Maanvi entered in kitchen..she is still thinking abt todays incident and new twist of her life..she bring water bottle from refrigerator..she turned back and abt to steped but she stopped when she saw virat in front of her..the lights already off only deem light comes there..he try to read her expression..he steped towards her and abt to opened his mouth to say but maanvi looked away and walked away..virat come in front of her..he already drunk..
V-woh..mujhe tumse kuch..
Maanvi didn't gave him chance to speak..she turned to other side and start walking..virat get irritate..he already angry on his self for his mistake..he turned and hold her hand by wrist..
V-maanvi plz..
Maanvi turned and pulled his hold away from her hand..virat can saw anger in action..she calm down her temper and turned..she abt to come out from kitchen door but virat again hold her hand and pulled her towards him with spin..she spin around and come in front of him..
V-mujhe baat karni hai..he straightly said..
She looked away..virat walked towards her..she stepped back..after few steps her back hited with wall..she look behind..she saw door just near to her right side..she try to move out..but he plased his left hand on door..maanvi try to moved to other side but again her way blocked with his hand..now both stood in middle of door..not properly in nor out..maanvi gave him angry look..virat saw one flash of moon light come on her face from balcony..her face shine in white light..they stood in same position for few minutes..after it maanvi broked the silent..
M-leave me..
Virat come in reality..
V-first hear me..
M-no..mujhe kuch nahi sunna..angrily
v-lekin mujhe kahena hai..
She looked away..virat now loose his temper..
M-tum mujhe majboor nahi kar sakte ki main tumse baat karu..
He come close to her..she sensed something..
M-surprisely-ur drunk..i hate drunken people..
V-i also..now pls let me speak..
M-i m not intrested..just..
He come to more close to her..
V-i m sorry..
She lost her words..
V-main janta hu ye kafi nahi hai..Maine tumhe ek galat person samjha Jo apne fayade k liye meri sister k pyar ko chhin na chahti thi..mujhe laga tumhare liye shadi koi badi baat nahi hogi..jaise mere liye..main bas tumhe lesion dena chahta tha..but main galat tha..tum Asi bilkul nahi ho..aaj shayad main jaise bahar hu to tumhari vajehse aur jeevika ko apna pyar vapis mila tumhari vajehse..Maine tumhe kya kuch nahi sunaya..phir bhi tumne humari help ki..i m sorry for every thing..tum janti ho virat vadhera ne aaj tak kisi ko sorry nahi bolo..sirf tumhe bol raha hu..
He loose his controll on him..his eyes become heavy due to drink..
Maanvi just staring at him..
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