Virmaan :U have to come back-its destiny not mistake: 1 : part-48+note - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART-10
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VIRAT COME IN HALL AND SAW ALL ARE WAITING FOR HIM..HE LOOKS FOR MAANVI BUT SHE WAS NOT THERE..DABBU COME NEAR TO HIM AND TOLD HIM THAT MAANVI DIDN'T COME WITH THEM..SHE HAS SOME WORK SO SHE LEFT JUST 5 MINITS BEFORE U COME..HE FELT SAD..AFTER IT ALL WENT TO SIDHDHIVINAYAK MANDIR THEN THEY TAKE LUNCH IN NICE RESTORANT..IN WHOLE JOURNEY VIRAT THOUGHT ABT MAANVI..VIREN NOTICED HIM..THEY REACHED AT AIRPORT DIRECTLY..VIRENS PARENTS GAVE BLESSING TO JEEVIKA AND LEFT TO GAVE SOME SPACE TO THEM..HERE JEEVIKA WANT TO MEET MAANVI BEFORE THEY LEAVE..SHE CALLED HER AND SHE RPL THAT SHE WAS ON THEY WAY..
THEY WAITED FOR HER IN AIRPORT..
J-VIREN MUJHE JANE SE PAHELE EK BAAR MAANVI SE MILNA THA..SHE SAID SADLY..
-AUR MUJHE..A VOICE COME OUT FROM HER BACK..ALL TURNED TOWARDS DIRECTION..ITS MAANVI STOOD WITH SMILE..SHE COME NEAR TO THEM..
M-MUJHE BHI TO MILNA THA..SHE SMILED..
JEEVIKA SMILED AND HUGGED HER..
J-THANKS..I MISS U..AND BROKED THE HUG
M-ME 2..AUR DUBARA THANKS KABHI MAT BOLNA..AUR HA YE TUMHARE LIYE..
SHE GAVE HER GIFT..
J-YE KYA HAI?
M-WOH..TUMHARE LIYE MERI TARAF SE..AB PLZ MANA MAT KARNA..WAISE BHI MAINE VIREN SE KAFI GIFT LIYE HAI..AUR ISKA RETURN GIFT BHI USISE LE LUNGI..AND BOTH LAUGHED..
J-THANKS..OPS..SORRY..AB SE NAHI KAHUNGI..
SHE TURNED AND GAVE HER GIFT TO VIRAT..
J-VIRAT MAIN WASHROOM HO K AATI HU..SHE LEFT..
VIRAT LOOKED AT MAANVI WHO TOTALLY IGNORE HIM..HE WALKED TOWARDS HER..HE ABT TO SAY SOMETHING WHEN SHE TURNED AND WALKED TOWARDS WASHROOM..
M-VIREN MAIN BHI ABHI ATI HU..SHE ALSO LEFT..
DABBU COME NEAR TO VIRAT..VIREN ALSO..
VN-VIRAT..KYA HUA HAI?
V-CONFUSING-KYA KYA?
VN-TUM JANTE HO MAIN KYA PUCH RAHA HU..TUMHARE AUR MAANVI K BICH HUA HAI RIGHT?
VIRAT GET SURPRISE..
V-FUMBLING-WOH..MAANVI..I MEAN MAIN SORRY..
VN-DEKHO VIRAT TUM ACHCHE SE JANTE HO KI JO TUMNE MAANVI K SAATH KIYA USKE BAAD MAIN TUMHE PASAND NAHI KARTA..LEKIN MAANVI NE AAJ SUBAH HI MUJHE BATAYA KI TUMNE USSE MAAFI MANGLI HAI..
VIRAT SCARED AFTER HEARING THIS..WHAT IF SHE TOLD HIM EVERYTHING ABT LAST NIGHT..
V-VIREN WOH MAIN..
VN-MAIN JANTA HU KI TUM YE SHADI KO NAHI MAANTE AUR SHAYAD MAANVI BHI KABHI IS RISTE K BARE ME NAHI SOCHEGI..SO PLZ BAAR BAAR USKE SAMNE ANE KI JARURAT NAHI HAI..MAIN NAHI CHAHTA KI TUMHARI WAJEHSE USE DUBARA CHOT PAHOCHE..I HOPE U UNDERSTAND..
VIRAT TAKE DEEP BREATH..FEWW..MAANVI NE KUCH NAHI KAHA..HE MUMBLING..
VN-KUCH KAHA TUMNE?
V-NAHI KUCH NAHI..
JUST THEN JEEVIKA AND MAANVI COME..VIREN WALKED TOWARDS THEM..VIRAT AND DABBU SAW THEM TALKING AND LAUGHING..
D-PARJAI JI MUSKUTATE HUA BADI SONI LAGTI HAI..NAI..HE SMILED..
VIRAT LOOKED AT HIM WITH SURPRISELY..
V-DABBU..
DABBU LOOKED AT HIM..
D-OYE TERI..MUH SE NIKAL GAYA YAAR..MAIN TO BHOOL HI GAYA THA KI TU TO ILIAENA SE PYAR KARTA HAI..
VIRAT LOOKED AT HIM WITH BIG SURPRISELY..
V-ILIAENA ?..THEN HE LOOKED AT MAANVI..TILL TO NOW..AFTER HE COMES TO INDIA AFTER HIS TRIP HE TOTALLY FORGOT ABT HOW..SPECIALY AFTER MAANVI COME IN HIS LIFE..
D-VIRAT..VIRAT..KYA HUA?..HE SHOOKED HIM..
V-HA..
D-KAHA KHO GAYA?
V-KAHI NAHI..
JUST THEN THEY HEARED ANNOUNCEMENT ABT THEIR FLIGHT..THEY MET WITH EACHOTHER BEFORE LEAVE EXCEPT VIRAT AND MAANVI..VIRAT WANT TO APOLOGIES BUT SHE EVEN NOT LOOKED AT HIM..THEY SAYS GOOD BYE TO EACHOTHER AND BOTH JEEVIKA AND VIRAT LEFT..
VIREN AND MAANVI WALKED OUT FROM AIRPORT..DABBU FOLLOW THEM..
NEAR PARKING..
VN-MAANVI TUM YAHA KIS ME AAI?
M-WOH TAXI ME..
VN-ACHCHA..ACTUALLY MERI EK BAHOT IMPORTANT MEETING HAI TO MAIN TUMHE GHAR NAHI CHHOD PAUNGA TO TUM JAOGI KAISE?
M-KOI BAAT NAHI MAIN MANAGE KARLUNGI..
VN-I U SURE?
MAANVI NODDED..VIREN SMILE AND NODDED WITH SAY BYE..
MAANVI ABT TO GO WHEN DABBU STOP HER..
D-WOH..AGAR AAP KO KOI PROBLEM NA HO TO MAIN LEFT DE SAKTA HU AUR MUJHE RASTA BHI YAAD HAI..
M-NO THANKS..I WILL MANAGE..
D-JI WOH TO MENU PATA HAI..U CAN MANAGE EVERYTHING..LEKIN MUJHE AAPKI HELP KARKE KHUSHI HOGI PLS..
M-NO..SHE SAID AND WALKED AWAY..SUDDENLY SHE HEARED HIM SHOUTING..SHE TURNED AND SAW HIM ACT LIKE MAD..
D-HOY..PLZ PARJAI JI..MUJHE ASE PUNISH NA KARO JI..PARJAI JI..I M SORRY JI..PLZ..
SHE LOOKED AROUND ALL LOOKED AT THEM..SHE COME NEAR TO HIM..
M-STOP IT..
HE STOPPED
D-TO AAP CHAL RAHE HO BHAODI?
M- GAVE UP LOOK-OKEY..NOW PLZ..STOP THIS..
HE SMILED AND MAKE HER WALKED TOWARDS CAR..BOTH SIT IN CAR AND HE START DRIVING..
IN CAR-
MAANVI LOOKED IN FRONT OF CAR..
DABBU SMILED LITTLE AND TRY TO BREAK THE SILENCE..
D-I M SORRY..WOH DRAME K LIYE..
M-ITS OKEY..SHE SMILE..
HE GOT HAPPY..
D-TO HUM DOST BAN SAKTE HAI?
SHE LOOKED AT HIM WITH RAISING HER EYEBROWS..
D-MAIN ITNA BHI BURA NAHI HU..HE MAKE PUPPY FACE..
MAANVI AGAIN SMILE..
M-I KNOW..VARANA KON APNE FRIEND K LIYE EK POLICE OFFICER KI FAMILY SE PANGA LE..
HE SMILED AND RAISED HIS HAND..
D-TO FRIENDS..?
SHE ACCEPT IT..AND SMILED WITH NODDING..
AGAIN DABBU AGAIN CONCENTRA ON ROAD..SUDDENLY MAANVI SHOUTED..
M-ICE CREAM..
HE PUSSED THE BREAK..
D-K HUA?
M-TUM MERE NAYE DOST HO RIGHT?TO TUMHE MUJHE ICE CREM KHILANI BANTI HAI TO CHALO AUR CAR SIDE ME PARK KARO...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PRECAP...
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MAANVI AND DABBU CONVO DURING ICE-CREM PARTY...
MAANVI KNOW MORE ABT VIRAT..AND DABBU KNOW ABT HER...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
Loved the update.Love her.He should try hard for her to forgive him.Love the way the story flows.Awesome update and precap.

P.S:Advance new year wishes to u and ur family and friends..Have a great year ahead.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
hey that was sweet and nice update
Nice precap
Waiting 4 ur next part
Happy New Year
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
Sorry 4 not commenting before, but I have been following the story since the start!!
Awesome update!!
Love how the story is progressing!!
Can't wait 4 the next update!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
Awesome update ⭐️.. Totally loved it.. I really liked Manvi's attitude towards Virat.. She should not forgive him that easily... Dabbu is cute.. Loved it when he called Manvi 'parjai ji' 😆.. Precap is really good.. Will be waiting for the next part..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
It was Awesome update...continue soon
Niaksharma thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: preetipc

Loved the update.Love her.He should try hard for her to forgive him.Love the way the story flows.Awesome update and precap.


P.S:Advance new year wishes to u and ur family and friends..Have a great year ahead.


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thanks...
And u 2...happy new year...
Niaksharma thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: jannat89

hey that was sweet and nice update
Nice precap
Waiting 4 ur next part
Happy New Year


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thanks...
Same 2 u...
Niaksharma thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Krazzy4u786

Sorry 4 not commenting before, but I have been following the story since the start!!
Awesome update!!
Love how the story is progressing!!
Can't wait 4 the next update!!


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its okey...
Thanks for comment...

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