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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb start...
continue soon n thanks for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
awesome update continue soon pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
hey i love ur concept dear... pls continue soon...
will wait for a pm from u...
sent u a buddy request as well...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
thank u all for liking it...next part coming up soon (today itself 😊 )
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Posted: 12 years ago
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m waiting cz that was superb nd hope the next will be more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Jeevika had the habit of writing dairy ...and that night too she sat down to write it…she mentioned about her experience and in that highlighted her confrontation with Viren …but surprisingly she wrote much in his favor and she since the time had returned home was longing to be back to college and meet Viren….she herself did not knew what happened to her…

Even Viren had something going on in his mind and he was feeling that there was something missing there…but without much thought to all this he slept

The next day the both with a new passion..which they couldn't realize but it prevailed…

Jeevika was finding herself a taxi while Viren passed by and asked her if he could drop her…though she hesitated, she sat down in his red audi and went to the college…..there was silence in the car …which both of the were hating…they were willing to talk but no one wanted to take the first step

And then finally the cool dude gathered courage and spoke up.. . "yaar tumhe seriously in kapdoon mein ajeeb nahi lagta…I mean they are so old fashioned…" .Jeevika hearing this gave him a stern look but kept quiet and again Viren seeing her reaction spoke "please mere baat ka galat matlab maat nikaloo..mein bas yeh keh raho hoon ki yeh London hai or yahaan aise kapde koi nahi pehenta..main toh sirf tumhe advise kar raho hoon …leene ho toh lo !! varna…" and jeevika responded to this by saying "India mein free advises milte hain ..suna tha par yahaan bhi…oh akhir tum Indian he toh there..😛"

Viren didn't like her calling him an Indian…and said "hey !mind it …or " and she in a joking tone said "or… " and they reached the college…as Jeevika got off the car Viren said "hey tum unte bhi buri nahi ho..except tumhe kapde pehnna nahi atta.."and to this Jeevika was like haan..look at his guts and he continued"mujhse dosti karoge …mere sath rahogi toh shayyad tumhara status thora upar ho jaye..sooch lo ..tumhare hi bhalai hai!!! " Jeevika stood there with folded arms making weird expressions and when he stopped she said "ho gaya tumhara..ab main jaoon..bahut pak rahi hoon..aur haan mujhe apna status aur neche karne ka koi shoonk nahi hai "and she was interrupted by a voice from behind…. which surprised VIRIKA

guys not a big update and this is just a part of Virika's khatti meethi nok -jhok...i don't know if you would like it...but plzz tell me how was it

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Posted: 12 years ago
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guys it gets really tough PM every 1 indiviually...plzz Buddy me if you want PM's ...
thank you
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome...
continue soon n thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh this is going to be surely one of my favourite stories,
sounds interesting,
specially the little update you gave!
please pm me, sent you a budyy request :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
loved it!!
thanks for the pm
continue soon!

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