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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww wht a emotional update .again thhis update make me emotional yr.i hope in nxt part truth reveals and der is happy moment for our virika.thanks for the pms.continue very soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved the update

It was fabulous

Really hope Virika's misunderstanding finishes soon

Aww Viren was really harsh to Jeevika

Can't wait for the next update

Thanks for the pm please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
continueee continueee n continueee veryyy soonn... eager to read the next update...sooo intenseee and heavy emotional updateee...


hope thngs get sorted out betwn virika ssoonnn...

thnku so muchhh
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
both viren n jeevika r hurt by each other behavior n hope all misunderstanding to b cleared


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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update now we will find out the truth
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update...
Hope virika reunite soon...
Cant see virika in dis situation...
Update asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
i just read all parts in one go trishi seems cute
i love it so far
do pm me wen u update
it has lots of drama in it lolzz
cant wait for the next udate
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cutevirika

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Oh neetu took my place...its k...😉
Btw i asked u for a long update as a treat nishu...u remember????😉
Ok i'll leave u this time...😈
Cuming to the update...wat do u want me to say????
U r a fab writer n u portray the characters so well👏
The update was perfect...i luvd it ❤️
Cont soon n thnx for the PM😃

thank you for the appreciation...
i have the update written..i tried keeping my promise...but IF is acting drunk...not able to post more
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow superb story story nishu
loved it
nicely written n expressed
both of them is hurted😭
hope soon everything will be ok
bdw u r a nice writer
I didn't knew that u write story also
keep it up😊
continue soon
eagerly waiting😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Next update...its Virikalicious...ive probably been writing too much of sad ones..but here u go..enjoy!!!

PART 13

Recap : FLASHBACK!


The day Viren proposed to her was the best day for the two of them…they spent the entire day together enjoying the scenery..in each others arms ..cuddling each other ..and promising each other to be Together forever and ever….

The very next day..they went up to their families spilling their beans …their family readily agreed to this..though they already guessed the two were upto something..they showered them with their blessings and got onto 'THE WEDDING PREPARATIONS'

This Big news wasn't hidden from their Besties Virat and Maanvi..they seemed to be happy for their friends..and that's where it started..They just SEEMED to be happy..even though they had fallen for each other they had there corners reserved for Jeevika n Viren resp. …or actually Virmaan to them was a corner of their heart and the rest were with Viren n Jeevika….

It was Virika's last night together before the wedding ceremonies began…and Viren planned to make it special…he took Jeevika out for a candle light dinner in her favorite Chinese restaurant ..with a dessert treat of her favorite doughnuts…it was all perfect..they two were together..all alone..Just the Two of them..which was all they wanted …

And finishing up with treating her food..Viren took her an unknown place..he had blind folded her to make the surprise even more suprising 😉

As they reached the place Viren helped Jeevika out of the car and took her to a door to somewhere…he then handed her a small case with key inside ..she opened it..feeling what it was..

She called out viren and asked her what was it ..but no reply..she called 'Viren' two three times..but didn't get anything back..she began to panic..where did he go…and turned to look around still blindfolded…when a pair of hands went through her waist catching hold of her slim body..she felt comforted..it was Him..he pulled her close to her…they were really close now with no space between them…and then Viren opened her blindfold and told her to use the key to open the door…she couldn't make out anything and opened her mouth to inquire what was he upto..

She just took the keys and opened the door to find a well furnished house..pretty much similar to the dream house Jeevika described to Viren..wising to own it some day…

She had so much to ask…and so did she..showered him with her happily shocked expressions and questions asking whose home was it , why were they here, how come it resemble her dream house.. when he went closer to her…placed his finger on soft pink lips and said 'Shhh' …

They were very close and lost in each others eyes…a really solid eyelock and was a sudden moment when He forced his lips onto her and began kissing her passionately…she initially didn't get what just happened but enjoyed the touch.. the taste and eventually gave in..with a little more passion..his hands went around her waist and her arms around his neck …they were all lost…and didn't wish to break the kiss…until they became breathless…

As they withdrew from each other…maintaining the closeness…Viren spoke up..Jeevika THIS is our future house…just the way you wanted…I wanted to show you this place before we get busy with the wedding and make this day special for you…so tell me ..do you like it??

Jeevika was dumbstruck…Viren was so Perfect..he definitely made her day special…she had wet eyes and without saying a word just pressed her lips onto his…he got his answer …

They definitely had some great ways of surprising each other….

Viren wasn't surprised by her move because this wasn't the first time she opened up not blushing to all red and treated him..earlier two three times too…she gave him those little doses of love and he certainly loved this….

This was probably the most passionate kisses they ever shared….it seemed like never ending…

As they came out of the kiss…Viren lifted Jeevika in his arms and toured her through the stairs to the bedroom…It was all lit up with candles and the bed was covered with rose petals…Viren probably knew this would happen…afterall he knew her in and out….he was pretty agile at guessing her reactions …

She didn't really notice the decorations as she was lost in her Man's eyes…deep black ..full of love for her….but as Viren closed the door and placed her on the bed…she began noticing it and it all brought the love out of her even more…

Viren could see her harnessing seeing all this and without wasting a moment got over her and began kissing her passionately…she responded with equal desire giving him a sign to continue….

And he made his way to her back unzipping her dress and sending shivers down the spine…this made her hold onto him even more tightly…Viren pulled up the sheets and the spent the entire night making love …lost in each other…..❤️


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