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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
Loving it you are a talented writerr!! continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
amazzzinggg how do you come up with these ideas loved it... next time longer chapter plzzz because i'm loving it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
I love this storyy and it's only the 2nd chapter loved it..and yeahh it's funny to see virman always fighting lol keep on writing and update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Chapter [3]


I snapped my head up when I heard the door bell. Who can it be when it's so
late already?

I dragged myself towards the door, taking my own sweet time. My jaw dropped
open when I found out that it was the pizza delivery man.

Pizza? Who on earth would order pizza, at This hour?! It's five minutes to
midnight by the way.

''Thanks.''

I looked behind me in surprise. I should have known. This guy is abnormal -
Virat.

''Are you crazy? Eating pizza NOW?!'' I stared at him in disbelief.

''Wanna join me?'' he ignored my outburst and grinned at me.

''No way I'm going to join you, weirdo.'' I declared and walked towards my room.

And the next minute I know, I was slunged over his shoulder. Argh.

I kicked and squirmed, beating his hard warm back in annoyance. This guy
really have muscles everywhere.

He placed his hand on my butt to put me in lace before putting me down on his
bed, in front of his television.

''Movie?'' he asked and raised his eyebrows with mischievous smile on his
face.

I frowned and stared at him as though he's mad or something. He must he
kidding me right?

''Silence means consent then.'' he smirked and put in the CD.

''Wait, what are we watching?'' I enquired curiously. I got a bad feeling about
this.

''Paranormal Activity.'' he replied casually.

''What?! No!'' I objected immediately.

''Scared huh, babe?'' he teased playfully.

''No way''

''Seemed that way to me.''

''Bring it on.''


~*~

''Oh my god... oh my god! He's coming again!'' I stated feeling goosebumps
everywhere on my skin as I chewed nervously on my fingernail.

And I screamed. Another victim died again. omg omg..

Virat laughed, clutching his stomach. Looking like he is going to roll on the
floor laughing his head off any moment

I shot him a death glare and he stopped laughing, but I could see the side of his
cheek twiching. He was holding his laughter.

I smacked his arm and huffed. I knew I shouldn't have challenged Virat...Now
I swear I'm so going to have nightmares tonight.

''Stop laughing! It's not funny!'' I pouted and stood up.

''Your face- Hahahaha! Epic much?'' he continue, laughing.

Argh... I let out a frustrated cry and went back to my room, which I regretted
almost immediately. What if the ghost is in my room, waiting to get me like how
he got the poor girl in the movie?

I looked around nervously and tucked a strand of hair behind my ear. I'm being
so paranoid now! I really shouldn't have watched that movie...

At the corner of my eye, I saw a flash of light. is that a lightning-

And then the thunder came. I yelped and ran out of my room towards Virat's

I barged into his room and crashed into his hard abs.

Te thunder striked, and I literally jumped.

Virat looked at me amusedly. ''It's just a thunder.''

''That ghost is coming to get me!'' I sobbed in terror.

''It's just a movie, it's not real you know.'' he chuckled and carry me to his bed
holding onto me so gently as if I am fragile and might break anytime.

I nodded and buried my head in his chest. He half smiled and stroked me to
bed, still hoding onto me.

His body radiated heat and it instantly warmed me up.
I snuggled into him and closed my eyes slowly.

~*~

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Okay, I'm off to bed now. *Yawn* Goodnight people! Corrction: Good morning!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
yay...i m first...second update in one day...wow amazing...oh my god..i was laughing throughout the update...This guyreally have muscles everywhere...very funny ha...i really cant figure it out..what virat is doing and all that but i loved it...thanks for the fast update...yay..i commented without ur pm...take care and get some sleep jess(its ur name na)...
Edited by madhavichowdary - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
nice update
thanks for pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
omg 3rd part...loved it loved it loved it.. it's the best. Already alot happening on ch.3..that is sweet. i think he likes her hmmm..can't wait
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
u got spark!

actuallyI never saw it but by this story it must be scary..
continue soon
Edited by riastar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
awesome update
loved their fights
waiting 4 next part
thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Omg I saw this know like W*F is wrong with me this I'd say in your word is epic 😃, great story line amazing title 😉 and please update soon and pm me ill add you to my buddy list
Inayah 🤓

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