VIRMAN ff:*Journey of life*link of 2nd thread pg 1 - Page 108

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

Rres
unres..
oye dekh jaldi unres karrahi hun 😆 shukar hai😆
i loved this update ...it was just awesome...👏👏 thanks
tujhe na sabko bhagane ka bada shauk hai ...jab dekh manvi ko bhagati rehti hai 😆 ab kya kare main hoon hi aisi😳
and the very emotional virman part was just soo amazing full of love and care..and jab virat ne khudki kasam di aur kaha rukne ko woh ruk gayi tht was woww😊
then their convo was sooo emotional ...
and then raj ki entry and full of drama...
manvi taking tht bullet on her to protect her love kuch ziada hi dramatic nai hogaya ...😉 par i loved it 😊 ab main khud ek dramebaaz hoon toh itna toh chalta hai na😳
and yeh kyaa manvi marni nai chahiye okkk nai toh mein nai padhungi tera FF ok😡 haww dhamki😲
and the dream part was soo adorable the promise
update was just amazing ...very well written 👍🏼 thank u so much and main jaldi update dene ki try karungi😳
and next part jaldi jaldi ok 😃

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

Res 😛
Unres 😈 😆

Shivi bon kya mast long update tha re.. Love you for that 🤗
Par yeh kya itna emotinal update 😭😭.. Shocking update Shivi!! 😲😲 Loved the beginning.. Jeevika was worried and hurt and Viren tried to console her.. But Mannu was equally hurt .. But she stopped running when Virat gave her his oath.. Awww 😳.. Yeh huyi na best wifey wali baat 😉 😃.. Manvi's break down and Virat's care and concern for her were very well portrayed 👏👏👏.. Loved the way Virat pacified her and made her understand everything.. And their hug!!! It was so magical .. Loved it especially the way Manvi hugged him as if she could sense something was going to happen to them.. I hate that Raj 😡.. He again touched her and he tried to kill Virat!! 😲 😡😡 But Manvi saved him and sacrificed herself.. True love ❤️.. Loved Virat's reaction on seeing her covered in blood .. Flashback part was superb ⭐️.. Loved this line very much - " he knew that it had become her habbit now to feel and listen his heart beats b'coz according to her she felt alive whenever she hear his heart beats ❤️".. Very nice song selection Shivi.. I love that song 😃.. Vmom, Arjun. Virika, Arohi, everyone's reaction is beautifully written 👏👏.. Ending was so so emotional.. Manvi's words to Virat, Virika and Angel are very well written 👍🏼.. It was a painful yet beautiful moment.. Manvi is no more!! 😲 Please aisa mat kar.. She can't die .. Bring her back!! 😈 Amazing update Shivi.. Just superb .. Eagerly waiting for the next part now.. Thank you for the pm.. Congratulations for the next thread in advance 😃 🥳!! Take care 🤗 ❤️

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

Update kab karegi ??

Originally posted by: Imsecondlife

Shiviii, bohot late ho gayi comment karne mein yaar,sholly accept kar le plz.😭. ok sorry accepted😳
This part was just truly awesome⭐️.thank u
after reading d last updt,i guessed Raj will defo do sth to harm virman.but aisa kuch toh sapne mein bhi nehi socha tha.!! sochna chahiye tha na😳
sooo many mixed emotions playing on ,n d way u portrayed dem was just flawless.
itna lamba updt.dil khush ho gaya yaar.😊 aur tune mera dil khush kar diya comment karke😃
I just luved v mom's concerns .soo well defined.
Hayee! d virman scene n d emotions,after reading dat part tears were glistening in ma eyes ( God!! y m i soo emotional !! ) uff hum girls ki yahi to problem hai😳
itne twists n turns in 1 updt !! kya kar rahi hai yaar,jaan le legi kya? na re main khuni thodi na hoon
d flashback n den d hospital scene- i just read dem holding ma breath!! n i literally cried dis tym😭 (God!!Disha, stop being so emotional! ) hahahaha
ye kya kar dia tune Shivi? kitne galat tym pe rok dia, main toh mar jaungi 🤢
meri mannu ko kuch hua na,toh chodungi nehi tujhko.kuch bhi kar ,but usko thik kar de. sochna padega😳

Luv u re.🤗love you too re🤗

Originally posted by: yaminnthida

I m late😭😭...hamesha hotii hoon..😭😭 chalta hai re

Shivi itnaa lamba update...thank u so much...🤗 thank u kisko bola re
Kya damakedaar update hai yaar...👏👏👏...loved every bit of it...⭐️⭐️⭐️...kya style hai teraa...bilkul filmy.kya kare ab main hoon hi itni filmi🤣..i could imagine everything infront of my eyes...😛...main toh puraa kho gayii update maain...sach main...awesome awesome awesome...👍🏼no thanks😳...firstly the virman scene where virat console manvi...aah...kya scene tha...waah😃...aargh...raj😡😡...uskii toh main sach main khoon pii jao gii...😡...hero ne kya dhishum dhishum kiyaa...mannu...😭😭...such a heart touching n emotional scene.😭😭...n the hopital scene.😭😭 the flashback...such a heart wrenching 😭...tum hi ho...(meraa bhi fav hai...hi 5 hi10)...perfect song❤️...yeh kyaa😲😲...last part😭😭...

doctor: I AM SORRY SHE IS NO MORE hawww😲

😭😭...mannu ko wapas laa shivi...😭😭...tune toh mujhe emotional kardiyaa😭😭
sach main superb update ...👏👏...looking forward for next ...will be eagerly waiting...continue soon if possible...thank u so much for the pm shivi🤗...

page 146...only 4 pages to go...phir dusraa thread...😃.congratulations shivi..🥳🥳🥳



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