VIRMAN ff:*Journey of life*link of 2nd thread pg 1 - Page 107

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

superb update... every line was drenched with so much emotions!!!... total hit hai boss!!!... loved th way manvi took th bullet which was meant to hit virat, tht was th most superb scene in this whole ff... manvis last lines nd virats shattering nd traumatized condition are super se uper yaar, so painful... i hope virat apne heart-beat ke medicine se manviki heart-beat firse chalu karde... crossing fingers... cont soon nd thnks fr th pm...

Originally posted by: Artii159

Shivali m so goin 2 kill u...U kill Maanvi...hawww no...u better bring her bck 2 lyf...😭meli Mannu ko kuch mat hone dena plijjj...Ok nw da update...Yaar hamesha kehti hun Awesome tha...it was beyond Awesome yaar...ech n evry part was juz mind blowing..da way Viraat was consoling her...da way she trust him...dat 2 blindl...Arghhh RAJ...😡 m so goin 2 kill him,,,ek baar mil jao bas mujhr Raj...tumhe earth se bahar nhi nikal diya toh mera naam nahi...Urghhh😡 hadh hai yaar...he even shot Mannu..ufff...Viraat shud've punched him so hard...Awww..dat was so sad..poor Viraat he luvs her beyond nething...Shivali dn't kill Mannu na plzzz...Maanvi's words were so , da way she was talking 2 Angel..awww...plz plz plz Shivali, mat maaro Maanvi ko...plzzz...aur haan, jaldi se update de do...m waiting...plzz..thnks 4 da update n 4 da pm..😊

Originally posted by: Sweety_cool95

It was superb..read dis ff for d first time...loved it sooo very much...super duper fab...fantastic update..it was o emotional nd sad...one thing plz don't kill manvi..save her..and plz pm me whenever u update...plz yaad se kar dena pm..can't wait for next update..continue soon...fab...plzzz do pm mee

Originally posted by: sonu0111

Sorry for not commenting for last two updates because of exams par patha nahi itna jor ka jatka lage ga...maanvi on death bed😭

Par dono updates bohot acha the...

finally arohi aur maanvi ka jagda khatam...

liked choti arohi thing...liked both arohi and princess...

Liked arjun,arohi and virman conversation very well written...

Finally maanvi came to know about her sister and her feelings are well written so heart touching...

Because of that raj maanvi on death bed ...hate him...

Total hospital scene was emotionally and beautifully written...

The way you showed virat and jeevika's pain was awesome...

Liked maanvi's emotional talk with family members and especially with angel was literally brought tears...

Dont know what going to happen from now...waiting eagerly...

Thank you for pm.

Takecare. Congrates for second thread in advance

Originally posted by: Ammu_Darling

Hai dear,
i am crying badly.
I cant cntrol, i'm still crying.
Crying crying and crying.
;-( ;-( ;-( ;-(
plz dn't kill manvi.
Plz bring her back.
Really a heart touching update.
Hats off.
No more words.
Now also i'm crying.
Thanku 4 this brilliant update.
Take care. . .

Originally posted by: fatima06

res 😃UNRES 😛

di m fast this tym😃 see last tym mery late hone pe ap gussa nahi hue the but es bar jaldi unres karne pe ap khush tou zrur hongi...haina na 😊haan re main bahot khush hoon ke tune iss baar jaldi unres kar diya😳

ufff again enna bara update..phew...me tou parh parh k thak gaye😳sholly

haw jeevika enna crying...meko b rona aying 😒 i loved vmom in tthis update 😊her emotions were portrayed amazingly...her conern for her DIL, her son,daughter...awesome update di 👏thank u chipkali😊

virman scene was fab...hayyeee loved 2nd hug scene wala part 🤣 me toh rofling karun ge blush thore na 🤣

i knew it raj ke entry hogi but apne meko nahi btaya na haw but bechari manvi OT me pohnch gaye in the end 😒 raj ki toh 😡😡😡

haw edher manvi agree hui jeevika ko ek chance deny keliye aur udher aapne uski death show kar di 😒😭 '

flashback part was awesome n emotional too di...well written 👏

everyone is concerned about manvi...arohi,angel,jeevika,viren,virat toh waise he top pe hai 😆

but meko nxt update super fast chahiye di...but i know ap manvi ko maro ge nahi, zinda toh hona he pare ga 😳😳

love you enna sara di 🤗love you too enna sara🤗

keep rocking di 👍🏼

continue soon di 😊thank u and i'll cont soon😊

Originally posted by: Natasha137

So shivu as you know I'm 2nd technically congrates nuts😊

thank God I'm not late in this update

This update is such a breathtaking update thank u so much😊

I felt goosebumps all over my body reading it...

Manvi and jeevika are sister..Omg!

Manvi went out of the house...

And Loved Virman moment!😉

Their dialogues and the way you described everything!

Raj..the bloody man gosh i really want to kill him..will you accompany me shivu?

😳

Manvi got the shot...Omg!

Virat I really feel bad for him!

Manvi and Virat talk in Icu! superb you carried their convo and displayed the emotions fantastically!

Manvi is happy with jeevika..happy!😃

But the ending made me feel so bad and curious.

I hope nothing happens to manvi!

Amazing update bf !😉 thanks a lot gf😉

You are an amazing writer..!

thanks for lamba wala update

Continue soon! thank u again and i'll cont soon😊

Originally posted by: virmanfan013

haww artii plz don't kill me yaar abhi toh main choti bachii hoon aur kyu mere woh ji ko shadi se pehle hi widhwa banana chati ho🤣

mannu kuch karna hai ya nahi iske bare mein toh maine abhi socha hi nahi😳 koi baat nahi main jaldi se update karungi

thanks for liking it😊😊