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Posted: 12 years ago
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chapter 3:I just want to clear on thing that in this ss jeevika didnt donate her bone-marrow to manvi and she has some problem and due to that she cant get pregnant
It was morning and every one was waiting for manvi and virat to come down for the arti.
virat woke up and saw manvi next to him
virat:manvi utho baby its 7:50
manvi woke up with a jerk
manvi:kya 7:50
virat:manvi be careful atleast for our baby
manvi blushed and remembered that she is going to be a mother
both of them got ready and went down
manvi was wearing a pink saree and virat was wearing a pink t-shirt and blue jeans
they both did pooja and took blessing
swamini:manvi beta tum aram se bheto aur haan abhi humari cousin aarahi hain mona america se tau tum abhi virat ke saath jaa rahi ho
manvi:nahi sirf virat jayiga
virat:par manvi tumhara checkup karwana hain
manvi:virat tum reports le aao aur mujhey chocolate kahane ka man kar raha hain tum wo bhi le ana
virat:jo hukum boss
virat went and now the family had stated to decorate the house
viren called virat and told him to go to the office and meet a client
virat couldnt say no to his bro so he went
everything was ready manvi was dressed in a beautiful royal blue saree and silver blouse with big diamond earings
virat came inside and lights opened and everyone said surprise virat was really happy
manvi went and hugged virat
after a while all the guest left and only family was present
mona:jeevika tumhari shadi ko kitna time hogaya
j:1 saal
mona:aur abhi tak tumne iss ghar ko waris nahi diya aur tumhari behan ne kitni achi khabar sunayi
j:felt like crying
m:baat toh ek hi hain baby mera ho yaa di ka
mona:swamini mene kuch galat kaha
s:bilkul nahi viren tum jeevika ko aur virat tum manvi ko room mein leke jaao aur manvi rest karna thak gayi hogi
manvi jee bua lekin
vanshika:manvi jao beta
manvi was about to go when she fainted virat hold her in his arms and told viren to call the doctor
VIRMAN ROOM
v:doctor manvi theek tau hain na
dr:she is fine but as you know she is week tau inka khayal rakhien inne koi stress na ho and dont make her walk or roam around for few days please
v:thanks doctor
m:woke up and saw the whole family their
v:manvi uth na mat chup chap leti raho
m:virat
v:chup bandarya
m:baby ke samne tau nahi bolo chep
v:tum ne mujhey baby ke samne chep bola
m:tum ne mujhey bandariya kaha
mona:kon khaiga ke bachon ki tarha larne wale ke bach horaha hain
dadaji:bas karo tum dono aur ab hum sab ko chalna chayee
Virika room
jeevika was crying viren came and hugged her and told her why is she crying
j:viren ji wo wo mu mu mujey app ko kuch batana hain
vn:bolo na
j:mein kabhi maa nahi ban sakti
vn was shocked but he had to console jeevika
j:app toh pita ban sakte hain app mujhey chor dien
vn:hugged her and said you complete me i will never leave you well go to the best doctor dont worry well face this problem togather i love you jeevika
j:i love you 2 viren ji
virman room
virat was on top of manvi kissing her
m:ouch virat
virat moved and said kya hua baby is our baby fine shit i shouldnt have made love ab kya karien should i call the doctor yaa mom ko bhai ko mat bulana hell pull my leg kya hua manvi
manvi stated laughing and said she was joking
she stated to kiss virat on his lips and the kiss became more intense and and they both starten to kis eachother and slept in eachothers arms
precap:jeevika truth revealed
virman fight
new entry
i am soo sorry its not that good but i am getting late promise next update will me better thanks everyone and if you guys have any idea you can tell me
yushna thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
fit hai yar, really gud.. I enjoyed.. Update soon nd plz pm me..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
loving it
continue soon
plz pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Is this ss being left incomplete it has not been updated for a month. just wondering.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 4
Vanshika:jeevika beta muhjey tumse baath karni thi
J:jee maa
Vanshika:beta wo abb manvi maa bane wali hain aur tumhari shadi ko 2 saal hogain hain
J;maa wo mujhey apse khena tha ke ke wo and she faints
Vanshika; viren,virat,manvi,didi,inder
Everyone rushes and they take jeevika to the hospital
Doctor:app mein se inke husband kon hai
Vi:mein hoon
Dr:wo actually jeevika ke utreas mein infection hain tau humien operate karna hoga
Manvi:kya dr dii theek tau hojaiye gi
Dr:yaa worry lekin operation abhi karna hoga and yaa mr viren miss jeevika kabhi maa nahi ban paye gi
Vi:kya dr
Dr:lekin shayad wo maa ban paye kabhi medicens hain aur iska ilaj bhi hain
V:bahi himmat raho
After 2 days jeevika came home she was crying in her room seeing a baby photo manvi came and saw her
Virman room
Manvi:virat mujhey tumse kuch baat karni hai
Virat holds manvi from her waist and kisses her neck
Manvi:virat its serious
Virat:kya hua manvi
Manvi:virat di buhut sad hain mein ne abhi unhe rote hue dekha aur une baby nahi hosakta iss liye depressed hain
Virat:mani tum batao kya karien bhabi ka haal mujhe se bhi nahi dekha jaata
Mavi:virat dekho kya hum hamara baby bhabi ko de sakte hain please aur waise bhi wo hamare ssath tau hoga
Virat:tum pagal hogain ho kya mein mera bacha kissi ko nahi doonga samjhi tum
Manvi:yeh bacha mera bhi hai
Virat:manvimeri baat kan khol ke suno mein apna bacha kisi ko nahi doong aur bhabi bache se khelien uske paas rahe mujhey koi problem nahi hai
Manvi:par virat di
Virat:enough manvi just shutup
Manvi crying and she sits on the bed and talks to the baby
Manvi:baby mein buhut buri hoon na mamma apko dena chati hain lekin apki masi maa apse buht pyar karien gi apko masi maa aur mamma dono ka pyar mile ga mein apni di ko aise nahi dekh sakti app mama ko batao na maama kya karien papa bhi mam se naraz hain mein buhut buri hoon
At night
Viren sitting alone
Manvi:jeeju app aise udaas rahien ge tau di ka kya hoga
Viren hugs $anvi and she consoles viren and says to calm down and that they can go somewhere for outing so that di can be happy
Viren:shayad tum theek khe rahi ho mein kal family se permission leta hoon and hum jeevika ka bahar operation london mein karwasakte hai
Manvi:don't worry sab theek hojaye ga
They hug
Virman room
Manvi on the laptop researching abot jeevika problem virat comes andsleepsmanvi looks at him with teary. Eyes. And agin feels sad
In the morning virat wakes up and see manvi sleeping on the sofa he goes towards her and picks her in his armas and makes her sleep on the bed
Virat:manvi tum kyon kar rahi ho aisa
He places his hand on her stomache and says baby dad loves you and I don't want you to go away from me you'll be angry at dad that he scolded mama but I am sorry I am really bad I don't want you to go away from me I love you and your mama a lot
He goes and was about to close the laptop when he sees manvi was sdearching about jeevs problem he had tears in his eyes butcant loose his baby after getting fresh he went down
Jeevika:virat mannu kahan hain
Virat:wo uski tabyat theek nahi hain wo so rahi hain
J;kya hua meri mannu ko and she was about to go but virat said she is tired tau is sleeping
J:okayy
Viren:dadaji wo mein jeevika ko london le jaaraha hun treatment ke liye
Dadji acha theek hain beta
Viren:wo manvi aur virat bhi humare saath aasakte hain manvi jeebika ke saath rahe gi tau dono behanien theek rahien gi
Aur virat bhi meri help kardega
Bua:manvi iss haal mein nahi nahi
Virat:bua acha hain mein wahan manvi ke liye acha sa dr dekhlonga uske pregnancy ke related sab pata karne ki liye ke koi complication nah hoo
Bua:theek hai
Dad:okayy beta
Virat:bhai bhabi flight kab ki hai
V:kal ki
Precap new entry
London and fun romnce
Shocking and sad news
Problems
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oho viraat is being selfish
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