virman-os Be Barfi...only u matters to me...part 3 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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yeh kitni acchi story hain re ... ruk acche se kal parungi phir se

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Okay m back without any bak bak enjoy reading yayee finally m completing something uff m happy okay it an os so everything vl b fst forward

i didn't check the update so their vl b many mistakes

BARFI...ONLY U MATTERS TO ME

''Maanvi'' he said she turn around her eyes on the ground he came forward she was still looking down and breathing heavily he came forward took the duppatta and he made her wear it and kissed her forehead and wisper in her ear ''tum bahut achi lagrahi ho aur hamesha lagti ho'' he wisper while her eyes still on ground she blushed and ran from their while he just smile at her both didn't sleep tht night sleep was far away from them both where thinking about eachother how close they r how their life changed after having eachother in theirlife

It was same as any other day when viraat came bck home he was chitchatting with maanvi when someone knock at his door they were shocked who will be at this hour when viraat open the door he saw a middle aged man with bag in his one arm and well dressed was standing at his door ''u r the one'' he said this confused both viraat and maanvi ''ji kya chahiye aapko'' asked viraat

''Aaphi ho na joy yaha roz gaana gaate ho''he asked while viraat shake his head in agreement confused ''ji humne yaani maine aur mera sir ne aapka gaana suuna aur hum chahate ki aap hamare company ke liye gaana gaaye humaari company aapko break dena chahati hai agar aap interested hai toh yeh raha humaari company ka card kal subha aajayega'' he said while giving him his card viraat can't belive his luck he didn't ever imagine he is going to get his first break in this chawl but he got he was not in his sense when tht person asked his name so maanvi came forward understanding his delimma and took the card and said his name is viraat

That person went viraat was still in same position wasn't able to belive was he dreaming he was still not in his sense maanvi shake him by his shoulder and shouted in his ear ''VIRAAAT'' thts when he came in to sense took the card from her hand looked at it and then at maanvi,she just nodded at him assuring him yup he is thinking right viraat was so excited he hold her by his shoulder and hug her tightly maanvi's eyes pop out she ws shocked viraat wasn't in his sense he broke the hug and kissed on her both cheeks maanvi's eyes widen she just blushed tht when viraat was going to kiss her again he just shouted viraat he came back to her both look at ground feeling weird maanvi blushed and ran from their

(okay now flashback will be in fastforward since this is an os)

Next day viraat went to tht company and sign the contract and they had a deal if their album succeed they vl organize the live show

Viraat started to record the album and within week all recording where done the album contains 6 songs and when they launched the album it was an big hit viraat's fever was all over the world he became an star and it wad maanvi who was with him in all the phase means while he realize his love for her and wanted to propose her

But didn't know how it was his live show today and he decided to propose her after the show she was present at the show and also his family his ma,bhai-bhabhi,chahu-chahi and shlok but his bua and dadaji's ego was much more bigger thn his happiness viraat introduced maanvi to everyone his mum noticed the different charm in his eyes while introducing her so as everyone else in his family present their they all nodded in agreement and thumbs up on his choice everyone liked her and also very well aware of her condition as viraat told them before

Now it was time for the concert to start so viraat asked maanvi she can wait outside if she wants because their will be loud music but maanvi refused it because she don't want to miss the chance to be with him because she was in love with him and he will be bigger star after this y he will leave in basti now so she don't want to leave

Viraat started singing while maanvi was on backstage she can see viraat and viraat can see her

Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajood mera (x2)

He said while looking at her

Tujhse juda gar ho jaayenge
Toh khud se hi ho jaayenge judaa

he knew what she must be thinking so he promised her he will be always with her
Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

he indirectly said he wants to be with her for rest of his life
Tera mera rishta hai kaisa
Ik pal door gawara nahi
Tere liye har roz hai jeete
Tujh ko diya mera waqt sabhi
Koi lamha mera na ho tere bina
Har saans pe naam tera

he went near her maanvi was scared what he is upto asked her hand she was scared but he pleaded with his wishky colored eyes to which no one has guts to deny
Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

he took her to stage and started dancing with her
Tumhi ho... Tumhi ho...
Tere liye hi jiya main
Khud ko jo yun de diya hai
Teri wafa ne mujhko sambhala
Saare ghamon ko dil se nikala
Tere saath mera hai naseeb juda
Tujhe paake adhoora naa raha hmm..


he spin her now her back facing her she closed her eyes by seeing so many people he understand her delimma and turn her around and nodded in no no need to need to scare he is with her now they will be together forever their darks had gone now they live b together forever
Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho..
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho (x2)

they kept dancing finally the song ended curtains were down both were still standing their forehead with attach to eacother while his hand wrap around her waist her hands rested on his shoulders while their eyes were close

He open his eyes and said ''Maary me maanvi'' she open her eyes and look at him she was happy because she wanted this but she remember her disease she can't spoil his life she was about to go but he tighten his hold on her and said ''I know tum kya soch rahi ho but sach mai mujhe kuch farak nahi parta because I really love u and I knw u do too'' he look at his eyes and just so unconditional love for her in his eyes she hug him tightly and said ''I love u too viraat'' (I dn't want to drag this part hope u dn't have problem)

After confessing virman got married it was an silent affair with just families and basti people

Back to present

Six month later

Now maanvi was completely fine she was not at all scare of anything and viraat was with her everytime he was beside herlike a true gentle man life partner like an friend and also he never crossed his limit

Viraat came back from his work as usual on time he saw maanvi was working in the kitchen he went and hug her from back wrap his hands around her and wisper ''I love u jaan'' (lol it's very hard for me to write this cheesy lines) and kissed her ear lob maanvi turn around and wrap her hands around his neck and said romance later ab fresh hojao maine dinner laga liya hai she said while he nodded in agreement kissed on her cheek and went from their dinner was an silent affair both had dinner

(Lol this is for avi) avi forced me to write this part 🤣

Maanvi came in room after changing in her night gown she was standing near dressing table and was combing her hair when viraat came and hug her from behind and buried his face in her neck while his hand around her waist she smile at him kept her hands on his hands and said ''kya baat hai aaj koi bahut romanctic horaha hai pyaar aaraha hai'' she said ''pyaar toh bahut aata hai par tum karne nahi deti'' 🤣 he said pouting like a kid she giggle at this and said ''achaha toh maine kab roka'' she said and blushed harder viraat immediately look at her with desire in his eyes for her he turn her around and wisper in her ear ''can I have pleasure to dance with my sexy wife'' and she blushed and nodded in agreement

Suno na kahe kya suno na
Dil mera suno na, suno zara
Teri baahon mein mujhe rehna hai raat bhar
Teri baahon mein hogi subah

He pulled her towards him and wrap his hand around her waist while hers around his shoulders and both facing eachother and moving with beat

Be-intehaan
Yoon pyaar kar be-intehaa
Dekha karoon saari umar
Tere nishaan be-intehan
Koi kasar naa rahe, meri khabar na rahe
Chhoo le mujhe is kadar be-intehaan

He buried his face in her neck and started kissing her slowly slowly while she was lost in him giving him his rights he turn her around while her back facing him still kissing her his naughty hand went towards her gowns jacket and peeled it off now she was in her sexy gown which was sleevless bckless and only till her midthight

Jab saanson mein teri saansein ghuli toh
Phir sulagne lage
Ehsaas mere mujhse kehne lage
Haan baahon mein teri aa ke jahaan do
Yoon simatne lage
Sailaab jaise koi behne lage
Khoya hoon main aagosh mein
Tu bhi kahaan ab hosh mein
Makhmali raat ki ho naa subah
Be intehaan, be-intehaan
Yoon pyar kar be-inteha

He turn her again both look at eachother with equal desire and passion in eachothers eyes he asked her through her eyes and she allow him through her eyes and he move forward to grab her lips

Gustakhiyan kuch tum karo
Kuch hum karein is tarah
Sharma ke do saaye hain jo
Muh pher lein hum se yahaan

He took her in her arms and went towards bed she buried her face in his neck and wrap her hand around his neck while her lips brushing his skin

Haan chhoo to liya hai ye jism tune
Rooh bhi choom le
Alfaaz bheege bheege kyun hain mere
Haan yoon choor ho ke majboor ho ke
Qatra qatra kahe
Ehsaas bheege bheege kyun hain mere
Do bekhabar bheege badan
Ho besabar bheege badan
Le rahe raat bhar angdaiyaan

He place her on bed and covered her with himself and kissed her forehead then nose then cheeks thn lips very passionately and she replied with equal reponse while his hands pulling her more closer and her hands moving allaround his bck

Slowly slowly he removed all hurdles between them

Be inteha, be inteha
Yoon pyaar kar, be inteha
Dekha karoon saari umar
Tere nishan, be-intehaan
Koi kasar na rahe, meri khabar na rahe
Chhoo le mujhe is kadar be-intehaan

And made her his wife his better half his life partner in all the sense marked her his forever

9 months later

Shanaya vadhera

*~*~*~THE END~*~*~*

Omg maine kuch complete kia wohooo m so happy all thnks to keertu

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Edited by copypaste - 12 years ago
JESNIA thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
WOW...AWESOME OS👏👏
👏LOVED IT.
VIRAT IS A PERFECT LOVER AND HUSBAND.
SORRY NOW A FATER TOO.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Wow finally complete kiya...
Awesome update ya ..loved it ...
Detail mein hota toh aur maza aata par its ok :-)
And shanaya is sooo adorable cutie pie <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
sab se acchi line thi and nine months later Sanaya Vadera 🤣
force karke accha kia
awesome hot and very beautiful 👏
loved it

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: preity_d

sab se acchi line thi and nine months later Sanaya Vadera 🤣
force karke accha kia
awesome hot and very beautiful 👏
loved it


hahahhahaha get lost kamini🤣🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Lovely update Uzma!!⭐️ Very well written 👍🏼.. Finally Virman became one 😳.. And Shanaya is so cute 😛.. Happy ending!! 😃 Loved the songs.. My fav ❤️.. Loved it.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
thank u thank u thank u soo much for updating.
really loved it.their flashback.
it was my fav.
then the last romantic update.
it was my fav story.
but nine months ki baad how will a 5years old child will come😆🤣
Edited by keertu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: copypaste


hahahhahaha get lost kamini🤣🤣

You get lost double kamini wwith ur kameena 🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: keertu

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#cc9900">thank u thank u thank u soo much for updating.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#cc9900">really loved it.their flashback.</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#cc9900">it was my fav.</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#cc9900">then the last romantic update.</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#cc9900">it was my fav story.</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#cc9900">but nine months ki baad how will a 5years old child will come😆🤣</font>

coz she is twilight kid 🤣

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