virman os : jealously - a bliss... - Page 2

Originally posted by: virumanu

it was lovely

Originally posted by: manashu123

awesum one

virat's jealousy

and then manvi's helpful nature

they both are just awesum

loved the ending

finally they other got each other's love and understood their feelings

manvi came to know that virat still loved her like he loved before

and virat came to know that how important was it to spend some quality time with his loved ones and how necessary it is to make them feel that they are most important persons in their lives..

keep writing more such peices

and do continue our other works

thanks for ur pm

and again

pls. continue ur other stories

waiting for ur updates

😊 keep smiling

and wish u a happy and safe diwali

thank you soo very much manashu123 for a beautiful comment... 😃

Originally posted by: madpaki

Awesome loved jealous virat

Originally posted by: kodhai

It's beautiful :)

Originally posted by: afreenkansal

wonderful
loved the jealous virat

Originally posted by: virman-fan

really enjoyed this jealous virat
loved it
nice writing

Originally posted by: Shivrajput52

Nice Os... Jealous Virat ❤️

Originally posted by: alicemath

dat wz an amazing piece of work...

luv every bit of it...virat's possessiveness ...his jealousy on seeing his manvi in sumoneelses arms...beautiflly potrayed...

thnx a loot for dis wonderful piece of work n pm too...plz do cum up wid more 😊

THANK YOU ALICEMATH... 😊

Originally posted by: nikeshathana

wow another awesome OS it was wonderful i mean when i was reading it i had three different thoughts first i thought virat din't yet propose manvi then u told both already love eachother and finally wife&husband that was really nice thing and you beautifully portrayed virat's feelings. Ooo jealous virat i just loved it and in the begginning when manvi was like ' i told yes to Rahul...his dreams his trust' and all i thought manvi's rishta was fixed to him or something but i was laughing when i found out that it was a salsa dance compitation...LOL...anyways it was an awesome OS do come up with more like this and thnx for the pm!!!

I REALLY WANTED A READER TO FEEL ALL THIS... TRUST ME... 😛

Loved the update yaar.I love the jealous virat more.I thought Manvi was engaged to rahul until i found out it was just a salsa competition.Loved that twist.And more than that Virat and Manvi were husband and wife.I didn't expect that.A lovely OS. Feelin a little jealous when u see ur partner with someoneelse is good after all 😆.It makes u realize how much u love them.U have explained it wonderfully.So lovely😊.Thanks for the pm😊

Nice OS..
Thank you so much for writing and sharing 😊

Originally posted by: preetipc

Loved the update yaar.I love the jealous virat more.I thought Manvi was engaged to rahul until i found out it was just a salsa competition.Loved that twist.And more than that Virat and Manvi were husband and wife.I didn't expect that.A lovely OS. Feelin a little jealous when u see ur partner with someoneelse is good after all 😆.It makes u realize how much u love them.U have explained it wonderfully.So lovely😊.Thanks for the pm😊

THIS OS WAS BASICALLY ABOUT JEALOUS VIRAT ONLY... BCOS I LOVE HIM TOO MUCH THAT WAY ...

Jealous Viraat?