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lekharani_2k thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update really nice RK means rishab kundra kya yeh Rk and madhublas's Rk is one and same hahaha
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow awesome update. .cant wait 4 next
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update. awesome story.I like Manvi's past. But kuch din bath Kya?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: avika26

Wow awesome update. .cant wait 4 next


thanks...
I will updated soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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J-BAS US DIN K BAAD JIS TARAH SE WOH DAR GAI THI HUME LAGA KI MAANVI KO SAMBHALA BAHOT MUSKIL HOGA..LEKIN NAHI MAANVI NE KHUD KO SAMBHAL LIYA..KUCH HI DINO ME WOH NORMAL HO GAI..AUR SAB SE PROMIS LIYA KI AB KOI US BAAT KO YAAD NAHI KAREGA...
TEARS SLIPS FROM HER EYES...
VIRAT LOOKED AT MAANVI AND PLASED HIS HAND ON HER FOREHEAD...TEARS ALSO COMES IN HIS EYES...
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M-WITH REGRETS-I M SORRY VIRAT..MERI VAJEHSE TUM PURI RAAT SO NAHI PAYE..MAIN PAHELE TUMHARE LIYE BREAKFAST LE AATI HU..PHIR MEDICINES LEKAR TUM KUCH HOURS K LIYE REST KARLENA..
SHE TURNED AND STOOD UP FROM BED..SHE ABT TO WALK WHEN VIRAT HOLD HER WRIST..
V-KYA MUJHE BATA SAKTI HO KAL KYA HUA THA TUMHE?...AGAR BATANA CHAHO TO?
HE ASKED SOFTLY BUT ITS HEARED LIKE TAUNT...
SHE LOOKED AT HIM WITH CONFUSING LOOK..
M-WORRIEDLY-VIRAT..ASE KYU BOL RAHE HO?...KYU NAHI BATAUNGI MAIN TUMHE?..AUR TUMHE NAHI BATAUNGI TO AUR KISE BATAUNGI?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update. already eager to know after that update , now this precap will kill me. pls update karo na. Btw, awesome update . Ehmmbh cv's ko tumhari help lena chahiye tokeep things laways interesting.every update of urs is awesome and interesting, us cvs ko bi thoda sikha do yaar from time to time when trps drop , pls😊😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: preetipc

Loved the update. already eager to know after that update , now this precap will kill me. pls update karo na. Btw, awesome update . Ehmmbh cv's ko tumhari help lena chahiye tokeep things laways interesting.every update of urs is awesome and interesting, us cvs ko bi thoda sikha do yaar from time to time when trps drop , pls😊😉


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thank u so much...
For appreciatio...
I m just put my thoughts here...
I m very bed in writing specialy in English...
Nd for gave some advised to cvc...i think i m very small for this...
Again thanks...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow interesting twist ...bt pls uske baad kya hua jaldi batao cant wait ...:P
do pm me :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kulsum_vish

wow interesting twist ...bt pls uske baad kya hua jaldi batao cant wait ...:P
do pm me :)


thanks...
But due to my phone facilities i cannot pm direct links...sorry...
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART-81 (b)
Tears slips from her eyes..
V-bhabhi kya hua tha?
J-wahi Jo humne shayad sapne me bhi nahi socha tha..school k baad maanvi jab ghar nahi pahochi to main bahot Dar gai,maine beeji aur chachu ko RK ke bare me sab bata diya,ghar me sab maanvi ko lekar pareshan ho gaye the,chachu aur maanvi ko dhundh ne k liye gaye,hume pata chala ki maanvi to school se ghat gai thi,humne waha bhi check kiya lekin woh waha nahi thi,mujhe mannu ki bahot fikar ho rahi thi,humne kisi tarah RK k ghar ka address dhudha aur vaha ja kar pata chala ki woh bhi ghar pr nahi hai,apne ded k farmhouse pe gaya hai,humne uske parents ko sab bataya,pahele to unhone yakin karne se mana kar diya lekin humari request pr humare saath chalne pr razi hua,hum sab farmhouse pahoche hi the ki Hume shadi k gane sunai diye,hum ghar ki taraf bhag kar gaye,aur..aur waha mannu ki friend,uski panter team ki sabse chhoti chinki behosh couch pe leti hui thi,main bhag k uske paas gai lekin woh hosh me nahi thi..tabhi humne RK ko chillate hua suna,hum awaz ki direction me bhag k gaye,woh ek white roses ka garden tha,jiske middle me ek mandap bana hua tha..aur..aur..waha ek recorded shadi k shlok chal rahe the,humne karib ja kar dekha to..to..white roses k mandap me mannu..mannu baithi hui thi..
Virat and viren get shocked..
J-Hume kuch samaj me nahi aa raha tha..mandap..shlok baj rahe the..RK ki woh hasi..aur mannu..mannu waha baithi thi..woh buri tarah kap rahi thi..uski akhe ro-ro kar red ho gai thi..uske chahere pr saaf saaf mar k nishan dikh rahe the..hum sab waha murti ki tarah khade the..kuch samaz me nahi aa raha tha..tabhi RK gusse utha ur recorder tod diya ye kahe hua ki woh ab aur intjaar nahi kar sakta..usne jabar jasti maanvi ko haar pahenne ko kaha jab woh hichkacha rahi thi to..usne use thappad mar diya..woh floor pr gir gai..main aur chachu vaha bhag k gaye..maine RK ko gusse me thappad mar diya..woh hum sab ko waha dekh kar chok gaya..Main mannu k paas gai..jaise hi usne mujhe dekha mujhe gale laga kar joro se rone lagi..maine kabhi us tarah se dare hua ya rote hua nahi dekha tha..use shant karne me mujhe 2 ghante lage..tab tak chachu ne police ko bula liya tha...woh RK ko pakad k le gaye..maanvi ko kafi Der tak puchne pr usne bataya ki school k baad jab woh ghat pr pahochi to use waha sabhi panter mile lekin chinki nahi aai thi..tabhi raju ne use bataya ki chinki to aapke dost RK k saath gai hai.mannu samaj gai ki kuch gadbad hai,tabhi use RK ka phone Aya aur usne mannu waha bulaya,usne dhamki Di thi ki agar woh abhi waha pahochi to woh chinki ko marega nahi balki kisi kothe pe bech dega,mannu jab waha pahochi to usne pahele se hi chinki ko ek poisonous injection de rakha tha agar maanvi uski shadi ki shart nahi manti to use us poison se cure karne ka injection nahi dega aur jisse chinki ki jaan bhi jaa sakti thi..isi liye maanvi vahi karti gai Jo usne kaha..
Virat got angry..he tight his clutch..
J-chinki ko hospital le gaye aur RK k khilaf umne case file kiya,baad me medically ye bahar aya ki RK ko koi psychological problem hai..use saza nahi ho sakti is liye uske parents ke lawyer ne uska ilaj shimla k mental hospital me ho iski request ki Jo manli gai..un dino mannu ki halat mujse dekhi tak nahi ja rahi thi..woh thik se bata tak pa rahi thi ki RK ne uske saath kaise behave kiya,woh pagal tha,yaha tak ki usne mannu ka nam..maan..apne hath pe khud likha tha..mannu ki us halat k baad Hume laga woh shayad sambhal nahi payegi,hum kabhi apni us purani mannu ko dekh nahi payenge..lekin kuch hi dino me mannu normal behave karne lagi,bilkul pahele jaise,main janti thi ki woh Hume khush dekhneke liye apna gum bhoolane ki koshis kar rahi hai..aur hum sab ne uska saath diya..usne promis liya ki ab koi kabhi us bare me baat nahi karega..kuch din baad uski boards ki exam thi to woh us me lag gai..aur ye RK ka chapter vahi khatm ho gaya..
Virat and viren staring at jeevika..she looked at them one by one..silent spreaded in room..after few minutes..
Vn-woh..ab bahot raat ho gai hai..jeevika Hume chalna chahiye..
J-ji..she kissed on her forehead and leave..viren come near to virat..wisheper
vn-hum kal baat karte hai..
Virat nodded..they left..virat looked at maanvi..he plased his head on back wall of bed and staring at her..he remembering all word of jeevika and all moments when he saw her scared and changed..whole night passed but still he didn't fall in sleep for minut..its 8:30 in morning..maanvi wake up late due to fever effect..she try to opened her eyes..she slowly opened her eyes and found virat sited on bed and staring at her..she sit on bed..she realize abt last night..she feel guilty..
M-i m sorry virat..last night Maine tumhe..chhodo..tum puri raat soa nahi..i m sorry..mujhe uthne bhi late ho gaya..main abhi ja k tumhare liye breakfast le aati hu phir tum medicines le kar so jana..stood up from bed nd abt to leave when he hold her wrist
V-kya mujhe bata sakti ho kal tumhe kya hua tha? Agar batana chaho to..he said softly but like tount

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