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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
lovely update.Now MAnvi is going to help maya ah.Stupid maya😡. Poor Virat feel bad for him.pls continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART-9
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WHOLE DAY MAANVI THOUGHT ABT VIRAT AND MAYA..
NEXT DAY-
they going to studio..maanvi start talking with virat..
M-virat vese tum se ek baat puchu?
V-maanvi tumhe mujse kuch bhi puchne k liye permission ki jarurat nahi hai..
Maanvi smiled
m-okey..woh tumne music kyu chod diya tha? Agar tum batana chaho to..
She was scared..she thought he shouted him like year back..he did not like to talk abt it..
Virat looked at her and smile..
V-maanvi ye baat mein tumhe bhi bata chuka hu,aur phir bata raha hu..meine music chodne ka fesla kiya kyu ki mein tut chuka tha ek ase inshaan ki vajeh se jisne kabhi mujhe sanja tak nahi..aur jab tum meri life mein aai to mujhe ahesas hua ki meine music ko hi nahi apni zindgi ko chhod diya tha..music chhod na meri bevkufi thi..bas meine apne us kajor hisse ko bhula diya aur life ko ek aur moka de diya..
Maanvi smile..
M-virat..vese agar tum khud ko ek moka de sakte ho to maya ko bhi..
Virat suddenly pressed break..
M-aah..virat..
Virat looked at her angrily..
V-maanvi tum..
M-virat mein to bas maya ko maf karne k liye kahe rahi thi..woh tumse itne achche se baat karti hai aur sab normal rakhneki koshis karti hai pr tum hamesha usse ruddly baat karte ho..
Virat just looked at her..no ab dubara nahi..maya...he hit on starring...
V-maanvi..tum dubara maya ki baat nahi karogi..mujhe uske bare mein koi baat nahi karni..
M-pr virat..
V-maanvi i said no..
Maanvi looked at virat he was very angry..
Virat start car and they reached studio..
Virat not in mood..he thought abt todays incident and joint it with yesterdays maya and maanvis conversation..
In canteen area..
M-maya virat tumse shayad bahot naraz hai pr don't worry dhire dhire wo melt ho hi jayega..vese ek idea hai tum ye lunch virat k liye lekar jao aur usse baat karne ki koshis karo..
My-okey..
In mind-ye paheli biwi hogi Jo apne pati ki setting karva rahi hai..she smile..
In corridor maya told to the pavan that gave msg to maanvi that virat called her imigiatly..pavan nodded..
Maya entered with tray in cabin and plased on table..virat turned looked at tray then maya..
V-tum? Tum ye kyu lai? Maanvi kaha hai?
My-woh actually wo buzzy hai..isi liye
v-buzzy? Maanvi kya kam kar rahi hai?
Maya came close to him and plased her hand on his shoulder ...
My-vahi Jo usne adhura chhod diya tha..
Virat pussed her hand back and walked towards door..maya held his hand and turned him towards her..
V-maya leave my hand..mujhe maanvi se baat karni hai..
My-maanvi ne hi mujhe yaha bheja hai..
Virat looked at her angrily..point out his finger towards her
V-maanvi se dur raho..use baheka ne ki jarurat nahi hai samji..
My-relax virat..ye tum bhi bahot achche se jante ho aur mein bhi ki maanvi ki kya hai agar meine use sab bata diya to use kitna bada shock lagega ye tum jante ho..
Virat tide his teeth..
V-maya..
My-relax mein itni bhi buri nahi hu..mein bas tumhe ye samjana chahti hu ki maanvi k piche apni jindgi barbad kyu kar rahe ho..pahele cancer aur ab ye pata nhi age..
V-shut up maya..just go away from me and my life..my life maanvi..
My-jiski jaan ek sach k samne jhuk sakti hai..
Maya plased her hand around his neck..
Virat was shocked by her action..
Just then maanvi came towards door and saw mayas hand on virats neck..she just stood their..
Maya saw her..6e removed her hand play with his collar...
Maanvi don't know why but she did not liked it..she feel jealous..she feel angry and she come out from studio..
Here virat was so angry he pussed maya back and warned her..
V-don't u dare..i m married..and love her more than any thing in world..id warned u..next time don't..
He left,he asked pavan abt maanvi he told him that he saw her walked towards out..
He walked towards...
Here maanvi stood near the tree..
M-in mind- hai ganga maiya ye mere did me sunami kyu aa rahi hai..meine khud maya ko bheja tha phir..mujhe bura kyu lag raha hai..asa kyu lag raha hai jese kuch galat ho raha hai..nahi maanvi tu asa nahi soch sakti..bas bahot ho gaya bas ek plan aur phir in sab se dur vapas rihshikesh...
She turned towards studio and saw virat came towards her..he looks angry..
V-maanvi...
Just then pavan came..
P-sir recording suru karni hai..
Maanvi smiled..
M-virat hum baad mein baat karenge chalo..
Virat want taked to her but..
They recorded the song after it virat waited for maanvi in car..He saw maanvi came with maya..
They set in car..
M-virat woh maya ki car khrab hai woh humare saath arahi hai..
Virat not say a word..in whole journey maanvi tries to many time to talked them with eachother but fail..
After dropped maya..virat stopped car on one empathy plase..like their picnic spot..on hill ...
Maanvi just looked at him..he came out of car and open the door of car and take her hand and pulled out her from car and closed the door loudly..
Maanvi stood near the car in middle between to doors..virat stood in front of her..she looked at him..he looks angry..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Amazing updateSSS this is the most quickest FF writer on IF I mean whn ever i visit ur thread i always have 2-3 updates which is like AWESSSOMEEE Ur story is amazing... U update like the fastest which I love the most!! One request PLSSS end this maya drama quick nt liking it at all... Get VirMan back together...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Plz end this maya drama nd update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
dont kil me wit des end..update fast..waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
PART-10
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Maanvi looked at him..he is very angry
M-kya hua?
V-kya hua? Ye tum puch rahi ho? Meine tumse kaha tha na ki maya se dur raho,woh achchi inshaan nahi hai,kyu samaj nahi ho..
Maanvi saw virat in anger..she saw him before angry but this time in his anger something is different
M-virat mein to bas tumhari aur maya.
V-maanvi maya maya maya.. Meine kaha na usne mere sath Jo kuch bhi kiya tha mein use maaf kar kar chuka hu,pr phir dubara wahi galti ki,aur ab tum bhi samaj lo humari jindgi mein uski koi jarurat nahi hai..
M-virat dubara..usne koi galti nahi ki..woh to bas tumse phir se..
Virat now very angry..
V-maanvi mein tumhe kaise samjau ki maya sirf tumhara use kar rahi hai Jo usne pahele kiya tha..
Maanvi looked him confusing...virat turned his back towards her...
V-maanvi pichle ek saal mein maya pahele bhi vapas aai thi aur tab bhi usne tumhare jariye muj tak pahoch ne ki koshis ki thi pr sahi waqt pr bhai ne mujhe phir galti karnese rok liya..woh sirf mere fame or money k piche hai aur kuch nahi..mein uske saath khada bhi nahi rahena chahta..
Tears fall in her cheeks..virat turned and looked her..
Virat cupped her face..
V-maanvi?
M- i m sorry..virat..meine ye sab..id m sorry..meine tumhe hurt kiya i m sorry..
Virat wiped her tears..
V-no maanvi its okey..tum itni achchi ho ki kisi ki bhi madad krne k liye taiyar raheti ho..now stop crying..nahi to tumhari Di aur jiju mujhe nahi chodenge..
And he smile..
Maanvi-tum itne achche kyu ho? Meine itni badi galti ko aur tumne ek hi pal me apna gussa bhula kar mujhe maaf kar diya..
V-haa kyu ki mein tumse naraz nahi rahe sakta aur nahi tumhari aakho mein ashu dekh sakta hu..
Maanvi looked in virats eyes..they looked in eachothers eyes..
After few minit..maanvis phone rang..
They broke eyeslock..maanvi picked up the phone it is jeevika..
M-hello Di.
J-mannu kaha ho tum log..tumhari bandaged utar gai?
M-nahi Di..hum kal chale jayenge..
J-achcha thik hai ab jaldi ghar aa jao raat ho rahi hai aur mausam bhi thik nahi hai..lagta hai diwali pr bhi baarish hogi..
M-ji Di hum bas raste me hi hai..
J-okey bye
m-bye..
Maanvi looked at virat..
V-chalo ghar chalte hai..
In car..both not say a word..maanvi is confused for her feeling..why she can not controlled her self..many thoughts flying in her mind..
After they reached at home to the dinner maanvi not properly talked to him..virat know that she fighted with her Owen feeling..
He told jeevika to talked to her..jeevika talked with her and try to gave hint abt her love towards virat..
At night maanvi go on terrace..climate become cold and more dark..just like before rain..maanvi feel the air..and thought abt jeevikas words..apni feelings ko samjna..and all of that..-di kya kahene ki koshis kar rahi thi..mere aur unke parivar k bich pahele se kafi badlav hai..specially SB..pr shayad ye sab sirf meri bimari ki vajeh se..varna unhe to mera virat se phone pr baat karna bhi pasand nahi tha..just then her mind focused on word virat..she remember all moments which she spend with him..
Virat walked out of his room and so maanvi on terrace he Came towards him..
V-maanvi.? Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?
M-kuch nahi bas yuhi..
Virat came close to her and stood near her..
V-hu..to ab bhi soch mein hi ho..kya soch rahi thi? Mere bare mein?
Maanvi looked at him..
M-nahi to..
She looks down..
In mind-ye kya ho raha hai mujhe..
M-mujhe nind aa rahi hai mein chalti hu..
Maanvi turned but virat held her hand..maanvi turned towards him..he come closed to her..
M-virat..
V-maanvi mein janta hu tumhe nind nahi arahi..
Maanvi looked at him...
V-maanvi kal meri akhri recording hai..aur maya k sath akhri mulakat..us k baad Hume studio nahi jana padega..Hume album ki shooting k liye bahar jana padega to mein tumse mil nahi paunga..
Manvi feel sad..
M-kya?
Virat nodded...
Maanvi looked in his eyes..she feel something hurt her..she did not want him to go away from her..but she can not told him to not go..
V-don't worry bus 1 week hi baat hai..
Virat try to smile..he also did not want go alone..but he can not asked her to come with him..their is more possibility of people who meet there..and they may be reviled abt their relation bcz of their music competition all peoples know them..
Maanvi try to smile..
M-kab jana hai?
V-kal raat ki flight hai..
Maanvi looked at him
Suddenly maanvi heared loud sound of cloud...they hitted whith eachother and thunder flash on sky,she scared and hugged him,she moved her hand on his back,rain drops fall on them,virat also can not control and hugged her back,she tied her grip after hearing cloud sound,virat smiled
V-maanvi relax its just cloud
Maanvi did not want to let him go,virat also liked it,after so long maanvi in his arm,the same scene happened here like in Mumbai hospital,virat kissed in her hair and tied his grip,they moved with music of rain drope,virat pulled her little away her eyes were closed..he removed her hair from her face,he came close to her and cupped her face,kissed on her forehead,
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
oye y u stopped there.now i have to wait till u update.continue soon.loved tis part very much no maya only virman.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
ahh...loved itt...thks 4 closing maya's part...plzzz next part should be romantic...i m waiting...if u can update it today itself...plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
PART -10 CONTINU ...
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virat cupped her face and kissed on forehead,eyes,cheeks..maanvi tied her grip on his coller..she is shivering by his touch..but she liked it..its not differen..its similar touched for her..his face came close to her..his lips just inch away from her..suddenly maanvi came out in reality..she loose her grip and opened her eyes..she saw virat just inch away from her..virat just kiss her but she pussed him back force fully..virat looked at her without any expression..maanvi looked down and tears fall on her cheeks..virat take one step but she rise her hand to stop him..
V-maanvi plz..mein..
Before he say something maanvi run towards her room..virat kicked in water which accumulated on Tarecce..
Maanvi entered in room and locked the door..she fall on floor with support of door..she is still crying...
M-in mind-yeh..kya kar diya tune..virat..tera dost hai..tu asa kese soch sakti hai..kese face karegi use?..di..jiju..dadaji..bua ji..biji.. Sab ...
She plased her hand on her face..
Tu asa kese.. Woh bhi virat k saath..woh to ladka hai pr tu?..tune use kyu nahi roka..
In virat cames in his room-
he set on bed after change..
V-mujhe usse baat karni hogi..woh pata nahi kya kya soch rahi hogi..
He stood but ...
V-nahi abhi nahi subah baat karunga abhi woh meri koi baat nahi sunegi..
In morning on dinning table ...
Virat try to talked with but she did not once looked at him..
After breakfast..
M-di aaj virat ko recording k baad sham ko shooting k liye jana hai to use waqt nahi mileage..to aap mere sath bandaged change karvane chaloge?
Jeevika looked at virat..he was not happy..
J-pr mannu..
M-di plz..
Jeevika nodded ...
Virat came in her room before leaving for studio..maanvi stood near window..
V-maanvi?
Maanvi turned and saw him in front of her..she looked other side..
V-maanvi mein..
M-virat plz mein is waqt koi baat karna chahti plz..
Virat cam close to her but maanvi turned..her back was facing him..
V-maanvi mein samja sakta hu..
M-virat mujhe kuch nahi samjna plz jao..
Virat don't want to gave her stress so he decided to leave...
In whole day virat thought abt her..he decided to tell her that he loves her..he want to new start...
In evening he came in house and entered in maanvis room it is empathy he asked jeevika abt her..
V-bhabhi maanvi kaha hai?
J-virat i m sorry humne use samjane ki bahot Koshis ki pr woh nahi ruki..
Virat was shocked..
V-nahi ruki matlab?
J-virat maanvi rihshikesh chali gai hai..
V-kya? Pr kyu?
J-woh kahe rahi thi use mummy papa se milna hai..badi biji aur baki sab se milna hai..humne usse kaha ki kal chali jaye pr..
Virat know why she done it..
V-bhabhi mujhe rihshikesh jana hoga..
J-nahi virat tumhe pahele apna album ka khatm karna hai..aur shayad is ek hafate me maanvi tumse dur rahe kar hi tumhare liye apni feelings ko phir se samj paye..
Virat looked at her..
She nodded...
After some hours virat left for shooting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
hay ni ths part was gud,.plz upload it fast next part

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