SS Iridescent (P19 - UPDATE 06/06) [Virman/Virika]

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..Gowri..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Errm.. Sorry for the late commenting!! Well, Better late than never, i guess! *Grins*

I was always a fan of your writings, sabeeha. They fascinate me as to the deepness, the content & the maturity.. Not to say that i get to learn more literature too..! Read both the updates at one go & i guess, the prologue seems a bit too far away! But loved the way you started off. The behna's seems like they are from the initial days of the show, perfect & charming! Great stuff, sabeeha!👍🏼

PS : Thanks fr the PM!😊!

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-Rosy-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Please continue soon, I loved it :)

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zahara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

I am literally stalking you since I last read Turning Tables. I just can't get over how amazing your words and imagery is! Add me to the PM list when you continue, please. 😆

Coming to this story: it's so different! I've never thought of Jeevika being modern, well more than she is nor Virat meeting her. It's so unusual to think of her in that way.

I guess that's what's makes this story even more intriguing. You have one more fan by the way.

Do carry on writing.

😳

P.S yes, I am stalking your works. 🤣

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Maridda

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Hey,

I'm a silent reader-most of the time. Your title caught my attention (BTW i love it, i don't know why but it just sreams READ ME) I read both parts and they were awesome. I'm half pakistani and half mixed european so i loved reading the italian parts and i loved your setting (ITALY: the best place). AMazing work and writting techniques. Please continue soon and PM me (although i'll be stalking this ork everyday)

Marissa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: pinky.padda
awesome update cannot wait to meet the stranger on the phone

Aww thank you :)

Don't worry it's not too long a wait :L

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: Sameerakryan
loved it can u plzz update turning tables plzzz

Thank you :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: shine123
Nice Update...:)
Jeevika - Virat conservation...wow...
Yummy pasta...oh u brought water in my mouth...
then Viren -Jeevika convo...viren shouthignnd jeevika getting angry...:)

Thnx 4 dpm...:)

Hey thanks :)

I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: aasma1
wooow sooo goood
thanks for the om and plz pm mr when u update again..

sorrry im at,work so cant commment much loool
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Aww thanks for commenting even though you're busy :)

It's much appreciated!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: sanjana_cool
thanks a ton for the pm:))
ur a brilliant writer👏
plz update fast...just can't wait for the suspense of the man at phone 2 be revealed😃

Hiya, thank you :)

I'm glad you enjoyed it, and please do keep reading :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: radzzz123
such a good peice of writing yaar
i am new to this forum and thus didn't knew about u
but i am glad that i got a chance to read ur story
will try to read ur previous works too
continue soon
waitng for ur next update

and wish u a happy and safe diwali

Aww thank you :)

I'm happy you've enjoyed my story and welcome to our forum!

Take care and do keep reading :)