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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: jenna_p
Very good update as usual...You r a fantastic writer...👏
Loved jeevika and virat's convo...😊
Thanks for the PM...
Cant wait for the next update

Hey Jenna :)

Aww thank you, I really appreciate that. Do keep commenting, I love your comments :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: preetipc
Loved the update so much.Loved Jeevika's and Virat's converstaion .Waiting for the meetin of jeevika and the mystery caller who is close to virat.Thanks for the pm😊

Hey, thanks :)

Yeah, subtlety isn't my middle name :L

Do keep reading :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: Syed695
Nice update...just a confusion...in this story u hve chnges in pair...please correct me if m wrong..n thnks for the pm!

Hey, thank you.

Oh, don't worry, it's just a bit of drama :P

Virman forver and Virika forever, scouts honour!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: Kanwal_chohan
Awesome update me thinking stranger is viren
Loved it continue soon and do pm me

Sorry for the late reply

Hey thank you :)

Don't worry, I'll place you on the PM list.

Do keep on reading :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: -Rosy-
Please continue soon, I loved it :)

Thank you :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

An excellent update girl. Why am I stuck to how to comment. I really loved it, very beautiful and clearly. written. You and I have the same problem with making sure that everything makes senses and that it is grammatical correct. (Not that my last Os was)

It was a great meeting, liked how she didn't give him her real name. A simple story with a very modern touch, things that we forget in day to day life but do instinctily

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: ..Gowri..
Errm.. Sorry for the late commenting!! Well, Better late than never, i guess! *Grins*

I was always a fan of your writings, sabeeha. They fascinate me as to the deepness, the content & the maturity.. Not to say that i get to learn more literature too..! Read both the updates at one go & i guess, the prologue seems a bit too far away! But loved the way you started off. The behna's seems like they are from the initial days of the show, perfect & charming! Great stuff, sabeeha!👍🏼

PS : Thanks fr the PM!😊!

Heya, lol, don't worry, I'm late for commenting, updating, posting... :)

Aww, that's really sweet. Seriously when people compliment my work, I'm always like 'you're not talking about me, are you, cause you've got the wrong person!' but I really do appreciate all the comments because they do mean a lot so thank you.

Er, I can't talk much about literature except that one of my pet peeves is things not written out properly. It's all to do with the flow; there's no fun in reading a story without it meaning something to you.

Anyway, thank you for the lovely comment, I'm completely bawled over that you consider yourself a fan of mine. Thank you :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: ZAHARA.
I am literally stalking you since I last read Turning Tables. I just can't get over how amazing your words and imagery is! Add me to the PM list when you continue, please. 😆

Coming to this story: it's so different! I've never thought of Jeevika being modern, well more than she is nor Virat meeting her. It's so unusual to think of her in that way.

I guess that's what's makes this story even more intriguing. You have one more fan by the way.

Do carry on writing.

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P.S yes, I am stalking your works. 🤣

:L Heyya :)

I think I should get a restraining order out on yah!

Wow, thanks for those comments, especially as they're coming from such an amazing writer as yourself. Whoo, you blew me away there, really thank you :)

The story, I've always had the idea nagging in my head as to what would have happened if the sister's parents hadn't of died. They'd be living the high life in Delhi (or Mumbai, I can't remember which they were based in at the start of the show) and of course, they'd be modern and world-friendly, although they'd still be best friends.

And Virat for me, he's always been one of *those* guys, who were tamed down, first by Maya and then by Manvi. Still our beloved Virat, but more playa like :P

Oh, the word fan. Seriously, I'm surprised that someone like yourself would consider themselves as my fan(!), but anyway thank you for the comment.

And please do get yourself checked out for your stalker tendencies :P

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: Maridda
Hey,
I'm a silent reader-most of the time. Your title caught my attention (BTW i love it, i don't know why but it just sreams READ ME) I read both parts and they were awesome. I'm half pakistani and half mixed european so i loved reading the italian parts and i loved your setting (ITALY: the best place). AMazing work and writting techniques. Please continue soon and PM me (although i'll be stalking this ork everyday)
Marissa

Hiya :)

The song Iridescent has been topping my playlist for a while so I thought to myself that I needed to write something down on it, and I just so happened to have an idea that had been plaguing me for a while and it weirdly enough fit.

Wow, you have the best of many worlds :) I've always had a affinity to Italy. I just love the place and Rome and Florence have to be on of my favourite places in the world. Everything is so vibrant there, from the people, to the places and to the language. It sure beats a horrible and rainy UK :L

Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed this piece, and no, not another stalker :P

Thank you for the kind words and do keep reading :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: -Pj-
An excellent update girl. Why am I stuck to how to comment. I really loved it, very beautiful and clearly. written. You and I have the same problem with making sure that everything makes senses. And for Nevis grammatical correct. (Not that my last Os was)

It was a great meeting, liked how she didn't give him her real name. A simple story with a very modern touch, things that we forget in day to day life but do instinctily

Aloha Teacher-ji :)

Oh, half the time I post stuff without spell checking then I have to go back a million and one times to edit, edit and edit. I really can not stand ungrammatically correct writing. Grammars in the world for a reason people! :L But above all it needs to make sense with detail, and hopefully I've put a fair amount of detail in :P

Yeah, the backbone of the story is pretty simple. Boy meets girl (or boy's brother meets girl) but in a modern world. A modern Jeevika... Oh, that's gonna be such a culture shock :L

Anyway thank you for the comment, I really enjoyed reading it, fellow grammar nazi :)