virman os I will do anything for u (pt9 uptd pg8) - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hai guys, iam back with the next pt. U guys read it & tell me that how is it.

PART 9

Maanvi:-oh god what we do now?
Virat:-i think tonight we want to stay in this car.
Maanvi:-what?😲 no chance
Virat:-sorry maanvi, iam helpless
Maanvi came out from the car.
Maanvi:-virat...
Virat:-what?
Maanvi:-virat...
Virat:-what yaar...?
Maanvi:-something speak or i'll get bored, i really dont like the silence. U know that?
Suddenly they heard a thunder. Maanvi really scread & hugged virat tightly. Virat is really shocked to see her behave. But he liked it & hugged her back. A couple of minutes later, she realize that she hugged virat. Suddenly she moved back. Virat felt very bad.
Maanvi:-iam sorry
Virat:-so my maanvi is afraid the thunder
She is really like the way how he speak "my maanvi". She is 😳
Maanvi:-virat, u have any lover?
Virat:-YES
Maanvi:-WHAT? 😲
Her eyes filled with tears&heart brokes in thousands pieces. She suddenly wiped her tears b4 virat noticed that.
Maanvi(trying to smile):-who is the girl?
Virat:-u have intrested to hear my ❤️ story? Then i'll tell from the begining
Maanvi:-yes, i have
Virat:-ok, then i'll tell. Its a long story. 3 years b4 i go to my friends wedding. There i saw a bubbley , loveable girl play with some childrens. I saw so many girls in my life. But they cant touch my heart. But this girl can make some feelings in my heart. I really like her careing mind, when shen she helped the boy,who fell on the floor. After the wedding i serched her. But i cant find her. I reached my house, but that girl is not going from my mind. My mom asked me the rreason that why iam looking so dull? I tell everything to her
Maanvi:-then what happend? Whats ur mom said?
Virat:-she tell me that "dont worry virat, if she born for u, one day she must comes near to u"
Maanvi:-then u saw her again? U said her about ur feelings? What is her replay? Really what is her name?
Virat:-are meree maa, just listen & let me speak. Ok?
Maanvi:-ok
Really her heart is crying very loudly 😭 . And she want to cry out. But in front of virat,she cant. Virat got a call from his friend.
Virat:-excues me maanvi
Maanvi(in her thought):- virat, i ❤️ u, but u loved a another girl. Then how can i tell u about my feelings? I just want to 4get all the things.
Virat cut the call&came towards maanvi
Virat:-hello maanvi, can i continue?
Maanvi(smiling):-ofcourse yaar
Virat:-she is always in my heart. Then i joind this college. There so many girls tell me that they love me. But i dont have any intrested in any of them. Bcoz there r only girl that who touched in my heart. Then i reached the final year. We r decided to rag our juniors. So my friends called our one junior girl for do ragging. Really iam shocked to see her, i cant belive my eyes. That was her...who stole my heart in my first sight. I told my frnds to leave her. They do that what i say. She dont know that. I really want to tell her about my feelings? But i didnt. I tell everything to my mom. She told me that u want to tell her about ur feelings very well. But i really dont know that how to speak my feeling ? One day my frnd rahul is trying to misbehave to her in librery. But he cant. Bciz iam always with her. But really she dont know about it.
Maanvi is shocked to hear that 😲 . She remember the incident that rahul is trying to misbehave to her in the librery & virat come there and save her from rahul. She looked into virats eyes. He came more closer to her & pulled her to him by holding her waist.
Virat(continued):-i save her from rahul, then she take me as her friend. Again rahul trying to trapped us. But v escaped from that. Then we go to a resturant & play a dance together. There we met a another couple named manveer.
Maanvi is just 4get to breath. She look deep in his eyes.
Virat came closer to her& whispered in her ears.
Virat:-u didnt understand that who's the girl? That girl is u maanvi, i ❤️ u


Here it is guys. U guys like it? Can i continue this story? Pls let me know that. Pls comment my story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
HEY Y U STOPPED IT.😡CONTINUE SOON DEN I WILL COMMENT🤔
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
Omg your stopped very bad timing yaar
He confessed so happy yaar please update more sooner
And do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Loved the update.Loved it.Wow he confessed.Waiting for her answer. Continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
ohhh myy god, i have to say that i really loved the way how virat told her about his girl, tooo cute...
manvi, no need to be sad, you are the girl😉

great continue soon, dont forget to pm me when you update

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