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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hai guys,
Thank u somuch 4 ur lovely comments.
My model exam is over. And university exam started in 28nov.
But i'll update part 7 tomorrow.
And in this update i add a new couple known as manveer. I think u guys know them in sony channel serial "dekha ek kwab". I really like both of these couples virman&manveer(manyatha&udayveer).
Ok guys
Byee...
love u all... ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Hai guys 😎
Iam back with the next part. U guys read it & comment. Ok?

Part 7

Virat:- he think that iam ur boyfriend. By the way can u dance with me?
Maanvi:-but virat...
Virat:-pls maanvi
Maanvi:-ok
They both go to the dance floor.
Virat take her left hand in his right hand & locked their fingers. Maanvi placed her other hand in virats shoulder & virat placed his other hand on her waist.
Song started.

"mere haath mein tera haath ho
Saari jannatein mera saath ho...(2)
Tu jo paas ho phir kya yeh jahaan
Tere pyar mein ho jaaun Fanaa..."(mere)

Virat & maanvi slowly started dancing. Both really close. They can feel the warmth breath of eachothers.

"Jitne paas hain khushbu saans ke
Jitne paas hothon ke sargam.
Jaise saath hain karvat yaad ke
Jaise saath baahon ke sangam.
Jitne paas paas khwaabon ke nazar
Utni paas tu rehna humsafar
Tu jo paas ho phir kya yeh jahaan
Tere pyar mein ho jaaun fanaa..."(mere)

They totally 4get about that what happening around. They lost each others eyes. Slowly maanvi placed het hands around virats neck.

"Jitne paas paas dhadkan ke hain raaz
Jitne paas bundon ke baadal
Jaise saath saath chanda ke hain raat
Jitne paas nainon ke kaajal
Jitne paas paas saagar ke lehar
Utne paas tu rehna humsafar
Tu jo paas ho phir kya yeh jahaan
Tere pyar mein ho jaaun fanaa..."(mere)

They both dancing without breaking eye lock. Slowly maanvi placed her head into his chest .
Music stopped. Every one clapped. Virat&maanvi looked around. Only they r on the dance floor. Everyone staring at them&clapped.
Someone:-wow, super jodi
Virat&maanvi goes from their. They get out the resturant & goes to the garden which is near to the resturant.
They dont talk each other.
Someone:-excues me...
They both turned around & saw that another couple standing their.
Virat:-yes?
Person:-hai...my name is udayveer &this is my girlfriend manyatha
Manyatha:-hai...
Virat&maanvi:-hai...
Manyatha:- v saw ur dancing. Thats really mindblowing.
Virat:-thank u
Maanvi looked virat.
Udayveer:-yes, that was fantastic.
Virat:-by the way my name is virat &this is maanvi.
Udayveer:-wow,that is super
Maanvi:-what?
Udayveer placed his hand around manyathas shoulder & pulled her close to him
Udayveer:-becoz our friends call us "manveer". And ur name is virat&ur girlfriends name is maanvi. So v can call both of u "virman".
Maanyatha:-wow uday, that is super. "virman"&"manveer". I like it.
The word"girlfriend"is touched in maanvis heart & she smiled.
Manyatha:-by the way u guys r such a cute&lovely couple
Maanvi:-but v r not...
Udayveer:-nice to meet u guys. V want to go. Bye see u later.
Manyatha:-ok...bye...
Virman:-bye...
Then manveer goes from their.
Virat:-ok, lets go
Maanvi:-ok
They both goes to the car parking area.

Night. Maanvi standing the balcony of her house.
Maanvi:-wow, the moon is looking so beautiful.
"yes u r right maanvi" she heard a voice from behind. She turned back. She cant belive her eyes.
Maanvi:-virat...u...here...how?
Virat dont tell anything. He moved closer to her. Maanvi goes back. Finally her back touched the wall. Virat placed his both hands bothsides of her. She cant move. Virat slowly moved his lip into hers. Maanvi slowly closed her eyes. But nothing happen. She opend her eyes. No one is there.
Maanvi:-virat, where r u?
But no one is there. Then she understand that was a dream.
Maanvi:-oh...god...iam...what happend to me? Iam dreaming virat. What is this? I dreamed thay virat kissed me. How can i ? Oh god what happend to me?


Ok guys here the part7. U guys like it? Please tell me that. Can i continue? Please comment my story

love u all...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
whats this , will you make me crazy?? :-D

continuee soon,after this you think i can wait long for the next part ????

owww this was just too good...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was awesome silpa!! Plz continue soon!! Cnt wait to read how virman will fall in luv!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Awww that was so sweet manvi dreamed
Virat kissed her awesome update loved it
Continue soon and do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hai guys, i am back with next update. In this i add shiv & aanandis wedding too. U guys read it & tell me that u guys like it or not?. And can i continue this?.OK, here it is:,

PART 8

Night, virats house.
V's maa:-what happend virat? U looking so happy.
Virat:-yes maa, today i am so happy
V's maa:-wow virat u r so happy. I think the reason of ur happy is maanvi. Am i right?
Virat:-maa, how can u...?
V's maa:-i am ur mother virat , only a mother can understand that whats going on their childrens heart.
Virat hugs her.
Virat:-u r right maa.
V's maa:-but u dont tell me that what happend today?
Virat:-oh, i am sorry maa. I'll tell u
Then he describe everything that what happend in resturant. Then he told about the new couple.
V's maa:-wow, virat. Virman & manveer. I like virman so much
Virat:-me too maa...
V's maa:-ok virat, go to ur room & sleep. Gud nyt
She kissed virats forehead
Virat:-gud nyt maa
Then they goes their own rooms.
In virats room
Virat take his phone & looks maanvis photo.
Virat:-maanvi, i love u. But i dont know that when i am going to tell u about my feelings? But i will tell u very fast. I love u, gud nyt

Next morning, college
Maanvi:- virat, u heard that?
Virat:-what?
Maanvi:-yesterday evening rahul got an accident.
Virat:-what? I cant belive this.
Maanvi:-yes, virat. First i dont belive this likes u. But everybody tell that is true.
Virat:-oh god, how its happening?
Maanvi:-whos know? But u know i am so happy to hear that. Bcoz he dont disturbe me anymore.
Virat:-thats right. A coffee?
Maanvi:-ofcourse
They both goes to the canteen.
In canteen,
Virat:-maanvi, 13th december , thats means tomorrow i want to go to my friends wedding reception. Really wedding is today, but reception is tomorrow. Today i cant go their wedding. So i decide to go to reception.
Maanvi:-whos wedding reception virat?
Virat:-my friend shiv raj shekhar
Maanvi:-hey, he is going to marry anandi, am i right?
Virat:-yes, how did u know that?
Maanvi:-she is my friend. I too want to go her wedding reception.
Virat:-thats fantastic, we can go together in reception. And maanvi, u know that the special of today?
Maanvi:-what?
Virat:- today six 12's came together, i mean date12, year12, month12, then 12am/pm, 12 minute, 12 second. 12/12/12,12:12:12. It will never come this century.
Maanvi:- oh, thats right. I forget about it.
Virat:-tomorrow i will pick u from ur ur house. U wait there for me.
Maanvi:-ok
Next day, shiv and aanandhis wedding reception.
Virman come there together. They goes near to shiv & anandi.
Virat:-hai shiv
Shiv:-hey virat, how r u my friend?
Virat:-i am fine,(he looks anandi) and ur selection is good.
Shiv:-thank u
Maanvi:-hai, anu...how r u?
Anandi:-mannu, i am fine, hey who this?
Maanvi:-oh, its virat. My best friend
Virat:-by the way shiv, its my best friend maanvi
Shiv:-anandi, maanvi u guys talk eachother. Virat u come with me
Virat:-ok
They goes from there
Shiv:-virat, is she ur girl friend?
Virat:-no
Shiv:-virat, look into my eyes & tell me that u dont love her.
Virat:-shiv, please...
Shiv:-no friend, first u tell me
Virat:-yes, u r right. I love her
Shiv:-wow virat, is she know about ur feelings?
Virat:-no, but today i will tell her about my feelings
Shiv:-all the best buddy
Maanvi & anandi
Anandi:-mannu, ur boy friend is too good
Maanvi:-he is not my boyfriend
Anandi:-no mannu, u cant lie to me. I know that u love him.
Maanvi:-no anu, no
Anandi:-mannu...
Maanvi:-anu, please...
Anandi:-mannu, i know that u love him. Bcoz i am a girl & i can read ur mind.
Shiv&virat comes there.
Shiv:-hey guys, whats going on here?
Anandi:-nothing
Virman:- any way, wish u a happy married life
Shivanandi:-thank u guys
After the reception,
Virman:-bye guys, see u later
Shivanandi:-bye, see u...
Virat & maanvi goes to the parking area & get in the car. Virat start the car.
In car,
Virat:-maabvi, i want talk to u something.
Maanvi:-yes, tell me virat
Suddenly they heard a sound & virat stopped the car.
Maanvi:-virat, what happend?
Virat:-i think the tire is puncture. U wait here. I will go & check that someone is here to help us.
Maanvi:-ok
Virat get out from the car.
Maanvi(her self):-Anu, u r right. I love him. I love virat. Wow, i am in love. I really want to tell him about my feelings. But i dont know that he is love in some one else or not?
That time virat come back.
Virat:-hello maanvi, r u dreaming?
Maanvi:-no, no
Virat:-maanvi, there is a workshop, but now 10 pm & the shop is closed. That opened in tomorrow morning.
Maanvi:-oh, god what we do now?
Virat:-i think tonight we want to stay here.


Here its guys, u guys like it?
Can i continue? Please comment my story.
SweetAngels96 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
It wz nice!! Cnt wait 4 nxt part!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
It's really nice...plz cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
sooo they have to spend the night together😉
what will happen???

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow awesome virman alone till morning sounds good
Beautiful update loved it continue soon and do pm me

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