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BadtameezDil.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Amazing! Loved It!😆

PM me if u cont!😃

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swasti tiwari

@sanjana_cool

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Posted: 12 years ago

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hey munnidi...
u and ur imagination rockzzz...
brilliant writing ...i could imagine jeeman turning evil!!!LOL
plz continue...really it's different and interesting
usually jeeman r portrayed as goody-goody girls:))))
gud...plz do continue!!!😊
plz pm me when u continue...😃

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naina

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Posted: 12 years ago

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KYA PLOT HAI...!!!!!

ULTIMATE... PLS CONTINUE SOON N PM ME...

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Nivedita

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Posted: 12 years ago

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🤣 🤣🤣🤣 Esp these lines: "Jeevika receives a call from Viren.. who calls her every hour ,... Maanvi receives a call from Virat .. at the same time - aakhir bhai hain dono... khoon ka rishta hain unka..."😆
"2. Diwali card game , they jumble the cards..and by cheating and card reading .. Jeevika picks a card for Viren and puts a break on Swamini's winning streak..Swamini bua's izzat before her family is ruined..- successfully accomplished

3. Diwali firecrackers.. Maanvi breaks the rule by starting off the fire works which is so against the family izzat ' - successfully accomplished..."

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I am in ❤️ with ur posts😃😆

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littlesmile

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

i wnt cmmnt see my reaction

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..Gowri..

@..Gowri..

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Posted: 12 years ago

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"Jeevika receives a call from Viren.. who calls her every hour ,... Maanvi receives a call from Virat .. at the same time - aakhir bhai hain dono... khoon ka rishta hain unka..."

@ Bold : Aww munni dii, That was dangerously hillarious!!!🤣 Khoon ka rishta hain VV bros ka🤣!!

Mind games of innocent bahu's, LOL dii, i think this one wud've fared well in TRP's than the original one.. Peeps love wen the Bahus plot!!! & that too wen the family is BLINDED with love like the vadhera's, the situation is all the more interesting..!! Continue soon dii.. M jus loving this negative avtar of the behna's than the crying, melodrama & Balidaan on screen!

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Ela Singh

@elasingh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

My first post. Loved ur os.

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Sonu

@applenpeaches

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

😆 You put a whole new twist to the behna relationship... Kandaa ki izzat lootne chali hain dono... Great story line... Will SB accept Manan? Beeji is the mastermind... 😆 That was the best twist..

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sennareni

@sennareni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Awww...munni... Read the OS and looked at the title again...Innocent bahus😲... But telling u i could really relate Beeji to that Madam M character... 😆

You know making the sisters a bit negative was really refreshing... Too perfect and they will sound very bland and boring and leave no scope for development...

Aap se ek guzaarish hai... Aaap na fun fun me he ye VV bros ko sirf in behnon ko romance karne ka kaam mat do...Kuch aur bi karwao unse...😉... U know these two should have boards around their neck reading "Meri biwi mahaan"😆

Aapke behne toh bindaas hai munni👍🏼...Vadheras ke izzat ka faluda banane me tuli hui hai dono...🤣

OMG list bi rakha hai ki kaise izzat ko kharab kiya hai...😲... I am eagerly awaiting for the next update to read the whole list...