Weak writing, intentional or WHAT THE?!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ever since I heard about Jeevika leaving the house I knew it will be a dumb decision but still I thought chalo lets see how it's executed because they may well be able to justify it. I thought they will make Swamini Bua taunt Jeevika more, I thought Jeevika will receive cold shoulders here and there, I thought they will build a track which somewhat justifies her decision to leave but forget all that...they made her look like the dumbest creature on earth today by showing Swamini Bua begging her to stay. Do I blame the writing or was it intentional to show Jeevika in a bad light? Fine they don't want to have any negative characters but they didn't need to show Swamini pleading Jeevika to stay. They could have missed this scene out completely so we feel slightly anti-Swamini but nothing like that. She was the sensible one, she was the one who willing to let everything go and that made Jeevika look utterly ridiculous. No-one would be able to sympathize with her character. 😕

I'm trying to understand the reason for todays episode. Is it weak writing or intentional character assassination? Is it to open up new storylines after wedding or is it a one-off drama which everyone will forget happily in time? TV weddings mostly always have drama but never seen the foundation this weak.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was a senseless track just to add drama in d wedding dey put dis idea..but it was baseless!
hoping by tomorrow itself dis drama wud end n shaadi wud resume!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I've made a post jst a few minutes back saying kill 1 to glorify da other... Its complete character assassination... Dey killed jeevika jst to giv a clean chit to swamini... Tats wat i feel... U must be more disappointed coz u wer expecting sum wer tat dey'll end it up showing jeevika's positive side n it shud hav been tat way... I had expected it to be lame since da news of jeevika leaving was out 😆 da cvs r making fool of such beautiful characters... Utter rubbish..
Edited by shona_virman - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res...

Reemaji ...

will come and edit later.. I posted a long one in atthi's thread about Jeevika's character.. will come and edit it here according to your questions .. later in the day ..

***EDITED***

It is a complete DELIBERATE CHARACTER ASSASSINATION

Character Assassination:

We have seen in EHM, at every point .. based on the requirements of a track a character is assassinated ... be it viren, jeevika, virat or maanvi . every character has gone through this ..

but the BIG difference is .. when the rest of the characters Virat Maanvi or Viren were made dumb,. the focus was on the other track, and other characters and they never made them look so illogical and insensitive

example after the cancer revelation, Viren's character was made dumb - but the story was going forward with Virat Maanvi and Jeevika, Jeevs and Virat's concern for Maanvi was the highlight

Mumbai track - Jeevika was made dumb.. but the high point was VirMan love story which moved forward logically and they were given scenes.. jeevika was sidelined

End of cancer track - Virat was sidelined and his character was assassinated .. but we had the focus on JeeMan and Viren who got the story going logically

but here the track is on Jeevika.. the focus is on her relation for Maanvi and this marriage will fulfill their wishes of hum kabhi na juda honge , but she is the one going against the promise, but in such a ridiculous manner..which i cannot gulp down my throat

and as you have rightly pointed out SB's dialogues today made Jeevika look like a adamant and foolish kindergarten girl

am i still wishing for some solid reason - NO

I don't what they think when they write the script .. hell do they even think as much as we do ??😕
Edited by munnihyderabad - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yes reemz di, this track is totally wastage and nonsense bcos I dint undertsand how can leaving house can get jeevika pay back for her aborted child or manvi happiness will get back?? i cant relate with this track anymore. I also find jeevika avoiding her responsibility towards her husband who stand hby her and lose his child also, jeevika many times avoid viren I seriously want viren this time to get upset and give jeevika back after all he is her husband and jeevika shd get good lesson this time.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The only thing i can think of is they are trying (not very successfully) to show J's state of mind after the abortion - if they are clever they can salvage the situation with developing that track! as abortion is not a simple thing and it has huge impact on the mother plus bone marrow straight after to save your sister (daughter) - the emotional turmoil one goes through is no mean feat!

if not...than its just creating drama for drama's sake and everything will be fine tomorrow! i dont think we have quite reached the stage where we show impact of these things in any normal relationship - everything is brushed under the carpet!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I dunno Reema. I think the CVs just need to repeat history, so they're showing Jeevika leaving the house. Like you, I expected it to be executed in a MUCH better manner. Heck, I expected them to come up with some cock and bull story and justify her actions. But I swear, I had no sympathy for her at that point. She mentioned her promise to SB, and it was SB who had forgotten about it and was begging her to stay back.

I've seen a LOT of characters being assassinated in tons of different shows, but this one has got to be the baap of em all. This just killed it! How does ruining your sister's wedding constitute as repentance?

I don't wanna talk more cause I'm just too frustrated at the current track.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I just hope (though I have a feeling they will just slip it under wedding festivities after Jeevika comes back) they actually show a scene of them discussing this because they need to clear the air otherwise it would just create more misunderstandings!! Clearly this time SB wasn't the cause of problem as opposed to what Jeevika had assumed from her disapproval of abortion! Along with Jeevika, SB also needs to clarify certain things because, she planted the seed of guilt (though we didn't see SB doing any of that after) & whether Jeevika's act or attempt to rectify her "mistake" is enough or is the abortion matter still gonna hang in the air?! OR they could have simply showed Jeevika & SB convo right there & then when she tried to leave and clear the air between themselves to save others from this drama! By doing all of this, Jeevika made the matter even worse as the blame shifted on SB, effecting her & Viren's relation even more whereas her intention was to do the exact opposite!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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can i say today they completely ruined jeevi character too,it was so bad one, even my family ones said she is mad or wat ,bilkul hi sense nai he,and like they half of them will say this .jeevi character is completely considered senseless now ,,instead of manvi considering childish,cv proved even jeevi is not at all matured one. u know this is just because of no creativity at all.and bad writing .just for sake of repeating the same idea during jeevi marriage ,cv brought this idea during manvi marriage too and this time with not even basic sense at all,at the moment people must be laughing at this idea 😕
Edited by chaitu-monaya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I shouldn't be here so all I'm gonna say us the best actors cannot compensate for a poor script. As much as Krystle, Nia, Kushal and Karan act flawlessly and bring that emotion. If the writing has such evident flaws it won't be accept at no fault of their own.

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