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Posted: 13 years ago
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congo for new thread
beautiful update ayesha
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Awesome...love it!!!
dnt want this ff to end eva!!
do continue soon!!
Congrats for the new thread!!!
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Congrats dear on your second thread...!!!!!!! 👏This update was BEAUTIFUL...⭐️...I think now Manvi must take the initiative and try and remove Virat's insecurities...By the way i was very sad because you didn't send me a pm.....Please please do pm me when you update the next part...You don't know how eagerly i wait for your updates...😊
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Hello girlies... Thank you so much for those lovely comments... A big hug 🤗

Chapter 33

Manvi opened the door and gave a wide smile to Jeevika as she pulled her in for a hug,


"Di…. Good morning…"


"Good morning Mannu… you 're looking beautiful…" Jeevika said with a tender smile happy to see her ready and look like a married women,


"Aao na…" Manvi pulled Jeevika in and she followed,


"Manvi tum ready ho toh… take Virat and come down, ma ne kaha that you have to leave soon after breakfast…"


"Then that ritual to make a sweet? When am I supposed to do that…?" Manvi asked,


"You can do it tomorrow… Viren ji is going to office… I am going you two come down for breakfast okay?"


"Haan di, let Virat come out… I will take him with me…"


"tik hai…" Jeevika smiled as she walked out of the room, happy about many things, first her sister getting married to her own devar and becoming her devrani, then Manvi's maturity after the marriage, she sighed as she moved towards the dining table still having a wide smile,


"Beta… Are they coming?" Vanshika asked,


"Haan ma… Manvi tayar hein… she is waiting for Virat…"


"Chalo… we can start the breakfast as soon as everyone comes… Viren is going to the office right?"


"Haan ma… mein Vivek uncle koh bulake aun…?"


"No beta… bhai sahab thoda thag gaye hain… he had asked Raju kaka to bring his breakfast to his room… aur I sent it too…"


"Ma… don't you think that he looks a bit troubled, he was looking so upset last night when I went to give his medicines…"


"Patha nahi beta… mujhe bhi kahi baar aise lag toh raha tha… we'll see…"


"Hmm…"

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Manvi tried to tidy the room till Virat comes out, the room was in a total mess and she didn't know from where she should be starting, she first arranged the covers and the pillow, the moved to the cupboard as she collected all her jewelries and placed it in her wardrobe, she closed the wardrobe and turned to look at Virat as she heard the bathroom door close,


"Chee… Virat… Don't you have the habit to take your clothes into the bathroom?" Manvi asked as she turned her back towards him, Virat looked at himself and gave an amused look to Manvi, he was wearing a pant and covering his upper body with the towel,


"Manvi… I'm just not wearing any shirt… you behaving as if walked out of the bathroom nak…" he couldn't complete his sentence as Manvi screamed and covered her ears with both her palms,


"Chup Virat… besharmi khi bhi hadh hoti hai…"


"What…?" Virat moved towards her as he started to talk but Manvi stopped him yet again,


"No… asie halat mein meri paas mat aao, put a t-shirt and then you can talk," she said still keeping her eyes closed, Virat sighed as he moved towards the cupboard, grabbed a t-shirt and then put it on,


"Done…" he said as he held her hand and dragged her towards the door but she stopped him again,


"Now what?" he asked, starting to get annoyed,


"Dry your hair… see it's still wet…" she pointed at the water droplets on his forehead and shoulder,


"It will dry on its own, I don't normally dab it… Now come we are getting late,"


"No Virat… you will catch a cold…" she replied getting worried,


"No Manvi… I'm used to it…" he replied his annoyance diminishing gradually seeing her concern,


Manvi shook her head as she pulled him towards the bed made him sit and started to pat his hair dry softly, "You might not feel any difference now but such ignorance creates problems with time… aaj keh baad I will do it for you… okay?"


Virat nodded but didn't say anything as she continued to rub his hair with the towel, then moved her fingers through it to check and declared it to be dried and was about to move away when he pulled her towards him securing her in his arms as she sat on his lap,


"Virat… yeh kya…" her voice muffled as Virat pecked her lips lightly,


"Thank you…" he whispered into her ear and Manvi blushed by his way of thanking, then slowly got up and moved away as Virat followed her out,


Breakfast was a normal affair as everyone kept themselves occupied with general conversations, Viren was trying his best not to tease Virat about anything as he remembered their conversation at night, he couldn't comprehend how it went with both of them but he was somewhat satisfied to see Manvi happy,


Virat returned back to his room soon after having his breakfast as he received a call from the office,


"Jeevika… mein chal ta hun…" viren walked towards the entrance as Jeevika followed him,


"Bye jiju…"


"Bye Manvi… waise at what time will you be going?"


"Shiv aata hi hoga…" Manvi said as she looked at Jeevika,


"Haan Viren ji… they will be coming in few minutes…"


"Chalo… That's set then… Bye both of you.."


"Bye.." replied Manvi and Jeevika,


"Manvi… I think you should wear a saree… Ma will feel happy…" said Jeevika as she took Manvi with her,


"But di it will take long…" Manvi tried to avoid,


"No.. it won't I will help you to get dressed, I will wait for you in my room, go and get a saree…" Jeevika pushed Manvi as she walked back to her room,


Manvi pulled a face as she entered her room, then looked at Virat who was still talking on the phone, she left the room grabbing an orange color saree,


"Di… you know how happy I'm feeling right now…? I mean I never thought that I will get this chance again… to take your help to get dressed… I always thought that I will have to learn to live without you after your marriage," Manvi smiled at Jeevika,


"Trust me Mannu… I feel very happy to be with you too, we should be thankful to God…"


"Haan di… for keeping us together even after our marriage…"


"Virat koh bhi thanks keh na hoga… haina Mannu… aakhir wohi tumse shaadi kar ke iss ghar mein le aaya… haina?" Jeevika teased and Manvi whined asking her di to stop…


"Kya di..?"


"Okay baba… mazak nahi karungi… abh jao aur apni pati dev se kaho… that you are going and ask him to pick you up at night…"


"Di aap bhi aao na…" Manvi requested while they walked out of the room Vanshika heard her request and decided to send Jeevika along with Manvi too,


"Haan Jeevika tum bhi jao… have some fun and come back in the evening…"


"Par ma…"


"No par war… go and get ready, and Manvi you go and tell Virat about the pag phere, I couldn't tell him anything about it… I will ask Raju kaka to keep the gifts you'll have to take in the hall… Okay?"


Both sisters nodded and walked towards their respective rooms, Manvi smiled as she thought about meeting dad, papa and ma… then Anu too… she wondered what they must be doing now, she totally forgot Virat's presence as she walked into the room and sorted out her hair,


"What?" Virat who was keenly listening to his manager suddenly shouted and Manvi dropped the brush she was holding… she turned and gave an angry look to Virat, but he threw the phone on the bed and walked towards her drinking in her beauty with every step he took, she stood there having her hand on her hip as she tried to read his expression,


"Virat… is that the way you talk…?" Manvi questioned as she tried to distract him, but Virat kept on moving towards her till they were only inches apart,


Virat clenched his fist as he looked at her, how was he supposed to keep himself under control when she looked so mind blowing beautiful all the time, she was looking so stunning and attractive that he couldn't keep his hand to himself, what was she doing? Testing his patience? Testing his ability of holding himself up…? What…? He was trying hard to give her some time and here she was hell bent on making his resolution weak… He looked back at Manvi as he lazily moved his gaze from her forehead to her chin, then moved his gaze back to her plump and full lips which was inviting him to devour it, he blinked and moved his gaze downwards and regretted his actions, her saree was wrapped so neatly around her that it out framed all her perfect curves, he unconsciously moved his hand towards her bare waist and felt both of their body squirm with the contact made, he leaned in closer to her while he slowly ran his fingers through her velvety skin,


Manvi felt her body shiver, she didn't know if it's because denial or anticipation, her body was feeling like it was on fire, she could feel each and every cell of her body scream out loud asking to stop the torture, she could feel her palm sweat as she made a tight fist,


Virat didn't want to stop, he wanted to touch and feel her completely, he moved his flat palm across her waist and touched the small of her back, pulled her more closer to him and started to leave a trail of kisses on her as she tilted her neck lost in the moment, losing all her senses and forgetting why she was here in the first place,


"Manvi… Shiv and Abhishek are here jaldi aao beta…" Manvi could hear Vanshika aunty calling out for her, she blinked her eyes trying to focus ignoring the volcano Virat was evoking in her by his touch, Vanshika's words sunk in and Manvi jerked out of his hold suddenly shocking Virat, he overcame in just few seconds and pulled her towards him again now his senses recovering and anger taking over him, but he heard bhabi calling out for his wife before he could react to the intrusion she caused,


"Mannu… I'm ready, we are waiting for you…" Manvi turned towards the door and looked at Virat's angry face again, she couldn't muster up her courage to tell him that she was going for pag phere rasm, he was still holding her closer to him with a questioning look and she knew that she will not be allowed to move even an inch before clearing his doubts, she pushed down the lump which was blocking her throat,


"Umm… woh… umm… main," she stuttered, Virat pressed his lips together as he waited for her to speak out,


"I should go for the pag phere… will you come and pick me up in the evening? She blurted,


Virat gawked and removed his hold on her, he was not hurt… nor was he angry… but he felt disappointed… he had planned his day with her and here she was going to carry on with another rasm, he didn't have any problem with rituals… but… he didn't know what… he felt frustrated, confused and lonely…


Manvi felt hurt when he didn't answer her question, she was expecting him to at least say something, she turned and walked out of the room not understanding the situation, not understanding the depth of her action, and lastly not understanding her husband's emotions.


The day passed as Manvi enjoyed with her parents, she didn't forget her moment with Virat neither did she forget their departing, but she somehow had the environment and time to sort out her mind and clear the confusion, she understood that he was not annoyed, nor was he upset… it was just that disappointment of being intruded, her heartbeat rose and she felt her breath hitch, how could she forget, she is his wife and he her husband, each other's companions, soul mates and life partners, not just lovers, if he understood and held his desires yesterday… why couldn't she understand and give him what he wants, she felt nervous… the fear she felt yesterday was not there anymore but she felt shy to think about putting down all the barriers down and carrying on their relationship to the next step, this step would change their lives, there will be no barriers nor any limit… Manvi felt her cheeks burn, she couldn't move out and face Virat who has come to pick her up, di had returned home early as she had a dinner plan with jiju, she heard her dad call out to her and she dragged her legs to reach the hall, it was already an emotional moment for her and she didn't know for how long she would be able to hold up her tears,


Manvi settled on the passenger seat after taking her parents leave, she followed Virat's action with her gaze, she noticed he kind of kept on ignoring her presence, he didn't even look at her for once during the dinner, she thought that it was because of her parent's presence but he continued to ignore her through out there journey back to home too, they reached home before she could say anything and she was starting to get irritated, 'itna bhav' she thought as she joined Virat who was holding the door open for her, she thought of keeping quite till they reached the room, she didn't want to worry everyone at home, Manvi looked ahead as she noticed his dresses, 'did he go to the office?' she wondered, she made her pace quick and tried to keep up with him but his legs were so long that it would be only possible if she runs in a high speed… which was impossible at the moment because of her saree,


Virat smiled at Raju kaka and strode towards his room, totally ignoring his nagging heart, he didn't know why he was behaving like this but he didn't feel like talking anyone right now… it was too early for bed so he changed and settled himself on the couch and surfed the tv channels, something he had got used from few days back, he kept his fixed on the tv as Manvi entered the room,


Manvi settled her arms on her hip while frowning at Virat, she huffed and settled next to him with a thud, 'didn't work', she grabbed the remote from him, 'no', Manvi felt like pulling some one's hair out… not hers and certainly not his,


"Virat…" she spoke out, he didn't even blink and she got agitated but anyway decided to try again as she moved in front of him and blocked the tv's view,


"Manvi move…" he said sternly but she stood still,


"What's your problem Manvi?" he screamed and she moved forward,


"Why are you ignoring me?" she asked,


"Kya bakwaas hai… I'm not ignoring you… Why would I do that?"


"Then what is it that you're doing, we met after hours and you have not even spoken a word with me," she complained,


"I'm not in a mood to talk," he said and moved to the bed,


Manvi gave up as she moved into the washroom, she felt like crying… why was it so difficult to understand him, she knew that he is moody, 'but why was it hurting her now…?' She knew why she felt like crying… she had somehow managed to put up a brave face in front of her parents and kept the tears locked and now it was becoming unbearable, she gave up on the farce and let the tears flow, 'ugh… she hates farewells… It gives you this heavy feeling that it doesn't feel good until you let the tears flow…'


"Ah…" she let out a small scream as the pin holding her pallu pricked her finger, her vision was so blurred that she couldn't concentrate on it properly while removing it,


Virat heard her hiss and was almost going push the door open but resisted thinking about her personal space,


"Manvi kya hua…?" he asked unable to stay insensitive,


Manvi gulped as she tried to answer him, she didn't want him to realize that she was crying, she opened the tap and washed her face with the cold water,


"Kuch nahi… I'm fine…" she replied but Virat knew that she was lying,


Manvi splashed the water on her face repeatedly, then was satisfied with her appearance before she went in front of Virat, 'she didn't want to upset him by letting him know about her tears, it's not that she was hurt or anything it's just her habit, she needed to cry when she felt like crying… and it would bring her back to normal,


"Kya hua?" Virat asked out as soon as she stepped into the room and Manvi blinked her eyes, 'was he really talking to her?' she wondered but smiled as she moved closer to him,


"Haan… it's just the pin, I was not concentrating and it pricked my finger," she explained,


He grabbed her finger and checked it with so much sincerity that she felt like pulling his cheeks,


"Is it hurting? Do you need to apply something? I cant see the wound because of the color in your hand…" he spoke out as he made her sit on the bed and accompanied her,


"Where did your… 'I don't feel like talking' mood go?" Manvi asked and looked as his embarrassed face,


"I'm feeling sleepy…" he said and tried to avoid her question,


Manvi laughed as she stood on her knees on the bed picking up a pillow to attack him, "Tum na bohot nautanki kar the ho… Attention seeker…" she hit him with the pillow,


"Stop it Manvi, and don't scream… log kya sochen ge?" he asked back and realized what she told him,


"And kya kaha… Do I look like an attention seeker to you?" trying to grab the pillow away from her,


"Haan… aur nahi toh kya? Kitna bhav ka rahe thei tum… Aise logon kho attention seeker hi keh the hain…" she ducked as he threw a cushion at her.

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Take care 😃


Edited by aysha1989 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yipee 1st tym i'm 1st to cmnt...😊
Wow Wow Wow Wonderful update Ayesha 😊
i loved the intimate sequence between the two
and VIRAT is such a attention seeker but Manvi, she is so sweet now she understand her
now what happen to vivek hope he'll be fine awesome one
thanx 4 d pm
update sooan
Edited by jannat89 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was awesome update...
loved the room scene...
it was full package update😊😛😉
Edited by avika26 - 13 years ago
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I love it so much! Awesome update. I think it is so
awesome that you can make an interesting story
without any villain or some problem from outside, but
use normal things that happen daily to made my addicted
to this. The love Virat did not get caused him to be like
this, though he doesn't want to hurt the ones he loves,
he does. And Maanvi is being effected, really effected
by this. It is so beautifully written. I am amazed, the way
yo carry of this is briljant. Love the update!
Edited by BrunoMars - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very cute update!!
The pillow fight was nice...😊
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Awesome update... loved it... !!
Cant wait 4 next update...
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thankyou sooo much for the pm and the update is.👏⭐️

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