VirMan FF: love you❤️beyond words.. PART 7!! - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Plz cont soon...this is very interesting story
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Posted: 12 years ago
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okay so guys am back.. please do let me know your comments instead of just liking it..

PART 6:

Manvi rushed to Jeevika's room ' DI.. DI..I have to tell you somethingg,'

'Haan Mannu, pehle beth tw ja' she said, making her sit on the couch. 'Di, woh usdin main Virat k saath dinner p gayi thi na, usne mujhse kaha, k...' she stopped, seeing her di's expression who was smiling, mischieviously..' Di?why am i getting a feeling ke meri di mujhse kuch chupa rahi hai?haan?'

Jeevika couldn't control her laughter.. 'Manvi, what did Virat say?you're telling me something..'

'yeah so di, he told me that he loves me, Di am so so happy..i can't explain Di..'

'so you love him back??'

'Ofcourse Di, is this..' she was stopped by jeevika..' My sister loved someone, and i got to know about it now?Manvi, Virat is my devar but he confided in me, and his bhai at first.. he had told about his feelings to us sometime back.. But you are telling me, now? she said with a grin, trying to hide it from manvi.

' Di, m really very sorry,' She felt really bad about this.. ' But di, i promise i'll never hide anything from you in the future..pakka..'she said, sadly.

'Mannu, pagl hai kya?main tou esei tujhe tang karai thi. Main buhat khush hun tumlog k liye, par Manvi ek aur baat? you are going to be in your limits? Mujhe tujh par poora barosa hai but tujhe pyaar hwa hai, jisme tujhe kuch nae dikhega i know, tabhi am warning you pehle se..'

' Aray di, ap tension mat lo. mujhe apse kuch baat karni thi?' said Manvi, getting serious.

' haan bol na?' ' Di, Virat tw kuch hi dino main newyork .. chala jaega, kya humara rishta agey tak jasakta hai? apko kya lagta hai? main usey rok lun?'

'Manvi dekh, pehli baat tw yeh ke phle tujhe apne dil ki sunni chaye, kya tujhe Virat pe bharosa hai ke tu apni ane wali zindagi uske naam karde?bina kisi guarantee ke?And ofcourse agar tera dil maan rha hai, tw tumlog kw rishta zarror agey jaega.. And tu newyork wali baat ek baar Virat se karle Mannu'

'G di..' she said.Jeevika kissed her on her forehead ' Ab ja, thori dair araam karle'

Manvi goes, she was just walking past Virat's room when she saw him , sitting with his guitar.She went it.

'Virat?' she called out, coming inside.'Manvi?you?come, sit here?' Manvi sat beside him on the bed..' You love the guitar alot?right?' she asked. 'Not more than i love you'

'VIrat?If i ask you something, will you answer me honestly?'

'yes?' he asked, tensed.. Why was Manvi saying such weird things..

'why are you going to Newyork'

'manvi?you know na, i want to start a career, officially. And newyork is the best place for music'

'Virat, i am really proud of you, but i don't want you to go?'

'you don't me to go?'

'i know i am a little selfish, but how am i going to live without you, batao?'

'tw it's simple Manvi, i won't go. Main yahin pe koi..'

'Virat?tum aese q hw? itne sweet ? main chahti hun ke tum jao,par'

'par kya?manvi?mujhse tw mat chupao please.'

'Par Virat, i want you to take me with you.'

'what?Manvi?tum pagal ho? you came here, all the way from Chandigarh for your course?tum pagal hw?nae, you can't. and koi kese ane dega,'

'Virat?what if you marry me? do you want to marry me?'

Virat didn't know what to say, He wanted Manvi more than anything in his life. And he couldn't wait for the day.. but how could he marry her, without any career?

'Manvi, i want to marry you,but ubhi mere pas kuch nae hai,kya doonga main tumhe,bus woh cds jw tumne radio p publish karwayn thin, unhin se mile paise hain, aur kuchnae..'

'virat yeh kesi baaten karahe hw?main tumse cheezon k lye tw shaadi nae karai. you lve me, that's more than enough for me.'

'Manvi, bus main bhi shaadi nae karsakta, main newyork nae jaonga, yahyn p apnna itna acha career set karunga ke we will get married soon' He smiled, assuring her,Manvi didin't want this,

'Virat?why are you not getting it?I want you to go to NY..But if you go to new york we both don't know,when will we meet up next,what if...but agar hum saath jaen tw, m sure ke we will be together forevr,'

'you think, main badal jaonga, manvi wahaan jaakey? But believe me Manvi mujhe nae jaana such..

'Nae Virat, tum nae badloge, par enviorment se bhi buhat.' she stopped in her tracks,What was she saying,yeah she felt this, but she knew that Virat wasn't like tht,and she had said it by mistake..

''It means, you don't trust me enough manvi. Tabhi kehraha hun, Am not going anywhere. Ab choro yeh sab fazool ki baten , m tired. main soraha hun..' he said,sternly and went to bed.

'par Virat, meri baat tw..'

'Manvi,buhat raat hochuki hai, apne kamre main jao. Please,' he said,turning his back on her. Manvi silently left the room, with tears in her eyes..

Virat couldn't beileve his ears. How could Manvi even think like that?She, was the only reason he was going away from her, to make her feel proud..And now when she said, that she didn't want him to go., he had decided that he wouldn't go..but she.. she had just said it so simply,not even thinking that it would hurt him. MANVI!! TUM TO ESI NAE THI !! He was hurt..

Manvi couldn't do anything but toss in her sleep, she was so ashamed of herself.. Virat loved her so much, and what had she given him..

The next day:

Virat hadn't come out of his room till lunch, so Manvi decided to text him..

'Was Talking to him last night, i thought everything was the same, but then i realized. HE didn't say Iloveyou like he used to.'

Virat didn't know what to reply back when his, phone flashed a text from Manvi..He simply replied.

'Maybe he didn't want to, simply because he was hurt.'

Manvi knew he was hurt, but she tried to cheer him up.

M- Virat look, i have even worn your bracelet.. I loved it.'

V- NOT INTERESTED.

M- look am sorry,

V- STOP IT MANVI, JUST STOP IT. YOU KNOW YOU WERE RIGHT, AM LIKE THAT. I will change after going to NY , know why?because then only, i will get some sense back, i am sorry .. you were right.

M- I didn't mean that Virat, i swear..' NO REPLY.

M- VIrat , m sorry..'-- no reply.

M- Virat, m really very sorry na.' Still no reply.

And then, Manvi knew she had to do something big to get him back. She loved him alot, couldn't loose him like that, over a small fight..

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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
nice update..!!!
I can understand Manvi's insecurity but sometimes its not jus the lack of trust but its the fear of losing someone u cant live without...
i wish Virat will understand ..
btw the sms part was really very cute ...
cont. soon m eagerly waitin n yes thnx 4 the pm..
Edited by say_cheese - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Nice update...but nice fights r always good spcially when it comes to virman..as they come out of it different n unique...continue soon n thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
awesome update dear !!! now this is going to be very interesting ...loved it .thanks for the pm .update soon .
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
cont soona nd pm me aussum
story hope maanvi will listen to jeevika lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
from what i have understand it was really good, but can you please write in english that i can understand the full part, pleaseee
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: hangok

from what i have understand it was really good, but can you please write in english that i can understand the full part, pleaseee

am so sorry. I will keep that in mind the next time i update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
thnx

omg both want to make each other happy
virat want to make her happy by staying n she knws virat life is sininging so she want him to go
but she said what she dint meant
lets see how she manofy virat
thnx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Its real nice and interesting. Thnxx 4 the pm
update soon

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