VirMan FF: love you❤️beyond words.. PART 7!!

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LOVE YOU<3BEYOND WORDS!!

PART 1:

"I just don't get it,kaisi behen hw aap?Us bhoot ki side lerahi hw?" said Manvi Choudary, a 19 year old girl. Manvi loved her sister Jeevika more than anything but se couldnot believe that her sister was siding her best friend.. 'Maanvi tujhe ho kya gaya hai??Virat tera best friend tha kal tak tw?said jeevika.. "hoga di, but ab se woh mera sab se bura best friend hai, i hate him.. " ., jeevika laughed. these two can't live without fighting with each other,but this time kisi ek kw tw apni life ke baare main schna h tha. thought jeevika.. 'acha chor usko,maine tere lye icecream mangai hai abhi leke ati hun..". To this, Manvi's face lightened up..'Knock knock!!kya main asakta hun?:P' said a her di ke devar's handsome voice.. manvi didnt need a second to recognize the voice,the voice which would always cheer her up..the voice from which she wanted to hear the three magical words,but she had to.. she had to ignore today..
'manvi control..manvi control..you have to' she said to herself..
"lo a hi gaya!! tumhare dil ki awaaz sunke.." said Virat.. he knew it would be hard to talk her into ths, but he had no option.. ' i wish manvi tum ek baar mujhe rok lo, i really wish.God help please?' he said to himself.
'dafa hojao. mere room se. ' said she, without looking him in the eye.
' Manvi agar tum mujhse baat nae karogi tw mujhe pata kese chalega k mujhe kya karna chaye?
' hain??' she turned,fuming with anger .' agar itna h shoq tha meri raaye jaanne ka tw us wqt q nae aye jab newyork music academy se offer accept kkarli?'
"manvi meri baat tw sunw?please/?
'bolo tumhare pass sirf ek minute hai?'
'manvi tum mere lye khush nae hw? finaaly main apne career start karne jaraha hun/?aur woh bhi sirf tmhare kehne pe?' '
maine tumhe yeh nae kaha tha k new york main jaake apna career start karw?kaha tha maine kya esa/?tum soch bhi kese sakte hw?apni family se dur jaane ka'
'oh.. tw yeh baat hai tm meri family k lye pareshaan hw? sab buhat khush hain maanvi, tumne neeche sabka reaction nae dekha tha.?aur abhi tw ek mahina hai poora.mujhe tw laga tum islye naraaz hw qk mainn tumse bhi tw dur chala jaonga?' finally he had guessed it,but how could she give in..
'nae .. nae tw . esa nae hai ..'
'soch lo? tumhari ek haan mera faisla bhi badal sakti hai? akhir friend jw hw meri?'
'friend?' maanvi was shocked.. she didin't knw why she was shocked at this line said by virat..he had never gave her any signals that indicated that he loved her,, but still she always had a ray of hope left, which had been broken that day.. she was shattered from inside.
'manvi..ho kya gaya hai tumhe?uncha sun rahi hw kya aaj?? btaw na yaar tum mere liye khush nae hw?aren't you proud of me?'
'aray virat esi baat nae.. bus tumhari itni adat si hgai hai.. khair kuch dino main tw main bhi apne ghar chali jaongi.. phr humdunu apni apni lifes main busy..' she smiled weakly.
'magar main tw apni best friend kw nae bhoool sakta kabhi bhi. tum itni special jw hw;), he winked..
'virat..!!acha baba.. chalo buhat raat hrai hai.. subah milte hain..:)phir discuss karenge k kon kis ko bhoolega. okay?'

'okay..takecare maanvi..' he went sadly, he knew it she never would love him. all he would be to her was a friend..



''please do comment ??should i continue?''


PARTS:

PART 1: ABOVE.

PART 2: PAGE 2

PART 3: PAGE 2

PART 4: PAGE 4

PART 5: PAGE 6 and 7

NOTE: PAGE 11

PART 6: PAGE 12

APOLOGY: PAGE 16

PRECAP: PAGE 18

PART 7: PAGE 20



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Ahw, this briljant, really love it!
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PART 2:

It had just been a year to di's shadi but it felt like she n virat knew each other forever. he would make her laugh till her stomach hurt, and fight with her till she got tired.. Virat had always had a special place in her heart.. which no one could ever replace.she could still remember the day when they had gone to the movies.. the four of them.. her jiju , jeevika, virat and she.. Manvi had got badly hurt that day.. It was an accident, virat's car with the two of them had skidded alongside the road and manvi was badly injured , her right hand fractured.. Virat took utmost care of manvi and even dropped her himself to her house all the way to chandigarh.. frm that day Manvi's feelings had started changing.. She couldnot talk to him without blushing, it seemed to her that Virat also loved her back but today she got to know the truth. she was just a friend..She could remembr when she came to Mumbai after a month or so,she had let her hopes too high.Manvi had come to Mumbai for her interior designing course as in her city Chandigarh thre were no good places for the course, half of the reason was VIrat also.. Virat's mother hd insisted her to stay there till her course. and she couldn't refuse , and again half of the reason was Virat.Manvi had suggested Virat to start his career as a singer as he had a mesmerizing voice.. After a few recordings , he was offered a fabulous career in the NYFA and the last NIGHT HE CAME AND TOLD EVERYONE ABOUT IT.. Manvi could sense some thng upsetting him when he was telling everyone the BIG NEWS. but when everyone appreciated his decision,his reaction changed from tension to happiness.. Manvi looked at the clock, It was 12:00 am . " time flies by when i think of you virat, I jst wish you felt the same way" she thought and rolled off to sleep..


Virat couldn't understand that what should he do?? should he accept the offer or not? if he did, he would be away from manvi for God knows how many years. And if he didn't accept the offer maanvi wud be disappointed,he wanted to make her feel proud, he wanted to make her feel that she was special to him. He loved him and he wanted to show it by accepting the offer. but he couldn't be selfish.. how could he think of himself?and not about manvi's trust in him,. manvi's happiness. so he had to choose manvi's happiness once again. He had loved her since the moment she had called him "Africa Ka Bandar'' , since the first time she had scolded him for forgetting his own birthday,since the day she had worn that beautiful purple anarkali frock, since the time she had sang a song for him "Didi tera devar deewana" and since the time she had smiled listening his song "Tum Ho" and appreciated him, since the day she had got injured by his carelessness, he had always loved her, and would love her beyond forever no matter what happened. Distances couldn't separate them.. they never can separate us. But why had Manvi reacted like this, wasn't she proud?? a dozen questions raised in his mind as he dozed off to sleep..

The next day(at lunch):

Vanisha Aunty(virat's mom); Aray maanvi tum lo na kuch .. ese hi kahaan bhaagi jarai hw??

Manvi : aunty meri buhat important class hai aaj .. presentation bhi hai, have to go jaldi taakey theak se prepare karlun ek aur baar"

"Maanvi tu nashta tw thek se karle phir chali jaana na.. esi bhi kya jaldi hai??" said jeevika..

Swamini Bua( hahah. the story's impossible without her) came in a rush: Manvi main nikal rahi hun.. chalo??

"g bua!!bus ek second"

"aray maanvi tum q bua k sath jarai hw?? " viren said

" Bua nikal rahi hain meri uni ki h taraf tw she'll drop me"

'Aray nae mannu tune khaana bhi theak se nae khaya..bua g ap jaye .. mannvi chali jayegi" said jeevika..

' di but.. iswqt driver bhi nae hai koi aur.."

"swamini bua ap jaaye" bua nods and goes..


Virat comes whistling..
Dada g: virat tum itna late q aye beta??"

" woh .. woh .. woh dada g main zara kuch important kaam karaha tha laptop p.'

"acha beta ab ajao jaldi se khaana thanda horaha hai"

jeevika sees virat: Aray virat tum maanvi kw chor dona??usey uni jaana hai?? chachu bhi court gaye hwe hain n aaj viren g ki tbyt kuch theak nae hai, koi driver bhi nae hai aaj. chor doge?"

" ofcourse bhabhi aapka hukum sarakhon par;)"

they leave after half an hor..

In the car:

VIrat: so?

Manvi: soo?

'hum kal kuch baat krahe they jw incmplete reh gayi thi?? yad aya?"

" nae virat baat wahyn p khatam hgai thi tmne decision lelya hai.. remember?"

" Maanvi tumhe such main mere jaane se koi farq nae parta?? main chahta hoon ke tum proud feel karw mujh pe, apne best friend p.?

' yahi tw masla haina virat, main tumhe as a friend.." and she stopped, thinking what the hell was she about to say.

"kya?? poori baat tw bolo as a friend k agey ?"

" mera mtlab hai virat main as a friend buhat khush hoon tumhare lie?"

"hain???kya bolrai hw? khair choro.. manvi pleaese mujhe seriously batao do you think main theak karaha hoon?"

manvi was just about to say no virat please mat jao but suddenly a voice inside her said: manvi tu itni selfish kese hosakti hai..k apni khushi k lye virat ki itni bari sucess ki baat ki importance h khtm karde.. nae you should be proud of him.."

"bolo?" said his husky voice..

' virat listen main buhat..buhat khush hoon k tum apna career start karne jarahe hw phir do teen saal baad bhi tw humain milna h haina.ese h thri na chr dungi tumhari jaan.and tumhe newyork main bi pka paka ke tmhara dimag na kharab kardya na tw mera nam bhi Manvi Vadhera..sorry'

"manvi vadhera?/hmm.. sounds cute..:)" virat saiid.. she had said it. He couldn't believe what had she just said.Was it a mistake?or her feelings?

Manvi couldnt believe her big mouth.. she and her big mouth.. she cudnt help blushing.. not because of what she said but because of what virat had said SOUNDS CUTE..

"here's my university.. takecare,,' she smiled and got out of the car as fast as possible..

!!! Give me the feedback!!! and thanks alot for liking it!!😊

Edited by princess-mia - 12 years ago
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GUYS M SORRY FOR BEING SO LATE..

THANKS ALOT FOR ALL UR LOVE AND APPRECIATION!!😳😳

PART 3:

Virat was still thinking about maanvi when jeevika rushed in his room. 'Bhabhi??what happened??sub theak tw haina?'

'haan virat everything's good, actually manvi ka phone aya tha woh apni friend k ghar p hai, she said kwoh rat tak aeegi,tum uskw pick karloge??please?m sorry to bother you again?'

"bhabhi?kesi baaten karahi hw aap..ap aur mujhe bother karw,, IMPOSSIBLE:p'

'Thanks virat, i am going out for dinner with viren g and i thought ke tum and manvi bhi..thora time spend karlo.''

'GOSH BHABHI!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!!!! ' he exclaimed, swinging her around..

'bus bus!! yeh sab manvi k lye rakho.. main niche jarai hun..takecare!!', she went smiling.

virat smiled to himself .it had been a month since he had told jeevika and viren about his feelings and jeevika and viren, both had supported him always.. when virat had told them about the offer from NYFA , jeevika was very proud of him but viren disagreed, saying it was not a good idea leaving manvi, but then jeevika assured bhai..' maanvi m coming' he exclaimed..

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'manvi are you sure? you are not going to tell him?' asked manvi's best friend misha,

'nahi misha.. main itni selfish nae hosakti..tu tw meri best friend haina, tu tw samajh..' She and Misha had been friends since she had come to mumbai.. bbut they had bonded very quickly. Misha was really really sweet and caring.. and really beautiful..Misha had known Virat from before as she was engaged to virat's friend Aarav..

'manvi , main tw tujhe yahi kahungi ke tu yeh sab fazool baten apne dimaag se nikaal de, tu jaanti hai tu uske bina nae rehsakti tw wht's the use of torturing yourself? maanvi i know tu virat se pyaar karti hai , maain janti hun, tu jaanti hai,ar virat jaanta hai?nae na? jab tak uskw nae bataygi kese pata chalega uskkw? bata mujhe? tu bollde? phir jw decision virat kw lena hoga lelega? agar woh tujhse sucha pyaar karta hoga tw woh tujhe zaroor samjhega.. but manvi agar tune aaj nae bola na , zindagi bhar afsos hoga tujhe..'

manvi started crying..'misha i really love him but mujhe buhat dar lagta hai misha.. agr , agar usne mujhe reject kardya tw? ya agar wh phir bhi newyork chala gaya tw? main kese rahungi virat k bina??'

'manvi , tu..'she was interrupted by a car's honk..

'manvi lagta hai tere jiju agaye.. ansu ponch le. and jab farig hw mujhe call karna. have to talk. oky?' misha said, wiping her tears..

'yes..'she smiled..

Manvi hurried out of misha's house and was surprised to see virat's car..VIRAT??she thought.. GOD!!DON'T MAKE IT MORE DIFFICULT..PLEASE.. she said to herself..She quietly sat in the car.. avoiding his enticing eyes..

'hey..surprsed??' virat said..

'a bit. where r di and jiju?/'

'they had to go for dinner so to your ill-luck, i had to come' he teased..

'virat.. stop it..' she faced him. her face fuming with anger. she didn't why was she angry.. maybe because she didn't have the courage to tell virat.. or because of virat's decision..

'you wer crying,you know..' he said, parking the car to a side..

she remained silent..

'why were you crying?manvi?'

'virat , i was not.. please drop me home..please..'and to her own surprise. she started crying, again. and this time she cudnot stop..'virat please chalo?'

'manvi..manvi?kya hwa?is everything okay??' he said, holding her hand..

'no virat, nothing is.. nothing is okay,,'she cried more, putting her head on his shoulder.

'manvi, what is it?batao mujhe?please?'

she continued weeping.. 'manvi m getting rstless. what happened??'

he cupped her face with his hand, wiping her tears from the other.. 'Virat.. i can't .. i can't..live without you ..virat i can't..'

'calm down, manvi m not going anywhere.. m not. calm down .. ' he tried to calm her down..wiped her tears,, but it was no use..'i jst wish manvi that you could speak up.i really wish..' he though.virat, you know.. i .. i have those weird dreams about you leaving me, forever. virat i really need you.. don't go. please virat.. please..' virat made her stop talking by putting his finger on her lips.. caressed her hands.. and hugged her tight..

Manvi felt heaven .. she felt peace engulf her .. she wanted to stay in his arms.. forever..until reality struck her.. she felt so awkward being in his arms.. how will i face him now??GOSH..Virat was caressing her hair when manvi puled back, and looked down.. looked anywhere but him.. Virat smiled at the intense moment , he thanked GOD for the moment when manvi said i can't lve widout u virat..He was really happy.. manvi had atleast said half of the truth.. he started the engine and looked at the girl who was stealing glances at him from the corner of her eyes..he cudnot help but smile..

PRECAP- manvi you can't go like this.. stop manvi, answer my questin.but she kept on walking..'manvi, i swear i will never talk to you,ever in my lfe..' she turned..'WHAT IS IT VIRAT?she ASKED again..' why did you do that?why?/' he almost yelled/.,


Edited by princess-mia - 12 years ago
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