virman ss : naa jaane kyun... LAST PART pg 57

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Aenna

@Aenna

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#341

Awwwsum...update hayeee d begining
Of dere luv...
Plz update asap nain..

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Anjali

@cutiepie2244

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#342

After so long u update.. it was really nice... Continue soon...

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Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

saemeen

@shabsem

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#343

Thanks 4 updating after so long. .superb update. .so finaly manvi realizes her love 4 virat. .plz update soon...

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fatima

@fatzo.BFF.spyoo

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#344

haw manvi moke pe choka maring 🤣 khud tou waise confuse but phir b ring mujhe he pehni hai 😆😆😆 kia hoga manvi ka *i know..i know..wohi hoga jo manzoor e naina hoga 🤣* do continue soon.. thanks for the pm 😊

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Nandita

@Nandita217

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#345

Phew!!!!! Read all parts of this story in one go!!!!
Naina...how could you do this??? Everytime whenever i read your updates...i automatically becomes addicted to it!!!!
This is one of your best stories i have ever read of yours!!!! I just loved it to the core!!!

In the beginning of the story only you brought twist & slowly unfolded the story!!! Mind blowing yaar!!!! Superb!!! Outstanding!!!! 👏
First...loved their beautiful & honest friendship!!! I hate rohan already!!! 😡
I loved the fact that virat is giving manvi time to think & decide, despite the fact he loves her so much...if anyone else would have been there...he must have taken advantage of her emotional state & forced to love her or something like that!!!!!
Your last part was just amazing!!!! Suddenly, manvi behaved like she is ruling over virat & no one else has right over him except her!!!!
That was the amazing, beautiful conversation between virman!!!! 😃
In last update...i was just loving her dominating nature & her possessiveness!!! And yes...manvi finally fell in love with virat...just waiting the time when they will be together!!!!!

And yes...you have made me speechless!!! What a story you have written man!!!! Just amazing...!!!!
Excellent!!! Excellent!!!! Excellent!!!! 👏
Hats off!!!!!
Now please please please update it soon...i just can't wait for it!!!!!! Pleeeaaassseee!!!!!!!!! 😃

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mira shrestha

@NIVILOV

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#346

Plz update fast loved it poor virat

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Nandita

@Nandita217

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#347

Hey please update this story!!!!
Waiting!!!!

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sweets1126

@sweets1126

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#348

please update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update 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naina

@naina927

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#349

this is the last part of this ss... i am ending it and hope u all enjoyed this journey... and i am sorry in advance for this abrupt ending...

THIS ONES FOR U MANISHA ~~~

part 14

manvi looked at the ring and remembered that day when she got to know that virat loves her... at that she only felt bad and had anger but now... now she thinks that she was a fool to let him go... to reject him... it was the time of their night out trip in college... virat hasd suddenly disappeared and when manvi came to meet him, he wasnt there... she searched for him and found him in the basketball court near the park.

virat was playing with the basketball as if taking out all of his anger and frustation on that poor ball. manvi looked for virat everywhere and at last found him in the basketball court... manvi saw him drenched in sweat and furiously hitting the basketball... manvi never saw virat that upset or angry, so for fractions of seconds she was scared to even go in front of him... and she knew that if u would say anything, it would worsen the situation as clearly virat wasnt in a good mood... but she moved towards virat...

manvi : virat kyun chale aaye tum aise wahan se...??? kab tak bhaagte rahoge virat aur kis kis se...??? apni life se bhi aise hi bhaagoge kya...??? hua kya hai...?? abhi toh hum sab baatein kar rahe the... hass rahe the...
virat left the ball and glared at manvi... he went towards the net and poured the bottle of cold water on his face to calm himself down... he didnt want to talk to manvi in this state because he might say things that would hurt her and he just cannot hurt manvi...

manvi followed him and again stood in front of him and looked straight into his eyes...
manvi : kitna bura lag raha hoga rohan ko iss waqt...?? kya kuch nahi sunaya tumne usko... usne sirf itna hi kaha na that he is insecure because of our friendship...truth choose kia tha usne... bol diya toh kya ho gaya... tum do minute uski baat nahi sunn sakte the khade hoke... kuch chala jaata tumhara... aise koi kaise treat kar sakta hai kisiko...??? ulta tum rohan ko kya kya nahi sunakar aaye... he is my boy friend got damn it...

virat calmed himself down and looked at manvi who demanded an explanation.. only an explanation...
virat : dekho manvi main tumhe ek baat aakhri baar batana chahta hoon.. tum iss mein interfere mat karo...main jaanta hoon rohan kya hai... dont teach me... aur ek baat aur ye main tumhare liye keh raha hoon rohan jaise ladkon se tum jitna door rahogi na, tumhare liye utna hi accha hai...
manvi : virat tum samajh nahi rahe ho... pyaar karti hoon main rohan se... hadd se zyada.. paagal hoon main uske liye aur wo bhi...

virat moved a step ahead and manvi stepped backwards and now her back touched the net...
virat : paagal tum ho gai ho jo use samajh nahi paa rahi ho... pyar karne ke liye dil chahie hota hai.. uske paas dil nahi hai... he is.. he is heartless and selfish...
manvi : nahi... kabhi nai... virat apni thinking change karo... wo mujhe paagalon ki tarah pyaar karta hai...maine use dekha hai, use jaana hai, use parkha hai, usko observe kia hai... uske baad mujhe pta lga hai wo mujhe sach mein pyaar karta hai. haan uske friends... uski company acchi nahi hai... agar ye ek glati hai toh ek choti si galti ke liye main rohan ko itni badi saja nahi dungi... aur na hi tumhe dene dungi...

virat's anger reached its peak when he heard manvi defending rohan and saying in a way that he was is over-reacting... he always thought manvi would be beside him and now she was standing against him and the thing that pinched him the most was that manvi was against him only because of rohan... he was trying very hard to control himself but now it wasnt in his control so he pinned manvi to the net boundary and held her shoulders tightly...

virat : saja.. right..?? main rohan ko saja de raha hoon, right...??? jo tumne mere saath kia... humari dosti ko ignore kia tumne... mujhe ignore kia tumne... uss ladke ke liye.. ghin aati hai mujhe apne aap se... main kiske liye sab kuch choda... kiske liye humari dosti ko daav pe lgaya... kiske liye... uss rohan ke liye... taki wo aur tum ek saath ho sako... rohan ek selfish aur ek self centered ladka hai... kitna jaanti ho tum rohan ko..??? kitna mili..?? do ghante... teen ghante.. kya kiya...?? usne tumhe behlaya phuslaya... aur tum thehari mother indai... chali jhanda gadhne... kahan jhanda garh rahi ho...?? mere dil mein jisme abhi tak zakhm bara hua hai... uske liye tum mujhse door jaa rahi hoo... mere pyaar ko jaankar bhi andekha kar rahi ho... do u understand me manvi...???

with each passing second virat's grip on manvi was becoming more and more strong and tight hurting her in the process... manvi hissed in manvi...
manvi : ahh.. tum mujhe hurt kar rahe ho virat...
virat loosened his grip on manvi and stepped back realising that he had hurt her with his own hands and he punched his fist on the net...

virat : sorry manvi... mera koi iraada nahi tha tumhe hurt karne ka...
manvi : hurt toh tum mujhe ab kar rahe ho... kya kaha tumne...??? pyaar karte ho tum mujhse aur main tumhare pyaar ko dekhke bhi andekha kar rahi ho... applauding... its great... tum mere best friend ho virat... ab meri kya galti hai ke mere best friend ke dil mein meri liye dosti se bhadkar kuch hai... meri kya galti hai ke tumne meri dosti ko pyaar samajh liya...
virat : listen to me manvi... he isnt the one for you... try to understand partner... being with him will yield nothing... you would end up hurting yourself...
manvi : shut up... just shut up virat... and get lost... dont show me your face again... and i love rohan and i trust him... he would never hurt me... he would never hurt me...

** present **
days passed by, virika's marriage coming closer n closer n manvi realising her love for virat. and today she decided taht she would talk to virat about everything that is bothering her.
manvi rushed to the garden as this time usually virat strolls in the garden.
manvi : virat...
virat : oh hii... lady milkha singh... kyun bhaag rahi ho itna...???
manvi : i want to tell you something...
virat : hmm...
manvi : can we sit somewhere...
virat : swimming pool...
manvi : good idea...
manvi n virat were sitting on the pool side with their feet dipped in the water... and there was silence... which was least expected. manvi was trying to gather courage to speak while virat was wondering n trying to study manvi's expression.
manvi : rohan and i were happy... very happy...
as manvi started speaking, virat was hell shocked thinking why did this rohan topic came up now when everything was going smooth...
manvi : after you left, i was all alone n had only in person in my life n that was rohan. all i could about was rohan but you were always in my heart. how hard i tried to forget you but everytime i ended up wondering where are u and worrying about you... i dont know when n how rohan changed me... changed me into the type of girls he used to hang out with... the type of girls who used to wear short girls and stick to guys. i dont know when i became a part of his group... the group of filthy people with the most polluted minds ever... they used to drink alcohol, consume drugs, used to party whole night in pubs, one night stands n what not. but fortunately i never joined them in all this, for sometime me n rohan were so involved and happy with each other that it all seemed like a dream coming true. soon rohan started changing, asking me to drunk or smoke. i never gave in to his demands n one day he lost all his control n showed me his true colours. we were at a prty n he tried coming close to me. i tried to stop him but he didnt backout instead he shouted on me n vented his anger and frustation on me in front of hundred people. he told me that i am a tease n nothing else... he called me a s**t... he said taht i let you do anything u wanted but when today when he is in your place, i am refusing him. he doubted on me... now he accused me for cheating on him n blamed me for having something with you... i felt disgusted because he put a question mark on our friendship... our bond and then i realised my mistake... i shouldnt have followed rohan like a love sick puppy... for that leech, i ignored you virat... for my mere attraction i destroyed our friendship... cmon i rejected u and your love... i started feeling pity on myself... i lost a gem of a person but i always prayed to god to give you what you deserve in life... i prayed for your happiness... your well being n for a life partner who could heal all your wounds... the wounds which i unintentionally gave you... i am sorry virat... i am really sorry...
virat : and god gave me my happiness... god gave me my destiny... gave gave me my angel back... he gave me my manvi... and i am very happy... what else do i need in life now... now i got you manvi and i am even ready to die this very moment... i got my love... i got my everything back.
manvi : i... i love you virat...
virat : love you too manvi... now i dont want to think abouta nything other than our bright n lovely future...
manvi : why do u love me soo much...??
virat : lets get married, start living with each other n someday we will find an answer to this question as well... what say...??
manvi : what an idea...!!! loved it...
virat : but i only love you...
manvi : i love you too...
virat : ab toh meri ring wapas kar do...
manvi : woh ring meri hai... samjhe...??
virat : hehe,... haan... samajh gaya...
manvi : tum mujhe kabhi chod ke toh nahi jaoge na...
virat : lemme think...
manvi : no... tum kahin nahi jaoge... do u get it...??? tum mere ho...
virat : kisne kaha...???
manvi : maine... u are mine...
and next moment she kissed him shocking him. manvi was about to pull her back when virat pulled her towards him n kissed her back passionately. they kissed each other and expressed their love for each other promising to be together forever... kehte hain na zindagi ka har pal har lamha important hota hai... bar inn lamhon mein se kuch aise lamhe hote hain jo humari zindagi ko badal dete hain... humari zindagi mein ek khoobsurat mod le aate hai... aur ye hi wo pal tha jisne virat aur manvi ki zindagi ko badal diya... unki feelings ko jubaan di... unke pyaar ko manzil mil gayi.

at mehndi function
manvi was going to her room when someone pulled her into a room and pinned her to the wall.
manvi : kya kar rahe lo virat...??
virat : tumhare pass toh mere liye time hi nahi hai... this is not fair...
manvi : everything is fair in love and war... (saying this she winked at virat)
virat (smirking) : are u sure...??
manvi : what...???
virat : i am mean are u sure that everything is fair in love and war...
manvi : yes certainly...
virat : okk then... cool...
manvi : ok then leave me... i need to go...
virat smiled naughtily at manvi making her nervous.
manvi : tum kya karne wale ho...??
virat : tumhe kiss... leaning close to her facer
manvi : no.. trying to maintain distance between them...
virat : dekhlo meri jaan... jyada nakhre kie toh tumhari mehndi kharab ho jaegi... fir mujhe blame mat karna...
manvi : virat... virat dekho koi aa jaega...
virat : door band hai... koi nahi ayega...
manvi : koi dekh lega yaar...
virat : isse accha aur kya hoga... dekh lene do... bhai bhabhi ki shaadi ke saath humari bhi fere karwa degien...
manvi : tum kaise baatein kar rahe ho... dekho mujhe jaane do na please...
virat : no...
manvi : accha toh fir ek shart hai...
virat : shart...?? kaisi shart...??
manvi thought and smiled to herself and said " shart ye hai ki you wouldnt kiss my face, nor my eyes, nor my cheeks, nor my lips... manjoor hai...?? "
virat smirked n replied with a u-r-so-gone look " okk... i agree "
virat's prompt reply scared manvi thinking that may be she did a mistake unintentionally.
virat leaned towards manvi n manvi closed her eyes thinking what was her virat upto. virat looked at manvi and bent down a little and kissed her neck which shivered manvi and sent shivers down her spine. this torture didnt end there but it kept on creating havoc in manvi's senses. virat then kissed her collarbone and looked at manvi and his effect on her. manvi's closed eyes and cheeks which were already turning shade of pink and her shivering lips. virat bent down a little and kissed on her bare navel which drived manvi crazy and she moaned his name.
manvi : vi..virat... stop...
virat stood up and put his finger under her chin and made manvi look at him.
virat : i love you...
manvi : i love you too... ab main jaun...??
virat : haan...
virat opened the door and manvi ran to her room blushing.
virat : ohh god u are great... you gave me what i always desired... thank you... muahhh...
viren : kya ho raha hai ye sab...???
virat jumped lstening to viren's voice and turned around thinking it might end up the topic which actually hadnt started yet...
virat : woh... woh.. woh...i mean bhabhi bahut achhhi hai na... bhagwan ko thank you bol raha tha... unhone itni acchi bhabhi di na...
viren : mujhe nahi pta tha ke meri shadi manvi se ho rahi hai...
virat : kya...?? ye kya keh rahe ho bhai...?
viren : toh tu sach bta de na...
virat : hmm... woh na.. actually...
viren : chod rehne de.. i am going...
virat : i love manvi... from college...
viren : ye naya angle kahan se aaya bhai...??
virat : ye angle toh hamesha se hi tha...
viren : spill the beans my brother...
virat told viren everything and viren hugged virat happily...
viren : i am soo happy for you... main abhi ye news sabko btake aata hoon...
virat : nahi bhai... i mean... u n bhabhi get married... uske baad hum ye baat sabke samne confess kar denge... i mean koi problem ho gayi toh...
viren : koi problem nahi hogi... main hoon na... when viren is here not to fear kido...
virat : are u sure...???
viren : absolutely...
viren handled everything with efficiency and virman and virika got married together on the same date.

virman after marriage
first night
manvi : mujhe na bahut darr lag raha hai...
virat : kyun...???
manvi : virat ye mera first time hai na... i mean pehli shaadi uske upar pehli suhagraat.
virat : toh mera bhi first tym hai... meri kaunsi doosri teesri shadi hai ye...
manvi ; haan wo bhi hai... waise tumhare liye na ye dood padha hai...
virat : i hate it...
manvi : its yummy virat... with lots and lots of dry fruits...
virat : did u made it manvi...?? tumhe kya pta... kya hai kya nahi...
manvi : wo maine.. maine taste kia tha... bhookh lag ri thi na isliye... its actually yum...
virat : ohh... then go on n enjoy... i know you love this dry fruit rich milk...
manvi : thank u soo much...
manvi relaxed and drank the milk enjoying every bit of it and blabbering continuously...
virat : so...?? now that you are done with your milk, can we just-
manvi : yes... i too wanna sleep... very tired...
virat said srcastly " yeah... had to be... shaadi jaisa bda kaam jo kia hai... "
manvi : tum kehna kya chahte ho...???
virat : kuch nai... so jao...
manvi : accha suno... tumhe wo din yaad hai jab hum sab college trip pe gae the...
virat : haan... (resting his head against the headrest and wondering he will do chit chat on his first night)
manvi : tumne kaha tha ke tum apne wife ko bahut pyaar karoge aur usko first night pe bahut accha gift bhi doge...
virat : toh...??
manvi : toh ab toh main tumhari wife hoon... toh mera gift kahan hai...???
virat : ohhh bhukhad kahin ki... nahi hai mere paas gift...
manvi : haww... mujhe bhookhad kaha tumne... main tumhe chodungi nahi virat...
virat : toh mat chodo na... kuch kar na meri jungili billi...
manvi : kya karu...?? arna toh tumhe chahie... main toh biwi hoon tumhari... pati dharm nibhaungi apna... no matter what...
virat : ye dharm wali baat kisne seekhai...???
manvi : beeji aur di... haha... can u believe it... wo dono kaisi baatein kar rahe the...
virat : aur tum besharam wahan hass rahi hogi... hai na...??
manvi : tumhi mera future ho... tumhi mera aaj ho, tumhi mera pyaar ho... tumhi mere pati ho... tahts why i love you soo much...
virat : love you too...
virman hugged each other and being in each other's embrace made them feel like heaven... like a pure bliss. the closeness were buring them both n arousing their desires... virat was pulling manvi by her waist closer n closer to him and manvi was being seduced by the fragrance of his aftershave and perfume. it was basically driving her crazy n attracting her even more. manvi adjusted her hand around his neck and entangled her fingers in his hair while the other tightly clutching onto his shirt. virat's hand were travelling up and down her back leaving goosebumps wherever he touched her sending shivers down her spine. manvi was going weak on her knees and as she was being touched by the man she loves n desires. she never thought, him touching her would give her that kind of immense pleasure. she closed her eyes to feel his touch even more. soon the passion increased and they kissed each other. one kiss turned into two... two into three... and the night passed on...

after sometime around 4 am
manvi opened her eyes after the hot moments of desire and looked at virat... her husband... her love... her friend.. her companion.
manvi wondered " naa jaane kyun hota hai ye zindagi ke saath... achanak se dil kisi ke jaane ke baad... kare fir uski yaad choti choti si baat... naa jaane kyun... naa jaane kyun maine zindagi mein tumse door jaane ki galat ki thi... par kismat toh dekho... mujhe tumahre paas hi wapas le aai... kyunki tum hi meri manjil the virat... i love you jaan... i will always love you virat and i promise no one will ever take your place in my life... not even our children... manvi ki zindagi virat se hai... tum meri pehchaan ho aur meri zindagi ka ek hi naam hai... aur wo ho tum virat...!!! sirf tum...!!! "

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Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago