SS Break my heart, million times NEW UPDATE-PG110 - Page 67

hey nisha, just read this story... awsm. Virat breakin manvis heart, manvis pain nd cutting her hands nd chngin her lifestyle, virat falling truly fr manvi nd nw trying to win her trust nd lve again... superb cncept, u described th emotions fantasticly, i lve their petty nok-jhoks here-those r so hilarious, virat is tryin his level best to amend manvi livin in th same house-wowww...lved it really, my fav part is when virat found out about manvis wounds in her hands-was th best, love this story...:)

aweaome update
disgusted at swamini
hope things get solved soon
continue soon
thanks for the pm

superb nd laajawaab... r th words to appreciate part 23... the way virat conviced manvi fr goin to his house was so smart of him, tht also proves how well he knows manvi inside-out, but all this while what he was thinkin was really hilarious...ha ha.. th incident in th dressing room nd hw they were kicked out-made me laugh like mad.. manvi was so dumb..ha ha.. nd when manvi screamed nd viru hold her nd blurted out his undyin lve was awsm.. waitin to read next, pls add me to ur pm list nd send chap 24 soon..

Nisha update was fab and specially dis song suits der condition perfectly.. God she gt hurt again.. Hope u r not making her hurt herself dis time.. And I love Vanshika's dream sequence lol.. Virman kids.. lmaooo.. And D way Virat confessed.. ❤️

Where is the updatee?? I didn't get it for this SS..my name is in the pm list though.

Continue sooon

OMG Finallyyy u updated this!!! Lovvveeeddd it!! The connection that Vanshika and Manvi had from before was sweet! <3 And OMG hahahaahah poor Virat the way he easily just blurted out everything to his mom! Hahah but it was awesome! And awww the way she found out and she is now going to be cupid! Ughhh seriously why does Swamni always have to be such a chudail!!! She is annoyinggg! Ughhh! Ahhh I wish Manvi had seen Virat getting of the stage! Non the less he better go stop her!! And yay now Vanshika knws manvi loves him too! She better confess soon! Pleaseee update ASAP u left at a very bad part! Pshhh

Superb updt...awesome awesome awesome...SB is such witch...hw dare she do this with my manvi...vanshika is vise versa...perfect mother figure...cont soon n thnx fr the pm...ill read 'begnning' after my exams...pakkaaa

Omfg! That was so awesome though you updated after a long time, it was splendid! How can swamini plan something so huge without even considering his opinion. *upset* awwh vanshika is so understanding, love the way she understands her son so well. Wonder what will manvi and virat do now? Hope you continue soon enough and thanks for the update!
PS: do read my pm to you! Thanks
Jiti