VIRMAN OS-Pehla Pehla Pyaar Hai.. part 8-i - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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ha ha sure continue
wud luv to read more
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pls continue. would luv reading more.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Cuteee, Viraat winks and maanvi blushes 😳
Continue soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yaa pleases cont
waiting for next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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You should definitely continue!
It is Awesome!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi guy part 3 updated hope u will like it hope it meets with ur expectations fingers crossed😊 sorry for mistakes😊 now enjoy reading😛

Pehla Pehla Pyaar Hai..

Precap-viraat carried maanvi in his arms

It was 7:-30 am

Maanvi was cuddled in viraat's arms when she got up she find viraat starring at her,she blush

Viraat-kal ki raat meri life ki sabse best raat thi aur I wish har raat aisihi ho aur har subha bhi

Maanvi blush more on remembering yesterday's night and on his words and said ''meri bhi''

Maanvi started to get up when viraat pull her toward's him she fell on top of him

Viraat-kaha ja rahi ho (where r u going)

Maanvi-apne room mai(in my room)

Viraat-this is also ur room I mean half is urs already and after shaadi it will be full urs he said with wink and pressurizing the word half is already urs and this made her blush more

Viraat-agar tum itna blush karogi toh I will not able to control myself he said while coming closer to her

Maanvi-viraat just stop it,agar sab wapas aagaye aur dekh liya I m in ur room in this condition

Viraat-in which condition (asked naughtily)

Maanvi-viraaat

Viraat-maanvi plz be with me for sometime I want u aur waise bhi agar woh log ne dekh liya tobhi kiya hua phir toh hamari shaadi aur bhi jaldi hogi and phir we don't need to hid anything aur puri permission hogi he said with wink

Maanvi-viraaat

Viraat-okay fine jaao but ussepehle I want my morning kiss

Maanvi knew if she has togo back to her room she has to kiss him so she gave him a sweet kiss dress up and ran to her before the family arrive both of them bath and came out of their respective room as their rooms where next to eachother when viraat saw maanvi he wink and she blush he came closer to her just when he was about to kiss her bell rang

Viraat-bahut kharaab timing hai mere gharwalo ki no problem raat abhi baki hai he wink and went from their to open the door

maanvi blush and followed him

viraat opened the door whole vadhera family entered the hall means while maanvi entered the hall and viraat wink at her and send flying kiss maanvi eyes widen on it she blushed he put his hand on his heart which made maanvi to blush more she ran from their to the kitchen by saying she will bring water for everyone

after break fast jeevika entered maanvi's room while maanvi was busy in yesterday's moment she was blushing when jeevika entered the room she found it all mess all maanvi's cloth were lying on the bed she smile and thought this girl is never going to grow up she started to place the clothes in cupboard but still maanvi was in her own world jeevika tapped her shoulder which made maanvi to come out of her thought she turned around and found jeevika

maanvi-di aap kab aai,aur yeh sab kissne saaf kiya (she asked confused)

jeevika-kya hogaya mannu,kal raat ko neend nahi aayi kiya (she asked innocently)

when jeevika mentioned ''kal raat'' she remembered yesterday's night she turned around and started blushing while blushing she said ''nahi di………….kal raat ko kal raat ko toh baahut ache se neend aayi''

when she turn around jeevika felt weird so she made maanvi turn around while she was about to ask her y she turn around she found a mark on maanvi's neck which was seems to be love bite

jeevika eyes widen she was about to ask her when tarun entered and told sb is calling jeevika

she left making a mental note to ask her later,day passed but she didn't get the time

next morning

jeevika wakeup early so then she will get a time to ask about it actually she was not able to sleep whole night due to it so when she was at little distance she heard the door open she thought maanvi didn't get up this early so who is opening the door she his behind the wall when some one was about to come viren came from behind and tap on her shoulder when she turned around he asked her

viren-jeevika tum yaha kya kar rahi ho aur

before he could complete she stopped him and said vj mai aapko sab bataugi but plz have paitience

they both hid behind wall but it was too late door was closed they miss the chance jeevika ran to maanvi's room and viren followed her confusingly when she went in her room to her surprise maanvi was sleeping peacefully she went near her and check weather she is sleep or not she was wrong maanvi was sleeping peacefully when she about to go she notice maanvi was holding something she tried to remove but failed to do it she was seeing here and there she was clueless what is she finding meanswhile viren was confused with her wife's weird behavior and it was limit for him when jeevika was looking here and there seems like finding something he tapped her shoulder and ask ''jeevika what r u doing y r u investigatingin maanvi's room'' he pulled jeevika out of maanvi's room and bring her in their room

jeevika was embrassed and viren was looking at her with questioning look

jeevika-woh virenjee I think something is wrong mera matlab hai kuch galat ho raha hai jo nahi hona chahiye tha

viren-what do u mean(tensed)

jeevika-virenjee I think maanvi is doing something which she should not do

viren was still confused

jeevika was not comfortable in telling viren,viren sensed it he was about to go when she stopped him and said

jeevika-virenjee plz don't go I need to tell someone I m so confused mera dil keheta hai ki maanvi aisa nahi karsakti but jo maine dekha who bhi galat kaise ho sakta hai

then she tells everything to him

viren-hum isske baare mai baat baadme(later) karege abhi humme viraat se baat karni badima ne hume zimadari di hai viraat ki

(jeevika we will take about it later now we have to talk with viraat after all sb has given viraat's responsibility to us)

Dadaji has called everyone at study after breakfast including virman,but jeevika and viren was keeping watch on maanvi

In study

Everyone were present including virman they were standing below sofa viraat was holding her hand but no one notice

Sb-humne yaha sab ko issi liye yaha bulaya kyuki hum aap sab ko yeh bataana chahate hai ki kal jeevika viren viraat aur kyunki maanvi yaha par hai toh who bhi in saab ke saath Mumbai jayegi

Everyone new the reason behind their Mumbai trip apart from virman they were confused

v-toh family ne hamara mini honeymoon bhi plan kardiya (sms maanvi)

maanvi blush after reading it this didn't gone un noticed by virika

viraat-par q buaji (but y aunt)

sb-kyunki humne tumhare liye ek ladki dekhi hai jo Mumbai mai rehte apni family ke saath aur tumhe jaana hoga woh hamara bahut ache dost hai

by the time maanvi's hand slip from viraat but viraat being viraat held it even tightly aussuring her no matter what I m always urs

precap-virman getting married in temple

so how was it

like

comment part 4 on it's way😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
You updated yay
I loved it great morning scene 😳
Jeevs gettin suspicious, doubt turns in to reality get soon jeevs
Manvi and Virat ki mini honey moon Hayye
Thanks for the pm
I hope next comes a super fast update
Update soon
Live, Love and Laugh
Inayah
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
wow...really romantic:)
jeevika was hilarious.🤣..being james bond 4 her sis:)
loooved the update to core:):)👏
thnx 4 pm dear:):):)🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
Love it, jeevika noticing the love bite and wanting to question manvi, viren helping out and of course out virman the 'risk takers' super cute! Awww virat getting married to Manvi! Sweet! Can't wait for part 4! Hope it's soon! Thanks for the pm waiting for more :) thank you!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50

eee virman r unique nd awsm update
continue soon

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