VIRMAN OS-Pehla Pehla Pyaar Hai.. part 8-i - Page 3

Created

Last reply

Replies

148

Views

44.7k

Users

59

Likes

503

Frequent Posters

PyaasiChudail69 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
#21
hi guyz finally i updated it i sorry for the mistakes i hope it meet with ur expectations fingers crossed thanks for ur comments it inspire me to write 😊 now enjoy reading hope it is romantic one

Pehla Pehla Pyaar Hai..


viraat was wearing this and maanvi was looking like this

Maanvi was buzy arranging the dinner table,it was just an excuse actually she was lost in viraat thought's what happen few moments ago she didn't notice when viraat entered the dining area,he wink when he saw maanvi lost in her own world he intentionally stand behind her and said in his husky voice ''mere baare mai soch rahi ho'' (r u thinking about me)

This made maanvi come out her thought she blush and turn around but viraat was on same spot when she turned around their lips were just inches away and their nose almost touching they were lost in eachother eyes suddenly viraat put his hand on her waist which made maanvi to come back in her sense she move little back but viraat being viraat pull her close but keeping a fair distance between them in this process some strand of hair fall on maanvi's face which was not letting viraat to view maanvi's face clearly he unknowingly he put that strand of her hair behind her ear on his touch maanvi shut her eyes he then started tracking her face with his fingers and maanvi was feeling his touch they both don't want to end this moment suddenly they both came back to their sense both were not looking at eachother maanvi wanted to run and when she did so she collide with viraat as he was still on the same spot when maanvi collide with him be came back again to his sense and moved a side so that maanvi can go as he moved without wasting an single sec she ran towards kitchen viraat was looking down his hand on his neck

Maanvi came back from kitchen after a while their was an akward silence they had dinner tried to ignore at looking eachothers eyes but viraat can't resist he tried but failed he can't stop from stairing maanvi till they finished dinner he was starring at her and she was seeing all this from corner of her eyes they finish dinner and maanvi went to kitchen to wind up her work she was in kitchen lost in her thought of what ever happened till know and she was blushing while passing from kitchen viraat saw this he wink and went from their

Maanvi finished her work at kitchen she close the lights of kitchen as kitchen's one window open in the garden when she went close it she saw someone standing with guitar in his hand she recognized that someone was viraat in that akward moments she didn't notice what was he wearing he was wearing an sleevless t-shirt his muscles were visiable which made her blush viraat knew maanvi was watching him and blushing so he wink and started to play the guitar

He played the tune and turned around when he turned around maanvi hid behind the wall of the kitchen still blushing he came and stand near the wall at one side of wall was maanvi and on other side viraat

He started singing

pehla pehla pyar hai,

pehalee pehalee bar hai
maanvi went from their towards the hall where the garden was

pehla pehla pyar hai,

pehalee pehalee bar hai
viraat too went from their and entered the hall he find maanvi hiding behind the wall of glass he went near her

and stand other side of the glass and again sing

jan ke bhee anjana, kaisa meraa yar hai''.

While singing this he went and stand in front of

Maanvi,maanvi started to walk from their

pehla pehla pyar hai,

pehalee pehalee bar hai

he held her by her hand and moved closer to her

now tune started to play

he take her in his arm,she placed her head on his chest her eyes were closed and she was blushing h

placed her on deck chair and seats beside her her eyes still close he kissed her both eyes and she blushed then he open her tied her ,she ran from their and viraat was chasing her

usakee najar, palko kee chilman se mujhe dekhtee, usakee najar
he caught her by her wrist and moved closer to her made her turn around cupped her face and made her to look at him

usakee haya, apanee hee chahat kaa raj kholatee, usakee haiya

she ran and hid behind the pillar but he came stand in front of her she looked at him and then look down while blushing he kissed on her forhead

chhup ke kare jo wafa, aisa meraa yar hai
pehla pehla pyar hai''.
she moved away but viraat again caught her by her wrist and pulled her closer her back facing him on he put her hand on her waist moved her hair and kissed her back

now tune played viraat started to play guitar and she witnessing it from the corner of her eyes

use hai pata, usake hee hatho me meree dor hai, use hai pata
now maanvi was walking still watching him from the corner of her eyes and viraat was moving with her at little distance

sare jahan se juda, aisa meraa pyar hai

now maanvi run towards him and hug him tightly

pehla pehla pyar hai,

pehalee pehalee bar hai

pehla pehla pyar hai,

pehalee pehalee bar hai

pehla pehla pyar hai,

pehalee pehalee bar hai
while this viraat carry maanvi in his arm and took her inside.

I know everyone r so intelligent here no need to tell what happened next😉

like

comment

next os on it's way

after romantic one i m planing to write something in horror soon i'll update that also

Edited by uzmasable - 13 years ago
Krazzy4u786 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#22
Awesome update!!!
How romantic, loved it!!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!
shilpa09 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#23
lovely os...tat was really cute:)
the song u used was really awesome...if possible...plzzz continue:)
thnx 4 pm dear:):):)🤗
Kidrauhl thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Hayye loved it
Thnxs for da pm 😉
Update 😳
hooriaa thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#25
Amazing Update soo so Romantic
Loved the song and Virat stlye
Jannat94 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#26
so sweet update
So romantic as well
Cute and lovely
Loved it Uzma
Thanx 4 d pm
Update it Soon
Radharaday thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#27
Cute OS
Loved it
thz for the pm
ProngsPadsMoony thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
#28
loved the pics
thanx for pm
Edited by additive_monaya - 13 years ago
stargirl.kiara thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#29
The style you wrote was tremendous.. Was shocked to read!
Waiting for the next updpate!!!
floral thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#30
awesome please continue soon😊⭐️😆

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".