VIRMAN OS-Pehla Pehla Pyaar Hai.. part 8-i - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago
please update this soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Guyz vl b updating on 26 march
I have board xams i m 12 sci student
I m really very sorry
Thanks for those lovely comments and request luv u all and pray for me bye c takecare
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Guyz vl b updating on 26 march
I have board xams i m 12 sci student
I m really very sorry
Thanks for those lovely comments and request luv u all and pray for me bye c takecare

we understand uzma swthrt... 😊
concentrate on ur exams first...
dnt be sorry...
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Posted: 12 years ago
all the best for ur exams :)
And do pm me wen u update :)
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wooow its a realllyyy amazinggg story i just luved it just read all d parts nd dey r truely mind blowinggg update asapnd pm me wen u update
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i love this os plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz update soon waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Eeks hey guyzzz m back and as always late m sorry for that but as some of u know I had board exams and next month is my entrance exam but I will try to update everyday so this is last chapter didvided in 2 parts yesss omg I can't belive mai kuch complete kar rahi ho the girl who don't even complete her homework is completing an story according to me I had dne nobel prize winning work hehehehe okay but joke apart seriously guyz thanks for ur support so far I know I don't reply back coz m too lazy to do so but I really read them thousand times I know I don't even press like but I read them sachi mai now enough of my bakkk but one last thing special mentions-avi (avika26),keertu and nishal310 (shivali) u r getting the update coz of ths 3 reminders lol so thanks them now enjoy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And yup now-e-days m blank dn't know what to right I just wrote it and I feel the song I selected is not correct but give ur views any ways

sorry for mistakes as i didn't rechecked it

Precap-viraat and virika knows maanvi is pregnant,viraat is happy/excited and virika r shocked and viraat broke the newz he is the father of maanvi's baby

Pehla Pehla Pyaar Hai..


Meri adhoori kahaani
Lo daastaan bann gayi
Ho Tune chhuaa aaj aise
Main kya se kya ban gaya

(Viraat enetered the as soon as viraat entered the room maanvi look at him their eyes meet which had many emotions in it happiness,guilt,care,that missing spark and more over love he came near her seat on bed beside her and cup her face tears following from their eyes)

Sehme huey sapne mere haule-haule angdaiyaan le rahe
Thehre huey lamhe mere nayi-nayi gehraiyaan le rahe
Zindagi ne pehni hai muskaan
Karne lagi hai itna karam kyun na jaane

(words were not forming they were not able to speak so they were speaking through their eyes

v-m sorry maanvi m really sorry plz forgive me I really sorry……….i love u plz

m-nahi viraat dn't b sorry and u r bck to me I dn't wnt anything else and u had given me world's biggest happiness and both look at maanvi's stomach)

Karvat lene lage hai armaan phir bhi hai
Aankh num kyun naa jaane O Saiyyan...

(viraat placed hand on her stomach maanvi placed her hand on his he asked through his eyes its their…..their baby their love is growing inside her and she just nodded in yes and tears were flowing through their eyes)

Odhu teri kaaya
Solah sigaar main saja loon
Sangam ki ye raina isme tyonhar main mana loom
Khushboo teri choo ke kastoori main ho jaaun
Kitni pheeki thi main sindoori main ho jaaun
Sur se zara behki huyi meri duniya thi badi be-suri
Sur mein tere dhalne lagi
Bani re piya main bani baansuri Karvat lene lage hai armaan phir bhi hai
Aankh num kyun naa jaane O Saiyyan...

Mere aasmaan se jo hamesha gumshuda thay
Chaand taare tune garrdishon ki lay badal di
Laut aaye aaj saare...

O Saiyyan...


Zindagi ne pehni hai muskaan
Karne lagi hai itna karam kyun na jaane

(and they hug eachother like no tomorrow while letting go all their egos their anger and where jst lost in moment they broke their hug and he cradled her in his arm and placing hand on her stomach and her on his he kissed her forehead)

Karvat lene lage hai armaan phir bhi hai
Aankh num kyun naa jaane O Saiyyan...

Mere aasmaan se jo hamesha gumshuda thay
Chaand taare tune garrdishon ki lay badal di
Laut aaye aaj saare...

O Saiyyan...

(forgetting about everything their were living their moment and ready to walk on new path of their life together hand-in-hand)

Outside the room

Virika were still in shock they where trying to digest the fact about maanvi's pregnancy that's when viraat broke the news about he being father of maanvi's baby jeevika cn't digest the fact she seat on chair with jerk and viren seat besides her they didn't knew what to do how to cover up their siblings mistake they were shocked manythings were going behind them and how no one didn't got clue about him

Jeevika-m sorry mum-papa maine promise kiya tha mai mannu ko protect karugi uski har mistake ko mai cover karugi but mai yeh mistake ko kaise mistake kaise karu m sorry plz mujhe maaf kardena plz

Viren who was still in shock don't know what to do he was angry on thm how could they did this to them their family how can they

Viren-jeevika ismai tumhari koyi fault nahi hai jiski mistake hai woh hi issi sundharege chalo

Inside the room

Maanvi (was still in viraat's embrace)-viraat di-jiju

That's when he realized in his excitement what he did before he could even react virika entered the room

This part was focused on virman and little virika

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nxt part may b on sunday😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
uzma me first kya kahu yawr it was awesome fab mindblowing just like you aur chota tha par chalta haii cont soon
Edited by sweetyvirman123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome..~! u updated after a long time...But loved it..~!! waiting for the next:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome yaar...
Really yaar after long time you update...
Pleasee continue soon.

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