Zindagi ki do pal--The Diary of Manvi C. Vadhera

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October 20th, 2012

Dear Diary,
Today i met the most intriguing, yet insolent guy ever to set foot upon this earth. The most killer smile, Handsome body, and amazing voice. A voice that only the angels may possess. but his attitude. his only downfall...
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Virat: Maanviii Mera towliya kahan hai??
(her concentration broke away and she was back into the current days setting one year after she had met this handsome guy who was now her husband, her partner, her lover, her everything)
Manvi: Chep...teri towliya hai, mera nahin, mein kaise jaanoo?
Virat: hai mere hardworking biwi, tum kaisay nahi pata, yeh tera kamra, mein sirf ek mehmaan ban gaya, shaadi ki baad!
Manvi: Virat, mera saath baaais nahi karu. tum pachtaungee.
Virat: Theek hai baba, dhoondo ek towaliya mere liye sweetheart.
Manvi: waah, fine fine. chepu. sirf tere liye.
(Hands him the towel and goes back to flipping thru her diary, reading about their journey. all the hard times, the good times, the sad times. all of it. Then she finally came to the day that changed it all)
October 29th 2012
(tears were all over this page, it was the day she found out who her donor was, and why her di wasnt seen at all during the course of her recovery. why no one spoke of her, why no one mentioned chutku...why everyone was so glum...)
Dear Diary,
Aaj mein yahaan nahi hona chahiyee...mera chutku toh gaya...sirf mere vaajasay...i cant take this anymore...everyone is so relaxed but here i am...going crazy...living in the forever phase of regret...Why me? why did i have to be responsible for the death of my chutku...kyun...akhir kyun...mein kyun nahin maroo...
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Virat: Oye Bandar ki Patni, what are you doing...
Then he sees tears in her eyes.
Manvi: Kuch Nahin Sherni ka Pati...sirf.. going down .memory lane
Virat: Manvi how many times must we all tell you its not your fault...you are the most amazing person we all know...the one who changed all of our lives...the inspiration of this family. the life...without you nothing could ever be right Manvi Choudary Vadhera...Do you hear me?
Manvi: Theek Hai...breakfast time, lets go before Swamini Bua gets mad.
TO BE CONTINUED..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey!

Great start...loving the concept and the way it is written...do update soon, and add me to your pm list when you make one!

-Luv Pari
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loved it 👍🏼
if you continue pm me
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AWESOME
plz pm me next time
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Awesome 👍🏼 Update soon and pm me.
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Will comment later, pls pm
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Hey i really loved it and esp 'bandar ki patni' and 'sherni ka pati' ! 😆
Continue soon and can u plz pm me?😊 Interesting to read Virman's life after saving manvi's life at the cost of chutku😊
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loved it continue soon and do pm me
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Amazing start. Loved this part. Continue soon.
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Loved it! Do PM me when you update! :)

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