Virman-Beyond Control (note pg-151)

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preetipc

@preetipc

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#1021

wonderful update.They are married.🥳.Loved the update .U have explained every ritual very beautifully.Loved it.coming to the SR i expected something else also.(Not my fault but my brain's fault,Sorry)😆.Anyways will wait till ur next update🤣🤣.

Ah my virat was so cute.😊.Loved him .That too during the Viren Virat conversation wen he says "I mean nor I would have married her nor would she have had to go away from her family…".It explains how much he loves her and how much he cares for her and does not want to see her cry.So sweet of him.Loved the update.Thanks for the pm.

Edited by preetipc - 12 years ago

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Menika

@BrunoMars

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#1022

You did this beautifully! I mean, it is so extraordinairy !

They are s unique, their clumsyness, their antics, all

caused by the love they have for eachother. They love eachother

too much, and in that process they hurt eachother.

I love how you came up with this, you made it so special,

it was so unexpected. Virat waiting outside, on his suhagraat!

I mean that is so new! And why? Because he feels guilty

for making her cry! Isn't that sweet? And Maanvi with her cute

actions just slams the door! You know? I really laughed out

loud there! And our buddhu Virat doesn't get why she is angry!

As if it is totally fine to come late at you suhaagraat and make

your newly-wedded-wife sleep with her heavy stuff on!

Come on Virat! And then it started to become romantic and thenn...

YOU STOPPED! Do you hate me? I mean? How could you?

No yaar! I really really really love this update!

Edited by BrunoMars - 12 years ago

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firefly25

@firefly25

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#1023

YAY..THEY FINALLY GOT MARRIED..

and that wedding night is so Virat-manvi..UNIQUE..

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Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#1024

amazing update!!! Virman married..u stoped at worng time...but will wait for ur next update!!! continue soon!!

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shilpa09

@shilpa09

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#1025

loooved it:)

virat is really romantic:)...i lyked this update:)

eagerly waiting 4 their marriage:)

thnx 4 pm dear:):):)🤗

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shaimah

@shaimah

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1026

lovely update

i love how you write the emotions..its amazing

continue soon and thanks for the pm!!

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Pyaasi Chudail

@PyaasiChudail69

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#1027

while reading this update was laughing like hell and when viraat refused to go in his room i feel like bang my head on the wall

awee poor girl maanvi i was imagining how she will look after marriage in those night gowns which jeevs where with mangulsutra and sindoor and belive me she will look fab

just wanna say beyond description-i hope u understand what i meant😆

and ya continue soon