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NEHA KASHYAP

@Neha.K.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hello guys...
I know main aisi posts weekend pe banaati hun but idea shidea ka kya hai kabhi bhi aa jata hai🤣
i just the got idea in mind to start an open FF on our lovely show...I will start with an update..after anyone can continue...

We can change the story as we want but i think the main story line should be like Virika -nd their 3yrs old daughter Pihu
Virman - friends but Viraat loves Manvi and trying to pataofying her... rest of the chracters are same...if anyone wanna add any chracter then feel free to do it...

So, What do you think??

non writers can read, comment, criticize, press like.. or give ideas

I'll start with the first part this time guyss..so u would know from where to continue ahead...hope no one mind that...😃

ps - No bashing Please.. this is the only thing I hate... Rest in peace and enjoy and try to follow the title HumSaathSaathHain.. (not for the ff but for yourself)

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NEHA KASHYAP

@Neha.K.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

In Virika's room
Viren is still sleeping
Pihu jumps on bed n tries to wake up Viren

Pihu ; aye papa uth😆
Viren : ...
Pihu : Mishtel Vadhela utho
Viren : (shocked to hear this n woke up) papa ko naam se bulaati hai, ruk abhi batata hun

den Viren tickled her n she laughed like anything

Jeevika came to her room n saw Viren n Pihu doing masti
she smiled n den said:

Viren ji aapne time dekha hai.. Office nahin jana?? bachon ki tarah kehna padta hai aapko...

Viren : arey Mrs Vadhera aap bhi subah na subah parvachan dene lagti hain

Pihu: laughed n said haw mamma haww

JV both surprised n den laughed

Jeevika : pihu ruk tu zara tujhe main baad mein bataungi ...aur Viren ji aap please jaldi uth jayiye der ho rahi hai

Viren : par meri good morning kiss

Jeevika : Viren jiii...aap bhi na... aur haan kiss chahiye hoti hai toh jaldi utha kijiye.. now get up n fresh hoke neeche aa jaiye
aur tu (to pihu) chal mere saath neeche

both pihu n Jeevika goes down. Jeevika made pihu ready and went to kitchen for making brkfast.

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virika-deewani

@virika-deewani

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

Viren came down... and saw pihu sitting in the living room.. All ready to go to school. He goes to look for jeevika and finding her in the kitchen all alone decides to get his morning kiss.

He goes and hugs her from behind making her jerk abruptly.

Jeevika- Virenji yeh app kya kar rahe hau!!! sharam nahi ati??

Viren- ( confused) sharam kesi sharam???

Before Jeevika could answer Viren ki tube light on hogayi aur usse samajh agaya Jeevika ka kehna ka matlab.

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Richa Tiwary

@MTBT_12071316

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey...get goin dears.luvd d idea a lot nd
D updates 2.cont soon

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Puneet

@puneetksingh9

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

i alreadyy lovee it!! :)

please continue soon...

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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

Nice story dear
Liked it
Update Soon

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

awesome idea cant wait to read more please pm me when you do

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Priya

@nobo

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

Iss Bari weekend se pehle e idea aa gaya apko..vadhiya hai 2 din phle e kam ban Gaya ...& Lmaooo don't say rest in piece na...Abhi nai Jana mere ko. Acha start hai ...Awesome efforts..will allow many writings in one piece

& virika - deewani ...do write more yaar

I'll be little help as A toaster must have more romantic ideas than myself ...baki the virika & der daughter...ummm

Par I 'll really love to read u guys