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Latika Gurung

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

awesome update...loved it...i must say u r a fab writer...do continue

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Munni

@munnihyderabad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Pooja 🤗

ohh ok taking a deep breath and searching for words
in the air ,, what do I say ...still thinking

...you never seem to stop amaze me with your writing skill you have nailed it down brilliantly 👏
J's pain and helplessness and viren's hands being tied down beautifully written

I guess this is where the show leads to J's and baby's life would be at risk due to high BP which is really worst and even fatal in pregnancy and viren poor guy this is exactly how the whole thing might turn up

Would love to read your words for Virat and Maanvi

Thank you for coming up with your so called random thoughts which I loved so much
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Edited by munnihyderabad - 13 years ago

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-Pj-

@-Pj-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Neha.K.
Pooja 😊😊😊😊😊 I wish u can get a review through my Smiles only... coz sometimes i feel out of words... your writing makes me spell bounded... Kya kahun..?BriLLinAT.. SupErB...
the idea seemed so realistic..especially with all the things currently going on in the show..This would definently be a great way to put J' pregnancy and her Tension for her Mannu into the script...
It happens automatically and I can't help it, Maanvi has always been my priority and now more than ever.- How true.. it amazed me how overwelmingly emotional you wrote it...,though it was so short. Keep up the good work...the plot is amazing... you are gonna continue na?? :D

I still haven't decided whether to continue but I will see, as I still have to update the other one. 😊

How did I know you would automatically relate to Jeevika. Dumb statement sorry. Glad you liked the randomness of the entire thing - but Jeevika and Viren should have a struggle ahead of them :D

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@-Pj-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Danika
Nice, please continue...

Thank you for your comment. Glad you liked it :D

Originally posted by: latika_AshVik
awesome update...loved it...i must say u r a fab writer...do continue

Thanks for liking it. Hope you did enjoy it :D

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sajanfan004

@sajanfan004

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Hey!
It was really nice! i liked the concept and it was an amazing way in which you have opened the point of views of VirIka in front of us... I really liked it and i think thats the way they would actually be feeling in the show!

Update soon, and do PM me!

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-Pj-

@-Pj-

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: preetivr
random post dear, but it sounded well thought of and written.
great work yar.

loved the medical touch to it.

first pregnancy, high bp, urine test,

preeclampsia.

thats of seious concern

Thank you Preetivr for your lovely comments. It was a random thought and on the spur OS. I'm glad you liked the medical touch to it. I wanted to add something else in as well as their emotions. As situations create emotions - rather than me blabbering their current state.

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-Pj-

@-Pj-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: munnihyderabad
Pooja 🤗

ohh ok taking a deep breath and searching for words
in the air ,, what do I say ...still thinking

...you never seem to amaze me with your writing skill you have nailed it down brilliantly 👏
J's pain and helplessness and viren's hands being tied down beautifully written

I guess this is where the show leads to J's and baby's life would be at risk due to high BP which is really worst and even fatal in pregnancy and viren poor guy this is exactly how the whole thing might turn up

Would love to read your words for Virat and Maanvi

Thank you for coming up with your so called random thoughts which I loved so much
😳

Munni Now I don't know what to say. I always fall short of words when commenting.. Thank you for the huge compliment about my writing skills- personally I don't think I am that great - English was never my strongest or favourite subject. Jeevika's and Viren's struggle is something I really want to see, hence why it comes out in my of my writing. Glad you enjoyed the randomness, it might be continued if I have a sudden spark 😆

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Deepika Asrani

@-Deeps-

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Hey I love the whole thing!

Loved the way you've written their POV's.

AndI think you should defo continue!

And if you do .. Add me to your PM list! 😊

And keep up the great work! 👍🏼

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-Pj-

@-Pj-

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: sajanfan004
Hey!
It was really nice! i liked the concept and it was an amazing way in which you have opened the point of views of VirIka in front of us... I really liked it and i think thats the way they would actually be feeling in the show!
Update soon, and do PM me!

Thanks sajanfan, glad you enjoyed it and liked the overall idea of it. I guess its always a possibility but we will see what the actual writers have install for us. If I do decide to continue I will Pm you.

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-Pj-

@-Pj-

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: KT_4eva
Hey I love the whole thing!
Loved the way you've written their POV's.
AndI think you should defo continue!
And if you do .. Add me to your PM list! 😊
And keep up the great work! 👍🏼

Thanks you KT_4eva- I'm glad you enjoyed reading their POV's I will see if I can continue it :D

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