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ANKITA.ANKITA.ANKITA.ANKITA.What have you just done?? This story is an absolute masterpiece. I read all 9 parts in one go and i was/still am absolutely speechless. The pheras were so beautifully written,it was as if they were happening right infront of me. The part where Virat-Maanvi are intimate. And I especially loved how Maanvi kept his favourite white T-Shirt.I actually cried buckets when I found out Virat supposedly died. Maanvi's breakdown was written beautifully. Then in the next part with Virat-Choti Maanvi. I found their relationship so innocent. I loved the dialogues between during the bag part.And then his meeting with VJ-CJ(They're very cute names.'kahaan se inspiration laati ho, yaar')Him looking at the similarities between and then the where he realises he looks like someone else as well. Gosh, I was like on the edge of my bed.And the latest part with Diya telling Maanvi about Virat. And then her shock. I was like in a dillema with who to side with. I mean Diya totally justifyed herself and Maanvi's pain was shown so beautifully. Dude, you should really join the CV's at Cinevistaas, YOU would take Indian Televison to a whole different level.Phew!! That's the longest comment I've written for someone. But hats off to you, man I can't help it.
-Disha😃
P.S Shaurya-Diya (ShaDia) Gosh I went all nostalgic when I read that. I miss NAIDL. Anyway, I love your work, keep updating and always stay this awesomely creative. And sorry for not commenting earlier- Do PM me as well
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