How things change... - SS updated pg 20 - Page 9

nice update and it is wonderful reading it... it is long and excellent please update soon and waiting for it.

awesome update

Just as I was about to comment, internet at work crashed down & I can't possibly type what I have say on the phone! So will go home & comment, PJ :)

nice update...thanks for pm...try to update soon

thnx pooja for the PM ...i was eagerly waiting for it and the wait was worthwhile...loved the update and waiting for more

Originally posted by: nishyrelan

nice update and it is wonderful reading it... it is long and excellent please update soon and waiting for it.

Thanks nishyrelan for liking it. I know it was long, most of my updates are as I don't know when I update next, so there a tad long in length. 😃

Originally posted by: romanticgurl070

thnx for the pm

awesome update

loll that was a little weird that jeevika was drinking vodka... but still it was good, mayb she drunk for the first tym to forget her sorrow...

please include show virika romance n make jeevs pregnant again... that would b damn cool

looking forward for next update to know y virika left vadhera house n y she broke her relationship with beji badi beji n the rest

update soon please

Your welcome for the PM. I know it was a tad weird for Jeevika to be drinking, But for some reason I wanted to have her drink. I don't know why drinking is always a bad thing 😆. I tend to clear up the Vadhera rift in the next update, not saying there getting back together but why they split.

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

absolutely brilliant

Thanks Pinky for liking it :D

Originally posted by: urmilsalve

nice update...thanks for pm...try to update soon

I'll try and update soon, but not sure when. Glad you liked this update

Originally posted by: Amii90

Alright finally home after a long day at work!! Read your SS once again, PJ just to refresh my memory; I don't know why my comments did not follow each of the update as they should have, it is such a beautiful concept that you have weaved here with your imagination!! The way your work involves every character and yet makes it focus on Jeevika is commendable; one can pick out Jeevika's conflict with her inner self! Despite the fact that Manvi is cured and everything is sailing smoothly, one can see Jeevika holding back and though she does not accept it, her past is haunting her causing a turmoil within her! I love how you have portrayed her relationship with Viren where it is not exactly all lovey-dovey; those small strains within their relationship add a whole new angle to their story!!!! Perhaps the show can develop some similar ideas and add shades to their relationship giving it a variation as opposed to what we have now!!! SB's character is also well sketched doing justice to her on screen portrayal! Definitely looking forward for next update to see what is the narration behind the entire photo mystery, how Virika's relationship shapes up, how does family fit into all this, etc!!!! Do try to update in a reasonable time (that being the time before I have a memory lapse) lol!! Thank you for a wonderful SS- something unique :)

Glad you used your laptop, the phone is very awkward to reply from. You read the whole thing again! That must have taken you a while. I know it has been a while to forgetting what I have written is easy to do. I'm glad that you enjoyed the story from the beginning to now. Somehow I always end up making Jeevika or Viren as the main person but try to include the rest of the characters in. I don't think pain and past is easily forgotten so it is always lurking in the shadows waiting to come out. I still have hope that eventually Viren and Jeevika will have conflict that last more than 2 episodes, they have had some but small things that go on in a relationship as well, love is always there but that variation is needed. Did you read part six on page 11? I kind of did the photo story in there. I forgot to add the link to part 5's post.