How things change... - SS updated pg 20 - Page 15

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Posted: 12 years ago
I Justt love how you pen down endings to your stories...Maybe not too happy but always perfect...
BEAUTIFUL...

The restlessness of Viren & Maanvi for Der respective partners...Was really easy to imagine as u read. As I said earlier what you write is easy to connect with
I especially liked the last part where you RE mentioned those philosophical words from Jeevika's notes...the contrast in her situation & her deleting them...Awesomely penned

Another Fab piece...dude I really love these HOW titles


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Posted: 12 years ago
love the finish
total transition of attitute from the begining chap to the completion
justifies so much the title
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Posted: 12 years ago
Well I just don't know what to say!
Couldn't have been a better ending then this!
Loveed this story, Can't believe its ending! <3
Just beautiful!!

Please Do PM me whenever you write anything... :')

Thank you for giving us such a wonderful treat! <3
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vishwa94

beautifully written!!👏

amazing ending
thanx for pm



Glad you enjoyed the ending. It was a much happier one to the last SS. Thank you so much for bring paient during this SS, as I know I started it back in August and now it is Chrustmas.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aasma1

wooow im shocked for words loved the pdate babe and loved this whole story

when u write anything on virika or both the jodis do pm me..
xxx
<3<3<3<3<3<3



f I write again, I will try and pm. If its over the Christmas holidays. That might be a tad difficult but otherwise that is no problem.

I'm so happy that you enjoyed the whole story as I even though the characters are in tack. I write some strange things :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetdollashita

awesome ending

loved this whole ss...



Thank you for liking the entire SS and thinking the ending was awesome.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: urmilsalve

loved the way u ended it...with special mention to ur line"though all those emotions were valid at the time, they have no place in her life"...well said...this is life which make us laugh when we think about the time we cried in past...thanks for pm...i am happy to have a buddy lke u




Thank you liking the ending. I wanted to bring it back full circle. Fitting with the title. Life always changes. So just like that, even if at one point this emotions are completely valid, it doesn't mean that those emotions always stay with us.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shine123

Awesoem ending...

Luved ur ss...
first the hospital scene then VM anniversary small scene...
the notes one was perfect ...
Brilliant ss ...
Thnk u 4 d pm nd
luking forward to any other story u r thinking to write...😆*greedy me*





Well I know you are greedy. Lol but I did feed into it saying I have another one, up my sleeve. Like I said, not sure about another full SS, like this but small OSs might come your way. Whether it be during Christmas or after.

I'm really glad that you enjoyed the ending of this SS. I thought it might feel slightly disjointed, hopefully it didn't.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nobo

I Justt love how you pen down endings to your stories...Maybe not too happy but always perfect...
BEAUTIFUL...

The restlessness of Viren & Maanvi for Der respective partners...Was really easy to imagine as u read. As I said earlier what you write is easy to connect with
I especially liked the last part where you RE mentioned those philosophical words from Jeevika's notes...the contrast in her situation & her deleting them...Awesomely penned

Another Fab piece...dude I really love these HOW titles





I just love your comments Priya. My How titles! Ha. Honestly my English sucks. I'm known for terrible spelling.

I don't do complexity happy, can be too sweet, I will try but it doesn't always fit for me. There has to be that bittersweet that comes with life.

I'm glad you could connect with that section, as I did think it needed more to make it connectable or relatable.

I really wanted to bring the notes back. They still here not that long, but I know you enjoyed them sync I enjoy writing them. Eva and I wood say, the dark and twisty side had come out. So that had to have a return. It was mainly to show, how the story changed from beginning to end, there is a clear difference and progression. From once writing them to finally deleting them, as in the middle she was still holding onto it. Now it has been released.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: preetivr

love the finish

total transition of attitute from the begining chap to the completion

justifies so much the title



Thank you for reading the entire SS. I wanted to have closure. So that was the only way, as it started with Jeevika and how she has was after separating to now. How things change, I guess worked out to be an apt title for it.

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