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I'm writing a ss.welcum girliz😛
.writing isnt my piece but trying it..criticisms are welcum too..do comment..
INDEX
part 1: http://www.india-forums.com/edit_post_form.asp?PID=61975474&PN=1
part 2 on page7 :http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3122243&TPN=7
part 3 page 10:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3122243&TPN=10�
part one
here is d introduction:
manvi has been freed of cancer since a year now n her hair are fully grown like b4..virman are dating eachother n are soon to get married both d families have finally agreed
virat"(in his mind)its 3 am pakka so gayi hogi ..yaar partner tumhari bahoot yaad arahi hai bas ab aur intezaar nahi hota ..kal hamari finaly shaadi ki date fix honewaali hain..
viren who was thirsty n going in d kitchen to bring water saw lights in virat's room n so he went in n saw his lill bro thinking sumthing
viren:ab toh neend bhi udgayi hogi na apki
virat:arrey bhai app yaha itni raat ki
viren:lights dekhi to chala aya,bohoot kush lag rahe hoon
virat:hoga hi na bhai kal finally meri shaadi ki date fix hone walli hai
viren:acha hua yaad dilaya mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai
virat:aa lill tensed kya hua bhai sab theekh hai na
viren"dekh virat finally tumhari kal shaadi date fix honewaali hai aur gharke saab maan bi gaya toh ab tum koi galti mat karna aur age se ab sabh decisions soch samjke lena koi gadbadi maat karna aur gusse ko control karna plz
virat:haan bhai app tikh keherahe hoon
wid dis viren got up gave a hug n said finally tumhareliya kal bahoot bada din hai best of luck!n he left d room
next morning:whole family was waiting for panditji to arrive especially virat
he ws moving her n der was restless
viren:shaanti rakh bhai panditji ajhi anewaale hai aur shaadi date aj hi fix honewaali hai
virat:aj hi panditji ko late hona tha aur intezaar nahi hota bhai
viren:laughing aloud n saying control mere bhai😆
finally pandit ji arrives..
virat too xcited n hapy
swamini looking at virat a bit irrtated n said:virat shaanti rakho ab tum bachhe nahi ho shaadi honewali hai tumhari
virat:kept quiet.
dadji gave both kundlis to panditji
panditji wid a smile yehe dono ki kundali bilkul ek dusre se mel khaati hai
every1 happy especially virat..
vanshika:wid a smile to panditji muharaat kab ka hai
panditji:2 mahine baad
virat:kyaa pehle he meri lovestory slow track pethi aur abit 2 moths(he said in a loud voice)
dadaji n swamini gave a disgusting look
viren:to virat in his ears(bhai chup baitho varne tumhari lovestory ko break hi na lagjaye)
virat;wid a pleading face looks at vire
unaable to c virat like dis viren asks panditji
koi dusra muharat hai kya?
panditji:haain na
virat viren wid a huge smile kab??
panditji:6 mahine baad😆
virat:face dropped n said nahi aur intezaar nahi karsaakta 2 mahine bad ka hi theek hai
so d muharat got fixed n so to give d gudnews jeevika n viren n swamini decided to go to hrishikesh..virat too wanted to join dem .
do guys here is my first part hope u liked it...do u want me to continue ?
.writing isnt my piece but trying it..criticisms are welcum too..do comment..
INDEX
part 1: http://www.india-forums.com/edit_post_form.asp?PID=61975474&PN=1
part 2 on page7 :http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3122243&TPN=7
part 3 page 10:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3122243&TPN=10�
part one
here is d introduction:
manvi has been freed of cancer since a year now n her hair are fully grown like b4..virman are dating eachother n are soon to get married both d families have finally agreed
virat"(in his mind)its 3 am pakka so gayi hogi ..yaar partner tumhari bahoot yaad arahi hai bas ab aur intezaar nahi hota ..kal hamari finaly shaadi ki date fix honewaali hain..
viren who was thirsty n going in d kitchen to bring water saw lights in virat's room n so he went in n saw his lill bro thinking sumthing
viren:ab toh neend bhi udgayi hogi na apki
virat:arrey bhai app yaha itni raat ki
viren:lights dekhi to chala aya,bohoot kush lag rahe hoon
virat:hoga hi na bhai kal finally meri shaadi ki date fix hone walli hai
viren:acha hua yaad dilaya mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai
virat:aa lill tensed kya hua bhai sab theekh hai na
viren"dekh virat finally tumhari kal shaadi date fix honewaali hai aur gharke saab maan bi gaya toh ab tum koi galti mat karna aur age se ab sabh decisions soch samjke lena koi gadbadi maat karna aur gusse ko control karna plz
virat:haan bhai app tikh keherahe hoon
wid dis viren got up gave a hug n said finally tumhareliya kal bahoot bada din hai best of luck!n he left d room
next morning:whole family was waiting for panditji to arrive especially virat
he ws moving her n der was restless
viren:shaanti rakh bhai panditji ajhi anewaale hai aur shaadi date aj hi fix honewaali hai
virat:aj hi panditji ko late hona tha aur intezaar nahi hota bhai
viren:laughing aloud n saying control mere bhai😆
finally pandit ji arrives..
virat too xcited n hapy
swamini looking at virat a bit irrtated n said:virat shaanti rakho ab tum bachhe nahi ho shaadi honewali hai tumhari
virat:kept quiet.
dadji gave both kundlis to panditji
panditji wid a smile yehe dono ki kundali bilkul ek dusre se mel khaati hai
every1 happy especially virat..
vanshika:wid a smile to panditji muharaat kab ka hai
panditji:2 mahine baad
virat:kyaa pehle he meri lovestory slow track pethi aur abit 2 moths(he said in a loud voice)
dadaji n swamini gave a disgusting look
viren:to virat in his ears(bhai chup baitho varne tumhari lovestory ko break hi na lagjaye)
virat;wid a pleading face looks at vire
unaable to c virat like dis viren asks panditji
koi dusra muharat hai kya?
panditji:haain na
virat viren wid a huge smile kab??
panditji:6 mahine baad😆
virat:face dropped n said nahi aur intezaar nahi karsaakta 2 mahine bad ka hi theek hai
so d muharat got fixed n so to give d gudnews jeevika n viren n swamini decided to go to hrishikesh..virat too wanted to join dem .
do guys here is my first part hope u liked it...do u want me to continue ?
Anupamaa
