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Posted: 13 years ago
Haha..lol so dint expect Manvi to be saved by Manan..
ah loved the way Viraat was so furious about tit..eee
good going Manvi!..
aww loved wen she asked him2 go shirtless and he did..aaawww...lol😆
that part was the best!
ROfl..they have 2 run nw!!!..🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update !!!!everything beautifully described . thanks for the pm dear .
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Posted: 13 years ago
So short? 😲 😔 Next time I want a longer update! 😆 It was really cute! 😛Chaos was pretty much expected! 😆 And the way Virat teased Viren and he went red.. Aw! 😳 I liked the small phone convo between them! 😃 And album? 😲 WOW! Amazing surprise huh! 😃 Lovely update! 😛 Continue soon! 😃
Edited by KT_4eva - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG 2000 pagesss. Now itz tym 4 anova updateee ;) x
dnt yu finkk?? *rhetorical question*
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Posted: 13 years ago

~Important note- Please do read~

Hey girlies, how you all doing.

I'm so glad I've reached 200 Pages, thank you guys for all the comments and support.

So, this is the FINAL chapter. Yes, you read it right, this is the FINAL chapter. Reason being is because I will be starting college soon and I would like to fully dedicate myself to my studies only as the next year or so will be the most challenging years of my life. I would like to concentrate on my work for now and I know that I will not be able to put in the time and effort to continue this FF or write another.

I'm really sorry for those who are upset or angry. I was initially going to end it before but I thought as you all are such lovely people, I should continue until I receive my grades and decide what I want to do.

I just want to take this time to thank EVERYONE for the amount of LOVE, RESPECT AND SUPPORT I have got from ALL my readers. It has been a pleasure reading all your comments, you guys have no idea how much it means to me. I started off with an OS when I first joined and now onto an FF and this wouldn't have been possible without you all so I'm really going to miss you all sooo much! Thank you to those who commented regularly and made an effort to comment when possible. Thank you to those who appreciated my work and sent me those lovely PM's.

Please don't forget me as I will be around the forum once in a while when I do have a few minutes to myself.

A note to writers: Please do PM me your stories, I will try to read when I have time and make a special effort to comment on your work.

Thank you so much again and i really am going to miss you all!😭

Want to also thank Nia and Kushal for doing an amazing job in EHMMBH. This love story is inspired from the two characters and also the other characters present in the story.

Enough of my long speech, here goes the final chapter!

~Chapter 41~

(The final chapter)

The Wedding day Part 2 (Last Part)

"Please call the bride."

Everyone was present in the grand hall chattering away. The beautiful hall was decorated with silver dcor and huge chandeliers. A stage was set up with silver drapes and lighting.

"Where are they?" Virat looked at his watch for the tenth time as he strolled back and forth.

"Relax Virat, there girls, what do you expect?" Viren looked up at the spiral stairs to see if any off the girls were making their way down.

"I know bhai, but come on, there 5 minutes late."

"Don't worry."

"Virat beta." Ritesh came along and stood by Virat. He hugged his son and smiled. "Virat, this is the most important day of your life. I'm so proud of you."

"Thank you dad." Virat took his blessings and then hugged him again. Ritesh excused himself to attend the guests leaving Virat and Viren looking at their watches again.

"Hey, isn't he that guy." Viren pointed towards the entrance to the hallway. A familiar man was standing looking around the hall.

"Manish?" Virat squinted as he looked closer.

"It's Manan. The same guy at that night club right?" Manan started to walk towards Virat and Viren who were looking confused.

Before they could ask him any questions a squeal came from behind.

"Omg, Manan." Trishna ran towards Manan and hugged him tightly.

"Hey Trishna." He hugged her back smiling.

"Trishna, you know him?" Virat asked, giving Manan a weird look.

"Yeah, I know him. Manan, meet Virat and Virat meet Manan, my best friend from America."

Virat nodded and shook hands with him. "You were at the night club right?" Virat inquired.

"Yeah, I was there." Manan looked at Trishna and the two started to laugh.

"What's so funny?" Viren asked.

"Do you know he was flirting with Manvi." Virat looked angrily at Manan and then at Trishna.

The two started to laugh even harder and high fived each other.

"Trishna, you haven't told them have you?" Manan looked at Trishna and started to giggle.

"Tell us what?" Viren and Virat looked perplexed as they looked at each other.

"Well basically, we girls were going to ruin your night at the bachelor party. When we got to the night club, I found Manan there and I told him to help us get back at you guys after what you did to Manvi. But things didn't go to plan after some guys tried to harass Manvi. Luckily Manan came over and the plan went successful after that."

Virat looked at Manan dumbstruck. "Did Mani know?"

"Yeah, she knew, she was only pretending to flirt with Manan."

"Sorry dude." Manan and Virat shook hands and the four started to laugh.

"Manvi beta."

The four turned around to look at the spiral stairs where Tanya, Jeevika and Manvi appeared. Virat watched Manvi as she made her way down the stairs with Jeevika and Tanya on either side. She walked down slowly like an angel coming down from heaven. She looked at Virat as he winked at her making her insides melt.

"Di, everyone is looking at me." Manvi whispered to Jeevika as she walked down nervously.

"Just look at Virat." Jeevika winked as she nudged her.

"Di." Manvi looked away shyly.

"Don't worry Manvi, just relax. Breathe." Tanya placed an arm on Manvi's shoulder to comfort her.

The three arrived at the bottom of the stairs where they were greeted by the elders.

"Manvi." Swamini Bua stepped forward and hugged Manvi. Manvi took her blessings and smiled. "I'm so glad you're going to be the bahu of this house."

Manvi went over to Vanshika and Beeji and took their blessings.

"Always be happy."

"Please call the bride."

"Come on Manvi." Jeevika and Tanya linked hands with Manvi and took her to the mandap.

"Wait one moment." Trishna appeared in front of Manvi and held out her hand.

"What happened Trishna?" Virat asked trying to look behind her to catch another glimpse of Manvi.

"Girlies." Trishna clicked her fingers and the three girls stood in front of Manvi blocking their view. "We want something in return for you and Manvi to get married."

"What rubbish Trishna, we're not giving you any money." Viren argued.

"No money, no wedding. We're going to stand here all day if we have to." Jeevika folded her arms and looked at Viren.

"Bhai, just give it." Virat whispered to Viren.

"Virat, how can I just give it."

"Please bhai." Virat begged looking at his brother.

"Okay fine." Viren took out his wallet and handed the girls a note each.

"Is this it? We want more!" Trishna demanded.

"Take it or leave it."

"Fine, but you're going to pay a hefty price for it."

The three girls moved aside revealing Manvi. She smiled as she looked up at Virat. They took Manvi to the mandap the two sat down as the pandit chanted away.

"You look beautiful." Virat whispered to Manvi as she blushed.

As the pandit chanted away, Trishna sneakily took hold of Virat's shoes.

"Where do you think you're going?" a voice came from behind.

"Manan."

"What's that in your hands?" he asked, grinning.

"Nothing." Trishna gave a fake smile and tried to move away. "Look Manan, you helped us last time help me again. Can you hide these shoes somewhere."

"Sure Trishna." Manan took hold of the shoes and went over to a corner.

Manvi and Virat stood up for the pheres. The pandit chanted away as Virat read out his own promised as he walked around with Manvi.

I promise to love you forever and ever

I will always keep you happy no matter what. That smile will never fade from your lips

No pain will ever reach you without going through me

I promise to hold your hand till my last breath

I promise to be there for you no matter what

I promise to give you all the happiness in the world

I promise to always support you through the good times and the bad times.

Virat took hold of the mangalsutra and tied it around Manvi's neck. He placed the sindoor on her forehead and the two stood up.

"You both are now husband and wife."

The family cheered as they blessed the couple. Virat kissed Manvi on the cheek and the two held hands and made there way to the elders.

"May you live happily together." Dadaji blessed the two and hugged them.

"We should make way to the stage now for dinner." Swamini Bua said as she hugged Virat and Manvi again.

"Where's my shoes?" Virat asked looking at the floor searching for his shoes.

"There ours."

"No ours."

"Ours."

"Ours."

Everyone turned around to see Trishna, Jeevika, Manan and Viren fighting over Virat's shoes.

"Manan, how could you do this, you tricked me."

"Sorry, boys first."

Trsihna tugged hold of the shoes but Manan grabbed hold of it off her and handed it to Viren.

"Viren." Jeevika pouted as she stepped closer to Viren.

"Jeevika, don't even try it."

"Try what?"

"You know what."

"This?" With that Jeevika quickly kissed Viren on the cheek causing him to drop the shoes. Trishna hurriedly took hold of the shoes and ran to Virat.

"We won, we won." Trishna squealed as she high fived Jeevika.

"That's cheating."

"Virat, we want money."

"More money, you girls are so greedy." Viren interrupted.

"Bhai, give it to them, I can't walk around bare foot."

Viren looked at Virat furiously and handed the girls more money.

"Virat, your so going to pay!"

"Okay guy's let's go."

_________________________

Virat and Manvi strolled around outside hand in hand. They sat down on a swing decorated with flowers and Manvi placed her shoulder on his.

"What a journey it has been." Manvi said as she pecked Virat on the cheek.

"We've gone through so much." Virat pecked her back.

"First our fights, then our attraction, then love."

"Then more fights, then makeups, jealousy, revenge." Virat continued

"And now marriage."

"I love you Manvi."

"I love you too Virat." The two kissed each other as the sun rose down.

Edited by missmystic - 13 years ago
avika26 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
earlier i was so excited that i was going to comment first but after reading ur update i m just shattered , u were always there for mah help whenever i needed it...
i am going to miss u a lot as always it was an awesome update...
hope it wouldn't ended here...
i will keep spaming ur pm box...
do reply whenever u get time...
do concentrate in ur work its imp.best of luck for ur future...
lot of lov
avika😊😉

Edited by avika26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Jeey! I am first!
Okejj, you are one awesome writer,
I always tried to leave a comment
after every update. When I see your
PM I always open it immediately.
I will miss your stories, but I am happy
you finished it, as I would cry if you
just stopped.
I love the update -as always-.
I just could see it happen. It is so cute,
so many things happened, just realised
through how many difficulties they went,
and how good you described and wrote
about it. It is really beautiful.
I can't imaigine a better ending then this, it
is just perfect.
I hope to see around here frequently.
Edited by BrunoMars - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful story. I enjoyed all the parts.
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww awesome ending dear... totally loved it... understand why u want to end this FF.. All the best for your studies dear... take care and whenever u get time drop in to write an OS and PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Perfect ending to a perfect story...
Awesome... All the best for college...
Have fun..

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