SS:ISK RISK (virman) part-9b updated, pg-23. - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
I really wanna hit bua gosh cant she bear Virat's happiness evil lady
Dadaji sort her out please
Awesome update
Continue asap and pm
Me please
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
me late ooops sorry
luved it
buajee idher bhi criminal minded (((((((((
hope she doesn't create problem between virman
update sooon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great update I hope dadaji understandably virat and gives swamimi a piece of his mind please pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART-4

All is goin gud'btw, 1 mnth has passed nd jeevika is 7 mnths pregnant, sb has called vanshika in her room,

Vanshika-didi aapne mujhe bulaya?

Sb-haan, who mujhe jeevika k godh bharai k bare mein tumse baat karni thi, actually uska 7wa mahina cha raha hai na

Vanshika- didi mai samajh gayi k aap kya kehna chati hai, aap chnita mat kijiye mai aur kadambari milke sabko invitations bhej denge aur baaki k kaam bhi sambhal lenge

Sb- thnk u so mch, tumne mujhe nishchint kar diya

Vanshika- isme thnx kehne ki koi baat nahi hai, who meri bhi toh bahu hai'accha ab mai chalti hun

Sb-hmmm

Vanshika was busy inviting every1 nd kadambari were busy wid d decorators

Vanshika jst ended calling beeji wen virat was passing by

Vanshika- virat, tumne kal aur parso ki chutti toh le li hai na

Virat-maa, kal nahi ho payega, par parso bhabhi k god bharai k liye toh maine pehle se hi chutti li hai

Vanshika-waise, kal jeevika k gharwale aa rahe hai, maanvi bhi aa rahi hai toh mai soch rahi thi k tuhme station bhej dun par tum toh busy...

Virat happily says- maa mai itna bhi busy nahi hun, yeh toh meri duty hai, aur aap kahe, mai na manu aisa toh ho nahi sakta. Mai jaunga na unhe receive karne.

Vanshika smiles nd says- mai sab samajhti hun.

Sayin this she pats him nd leaves.

Time passes vry quickly nd d awaited day has come. The vadheras nd The chaudhurys were all happy. The function was scheduled in d evening. Jeevika was vry happy was she was abt 2 enter a new phase of life. The time is 5 pm, vanshika, kadambari, sb nd maanvi were in virika's room where jeevika was showing her lehenga 2 maanvi.

Maanvi- di lehenga toh bohot sundar hai par yeh toh bohot heavy hai aap kaise'

Sb cuts her sentence nd says- thnk u, yeh meri choice hai, waise yeh humari jeevika, yani vadhera khandan k bahu ki godh bharai hai lehenga toh heavy hona hi hai.

Vanshika-maanvi, tum jeevika ko taiyaar karke niche aajana

Maanvi- ji aunty

All 3 leaves d room.

Maanvi starts her work, after some time she makes jeevika fully ready 2 attend her function.

Maanvi-di, aap bohot khubsurat lag rahi ho par aapko takleef toh nahi ho rahi hai na kyon ki yeh sach mein heavy hai

Jeevika- thoda sa takleef toh sehna hi parega na, waise bhi buaji ne kitne pyaar se ise select kiya hai na

Maanvi- pyar se?????? di plzz, aapke takleef se zyada unhe apne khandan ki padi hai aur aap keh rahi ho ki...

Jeevika- maanu, aisa nahi kehte hai, accha ab tu ja aur acche se tayaar ho kar aa hum dono ek saath niche challenge

Maanvi- thik hai di

Maanvi dresses herself in a beautiful pink nd purple colored lehenga nd she was abt 2 comes out of her room when virat entered

Maanvi-virat tum yahan ???

Virat- apne partner se milne chala aaya

Manvi- aacha chodo, batao mai kaisi lag rahi hoon???

Virat ' ummm, ekdum bandariya

Maanvi angrily-kya????? Tmhari himmat kaisi hui mujhe''.

She started running behind him nd chasing him since she was unable 2 reach him she took d glass of water which was kept on d table suddenly, she got hold of his collar, b4 thinkin twice she poured d full glass of water on him nd all of a sudden she slipped due 2 d water fell on d floor nd fell n d bed wid virat on top of her nd she still holdin his collar, few drops of water 4rm virat's hair strands fell on maanvi's face, both of them were in their dream world suddenly der eyelock was broken when they heard pinky chachi callin maanvi. Both of them got up 4rm d bed nd maanvi vry quickly wiped her face nd was abt 2 leave when virat said- maanvi tumhe jaanna tha na k tum kaisi lag rahi ho??? nd my answer is- u r lookin like my princess

On hearing this maanvi blushed, lowered her eyes nd left d room.

Maanvi brought jeevika downstairs.

Pinky chachi- haye, mere dono puttar kitne sone lag rahe hai, tum dono ko kisi ki nazar na lage.

Sb- rasame shuru kare

Beeji- ji haan swamini ji

At d night all d rituals were over nd d chaudhurys were all set 2 leave 4 hrishikesh

Sb- beeji aaj ki raat aap sab rukjate toh accha hota

Beeji- dhanyabad, par hum agar rukenge toh madan k kaam ka bohot saara nuksaan ho jayega. Ab hum chalte hai.

Maanvi nd virat sadly waved their hands when suddenly jeevika said- beeji aap sab chalejaiyega par maanvi toh yahan kuch dino k liye rukh sakti hai

Vanshika- haan beeji jeevika bilkul sahi keh rahi hai, woh rahegi toh jeevika ka man bhi behel jayega.

Beeji- thik hai.

Madan-accha toh ab hum chalte hai. Maanvi tu apna khayal rakhna.

Chaudhurys leaves.

Sb goes 2 her room nd sends tarun 2 call maanvi

Maanvi- buaji aapne mujhe bulaya

Sb- o haan maanvi, andar aao na,woh hume tumse kuch baat karni thi'

Maanvi- ji buaji kahiye na

Sb- usse pehle hume yeh batao ki tumhari tabyat kaisi hai aur tumne jeevika k god bharai k function mein njoy toh kiya na???

Maanvi-ji buaji mai abhi bilkul thik hun aur function mein toh bohot masti ki' suddenly( Maanvi talking 2 herself)- control maanvi tu buaji k samne khadi hai

Sb-hume yeh sun k bohot accha laga..waise hum tumse virat k bare mein baat karna chahte the

Maanvi-haan haan zarur, kahiye na

Sb-dekho, virat apne career mein dheere dheere settle ho raha hai toh hume lagta hai ki uske shadi karne ka sahi waqt aa gaya hai'( hearing this maanvi was lost in her dream world,her face was brighten up, der was a light trace of smile in her face, thinking about her and virat's marriage)

Sb- maanvi tum kahan kho gayi ho??? Tum thik toh ho na???

Wid dis she came back 2 reality bt still she was vry happy 4rm her inside, coz afterall buaji was directly talking 2 her abt this

Maanvi-haan buaji main sun rahi hun'

Sb- dekho, maya mujhe pehle se hi bohot pasand thi au abhi bhi mujhe yehi lagta hai ki shez d perfect girl 4 virat par kyon ki virat ko woh pasand nahi hai, mai uske liye aur ladkiyan talash rahi hun, isme mujhe tumhari madat chahiye, kyon ki tum aur virat partners ho, ekdusre ko acchi tarah se samajh te ho, pasand napasand bhi acchi tarah se jante ho, isiliye hume tumhari madat chahiye'

Maanvi felt as if she was flying in d sky wid joy and somebody came nd slashed her wings. A drop of tear escaped 4rm her eyes.

Sb-kya hua maanvi??? Humari help karogi na, virat k liye "perfect" ladki dhundne mein???

Maanvi was lacking words, she didn't have any idea how 2 react? nd wat 2 say?

Sb-hume lagta hai tum bohot thaki hui ho'ek kaam karte hai, kal baat karenge, okay.

Maanvi left d room, she was still mum, while she was walking 2wards her room virat saw her nd called her bt she didn't responded nd straightaway went 2 her room nd closed d door , she sat on d floor nd tried 2 recollect wat has jst now happen in buaji's room.

Virat- ise kya ho gaya, ab tak toh thik thi aur darwaza bhi band kar diya'maanvi, pls darwaza kholo' maanvi plz, kuch hua hai kya, yaar plz aise mat karo, apne partner se to share kar sakti ho'maanviii (vry frustatingly he jst banged d door)

Maanvi came into her senses, her eyes were teary (2 herself)- oh no v..vi'virat darwaza ke bahar khada hai, mai use agar yeh sab bataungi toh pata nahi woh kaise react karega, ab kya karun???

Viren- virat, kya hua tu yahan aur yeh maanvi kahan hai? Niche sab uske bare mein punch rahe hai.

Virat- pata nahi, bahi use kya ho gaya, bhaagte hue aapne room mein gayi aur darwaza bhi band kar liya.

Viren- calm down, virat, shayad who kisi baat se pareshan hai... accha hoga ki use kuch der akela chor dete hai

Virat- par bhai, hum asie kaise use akele''

Viren- relax, mai hu na, tu niche ja, mai use lata hun, okay.

Virat-par'..

Viren par war kuch nahi, tu ja, mai sab samhal lunga'

Virat- thik hai bhai, I trust u.

virat leaves, viren thinks in his mind- m sorry bhai, maine tujhe jaan bujhkar niche bhej diya, kyon ki pata nahi, kyon tere baton se mujhe aisa laga k kisi na kisi wajah se maanvi tujhe face nahi karna chahti, umm ek kaam karta hun mai ekbar maanvi ko bulata hun.

Viren (pretending 2 b casual)- maanvi, tum andar kya kar rahi ho???niche sab tmhe bula rahe hai, ok. jaldi aao, ma niche ja raha hun.

Viren said d last line purposely 2 c wat she does?

Maanvi (thinks after hearing viren's voice)-jiju' haan mai yeh sab jiju se share kar sakti hun.

Immediately she stood up nd opened d door, she saw dat viren was goin she jst ran after him nd said- jiju, mujhe aapse kuch baat karni hai

Viren-haan haan kaho

Maanvi- yahan nahi, mere kamre mein

Viren- okay'

TO BE CONTINUED'..

hope u guyzz liked it

Edited by marley - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
Tat was really gud:) i luvd it... Aur iss swamini ki toh...*angry face* i wish i cud smack her face... Har jagah apni taang adati hai... Vadhera family ki wana be...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Awesome!.
Love their little moments!...
Feel sad for Maanvi but if she is going to tell Viren then maybe he will do something..can't wait!
Thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice update.😃 as usual swamini😡 thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48

it was brilliant! swamini as usual evil! continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Briljant! Now lt's wait to know what Viren will do.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks for the awesome update
loved it
continue soon and do pm me!!

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