SS:ISK RISK (virman) part-9b updated, pg-23.

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finally i've decided 2 write on my favorite couple "virman/nishal"...dis is my vry 1st attempt...

INDEX-

PART-1 : page-1

PART-2 : page-3

PART-3 : page-6

PART-4 : page-7

PART-5 : page-10

PART-6 : page-12

PART-7 : page-15

PART-8 : page-18

PART-9a : page-21

PART-9b : page-23

part-1

few months has passed 4rm when d doctors has declared dat maanvi is absolutely fit & fine & free 4rm cancer...on d other hand virat and maanvi has confessed their luv 4 each other. R8 now maanvi is n hrishikesh an virat is in chandigardh (viren and jeevika r aware of der confession ) & jeevika is 6 months pregnant.

At d n8 viren & jeevika's room,

Viren- mujhe lagta hai k gharwalo ko virat aur maanvi k relationship k bare mein sab kuch bata dena chahiye.

Jeevika-par virenji sab log kaise react karenge pata nahi..m..mmujhe toh bahot tension ho rahi hai upar se buaji'

Viren- uff ho jeevika...nahi, fikar minister...tum kyon itna soch rahi ho, main hoon na main sab sambhal loonga waise bhi "jab mia biwi raazi toh kya karega kaazi".

Jeevika-toh phir ab kya kare

Viren- ek kaam karte hai sabse pehle virat se is bare mein baat karte hai, okay.

Jeevika- thik hai virenji.

Virat's room

Virat was busy composing a new music and suddenly his phone rang, he picked up d phone

Virat- haan maanvi bolo kya baat hai

Maanvi- kya yaar virat tumhari baat mein itni berukhi ...zaara pyar se hello toh bol hi sakte ho na..jao mai tumse baat nahi karti

Virat-ummm... Wohhh...m really sorry main actually kuch music compose karne ki koshish kar raha tha par dimaag mein koi sur hi nahi aa rahe hai upar se kal kai aur studios mein jana hai apna music lekar shayad koi kaam mil jaaye'

Maanvi- virat, sorry toh mujhe bolni chahiye tum itni mehnat kar rahe ho aur mai bewajah tum pe bhadag gayi...Accha chodo ye shab bate...par tum itne dipressed kyon lag rahe humesha yaad rakhna "try and try till u get success"...

Virat- maanvi tum sach mein meri inspiration ho, agar tum nahi hoti toh mera kya hota.

Maanvi- oye hoye, ab mujhe maska marna band karo aur jaldi se apna kaam khatam karo, okay'bye bad mein baat karte hai

Virat-arre aaarrre maanvi tum kuch bhool rahi ho?

Maanvi-bhool rahi hun? Main?

Virat-haan tum.

Maanvi-kya bhool rahi hoon?

Virat-ufff ho tum bandariya ki bandariya hi rahogi,kuch bhi nahi samajhti

Maanvi-aur tum chep ke chep hi rahoge, clearly kuch batate hi nahi

Virat-aargh...okay, maanvi, mujhe ek kiss chahiye

Maanvi- wattt? Over phone? Hav u gone mad

Virat- oh o, agar phone pe koi problem hai toh mai tumhare paas aa jau

Maanvi-virrrattt mazak band karo... tum aisa kuch nahi karoge'

Virat-okay, main aisa kuch nahi karunga ...agar tum...

Maanvi-thik hai baba ummm...nahi mujhse nahi hoga

Virat-phir mai aa raha hun...u know me, main tumhare liye kuch bhi kar sakta hun

Maanvi-tum mujhe blackmail kar rahe ho'tumhe toh mai...

Virat-soch lo...

Maanvi-ummm...thik hai...muahhh

Virat-aye haye...meri sherni ne toh mujhe ghayal hi ar diya

Maanvi-accha thik hai...ab mai rakhti hoon, bye

Virat-love u dear...bye

Maanvi-(in her mind) love u too...

I hope u guyz liked it...
Feel free to say anything,may be criticism, improvement or praising

should i continue???????

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yes, you should be continue!!!!!!!! when u write it, can u plz PM me?

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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely start
continue soon and do pm me!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Plz continue asap:) It's good start.
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Plz continue soon..and do PM me plzzz :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice..loved it..
Please pm me wen u update
Thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
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so cute
i thnk virat will go to meet her anyhow
she gave him kiss on phone wow cute
update ssooon
Edited by cutyvirman - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved the start
cont soon an dpm me
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NICE start
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its good continuee ...soon will be waiting

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