Originally posted by: BrunoMars
Loved it!
The cuteness, and the way everyone talked, it totally
fits with the personality they have. LoL Kadambari,
madhuri dixit of Devdas, love the way you used that.
And make Viren and Virat wait!
Virat and Vanshika's moment was too cute. I really
love the bondig they share and I could feel that while
reading. Your way of writing is so good! There's nothing you
should change, it's so perfect.
I could see everything happen in front of me.
It's beautiful!
- Good luck with your exams.
Heyya! Nice to interact with you again :)
Thank you, I really do try and keep with the character sketches on screen or else writing Alternative Universe characters is a bit pointless if you really want to delve into their hearts. Ah, Khadambheri, lol I love her and Pinky too. They are like the stereotypical auntie you meet, completely oblivious to everything around them then when you least expect it, they actually have a brain and huge hearts.
Haha, Viren and Virat waiting; I was running out of ideas on how to incorporate some more 'bonding' so went with the flow of my thoughts. I honestly do think that as we explore more into Jeevika's character, then she is more like Manvi than what we think because being joined to the hip with Manvi for 21 years and not being influenced by her 'Manvi-ness'? Doubt it :L
Aww, I absolutely adore Virat and Vanshika and the couple of scenes we've had this week were ultimate adorable. She's his mother, she knows him better than himself so at the end of the day they're an absolute joy to write for. Thank you once again; I think anyone who writes things, whether it be a poem or a book will always find faults with their work but it's overwhelming when people actually comment and like their drabbles :)
Thank you for the third time for the good luck, I really needed it :L (So glad exams finished today :D)
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