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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey everyone .
I have decided tow write a story which will be a crossover. I am going to weave over ek hazaaron mein meri behna hai and iss pyar ko kya naam doon. I love both the shows . Will be posting the story on both forums.

Part 1-

A white Aston Martin screeched to a halt in front of a huge mansion. The door opened and Arnav Singh Raizada ran into the house.

Anjali: "Chote? Chote?"

Arnav: "Where is she?"

Anjali: "She is in the room. The doctor is on his way and Viren is with her right now."

Arnav rushed to the room.

Arnav entered the room and sat down next to her. He held her hand in his: "Maanvi, what is this?? Are you okay?"

Maanvi sat up on the bed.

Maanvi: "Oh God! I am fine! Please everyone relax!"

Arnav angrily: "Is this a joke?"

Viren: "Bhai, don't listen to her. She fainted again today. She is taking everything lightly and I am getting worried."

Anjali came in with the doctor.

Anjali: "Dr. Sharma, Maanvi is having the same problems again. I..I don't understand. She has been taking the medicines regularly...so why did she faint again?"

Maanvi lowered her head.

Arnav whispered to Maanvi: "You didn't take your medicine."

Maanvi whispered back: "Did you?"

Arnav looked away.

The doctor checked her.

Dr. Sharma: "She shouldn't be having the problems if she has been taking the medicine. Anyways, she is fine now but I am going to have to do some tests. PLEASE make sure that she takes the medicines regularly and on time! Bring her to the hospital tomorrow for a checkup. I will write her a prescription for tonight just in case."

The doctor left after having written the prescription.

Maanvi: "Please don't listen to the doctor! He doesn't know what he is talking about!"

Viren: "And you do?!"

Arnav: "He wouldn't have to come here today if you had taken your medicines on time."

Anjali: "Oh please! Both of you shut up!"

She came forward with Maanvi's AND Arnav's medicine.

Anjali: "I know BOTH of you have been slacking! From now on you are going to take them in front of us, EVERYDAY! Viren, go and see if Maanvi has swallowed her tablets! You know how difficult BOTH of them can be! Both of you will drive us nuts!"

Arnav and Maanvi looked at each other but they complied, they had no other choice!

Maanvi opened her mouth: "Ahhh...there! Happy?"

Viren: "Good. I am going to check on you every time!"

Maanvi: "The solution to my problem is not these medicines."

Viren: "Then?"

Maanvi: "You see my brothers are useless! They are no fun! You, Viren Bhaiyya, are ok but too nice! You listen to everyone and are the ideal son vis. a vis. no fun! However, my eldest brother is the antithesis of fun!! He is never home! He never smiles, never laughs! He is such a robot! Work, work and work!"

She ran to Anjali: "In fact Di, are you sure he is even related to us? I mean the three of us at least smile once in a while...but this guy..."

Arnav: "What the? I don't have time for this nonsense...I have work to do!"

But Maanvi ran and stood before the door blocking his way.

Maanvi: "Bhaiyya, do you know who I am talking about?"

Arnav: "I don't know and I don't care!"

Anjali: "Hmmm...it sounds very much like ASR, doesn't it?"

Viren scratching his head and pretending to be clueless: "Uhhh I don't know..."

Maanvi: "YES!!! Arnav Bhaiyya, it is you! And WE care! When are you going to get married? You are running out of time!"

Arnav: "WHAT??? Please, I am only 28!"

Anjali: "And not getting any younger!"

Viren: "What has this got to do with your solution for why you keep falling sick?"

Arnav: "Thank you, Viren! Someone in this family has some brains apart from me!"

Maanvi: "Oh, I will tell you! I will not get well until there is a marriage in this house!"

Arnav: "What nonsense!"

Arnav walked out of the room.

Arnav was just about to close the doors to his room behind him when,

Viren: "Bhaiyya! Bhaiyya!"

Anjali: "Oh My God! Chote!"

Arnav ran back to Maanvi's room.

Maanvi had fainted again.

Viren had lifted her up and put her on the bed.

Arnav ran to her. He sprinkled some water on her face to awaken her.

Arnav: "Maanvi! Maanvi!"

But she wasn't waking up.

Arnav: "FINE! FINE! There will be a marriage in this house!"

Maanvi opened her eyes.

Maanvi: "Promise?"

Arnav: "Yesss!"

Maanvi started jumping on her bed.

Arnav: "What the?"

Anjali started laughing, too because she had realized that Maanvi was only acting this time.

Arnav: "You were acting?"

Maanvi: "By hook or by crook, a deal is a deal, isn't it ASR?"

Arnav got up and angrily left the room. But before he left he turned around.

Arnav: "Start looking for a suitable bride ASAP."

Anjali: "Really Chote?"

Arnav: "Really BUT for Viren. I promised there will be a marriage. I never said it would be mine."

He smiled at his siblings.

Arnav: "Here you go. I, too, can smile. If you can be shrewd, don't forget I am your elder brother."

He left the room.

But the smile was wiped off Viren's face.

Viren: "What the..."

So please comment and silent readers please atleast press the like button!

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Part 1- page 1
Part 2- page 2
Part 3- page 4
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Dis was cool... Continue soon...!!!!
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awesome..pls pm me when you update...cont soon
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Awesome...viren saying 'what the...' 🤣
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Oh this is so cute... its really interesting
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grt..i love it.. n viren saying what d !! lol..pls continue
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Thank you soo much for all your lovely comments. they mean a lot thank you!
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Interesting start. Manvi, Viren and Arnav siblings LOL :D
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Good start...Loved it...😊
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Part 2-

Khushi: "When I fall in love, the stars in the night's sky will twinkle even more brilliantly...I will see him and only him everywhere...When I fall in love, flowers will shower us and all the shining stars will find their home in our shelter..."

Jeevika: "Khushi...Khushi...KHUSHI! Wake up!!! Khushi, WAKE UP!"

Khushi: "hmmm...let me sleep some more...when I fall in love..."

Jeevika: "Wake up before Beeji or Buaji pull you out of the bed on their own!"

Khushi woke up with a start.

Jeevika started laughing.

Jeevika: "Good Morning, my sweet heart!"

Khushi: "Di!!! Grrr!!!! I was having such an amazing dream!"

Jeevika: "I KNOW!!! So what else will happen when you fall in love?"

Khushi blushed: "You heard it? I was talking out loud in my sleep again, wasn't I?"

Jeevika started imitating Khushi: "When I fall in love the stars..."

Khushi: "OKAY!!"

Buaji: "Sanka Devi! Are you up??"

Khushi: "Oh my god!"

Jeevika: "Hurry up! Get ready!"

Jeevika: "Buaji! She is up...she is just getting ready..."

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Maanvi: "This isn't fair Bhaiyya!"

Arnav: "Good Morning to you too."

Viren: "What did I ever do to you?"

Arnav: "Oh common you are 26 and what did they say? Yes! Not getting any younger!"

Nani: "CHOTE! I absolutely won't allow this!"

Arnav: "Fine. Maanvi, sorry I tried but now Nani won't allow it..."

Anjali: "Nani won't allow the younger brother to get married before the elder one."

Viren: "YOU have to get married before I do!"

Arnav: "Well then, that's too bad. I am not getting married any time soon! HP is the breakfast served?"

HP: "Arnav Saab..."

Viren: "One minute HP, Bhaiyya, what if I don't want to get married too?"

Arnav: "It's your choice... Do you like someone already?"

Viren: "Noo, it's not that..."

Arnav: "You don't want to get married now?"

Arnav: "No. I don't know..."

Arnav: "Maanvi, we will just find someone for you then. Problem solved! There will be a marriage in this house and we will be rid of you! HP, breakfast?"

HP: "Arnav Saab..."

Maanvi gasped: "One minute HP! BHAIYYA! OKAY, so none of you want to get married? FINE! One day I will leave you all and then you will..."

Viren, Anjali, Arnav: "MAANVI!"

Arnav: "SHUT UP Maanvi! Don't talk rubbish!"

Viren: "FINE! I will get married!"

Nani: "Fine! But Chote, you must get married before Maanvi does."

Maanvi: "I AM NEVER GETTING MARRIED!"

Arnav: "PERFECT! I have a sister who is one in million! She thinks just like me! HP, what happened to the breakfast?"

HP: "Arnav Saab..."

Anjali: "One minute HP! Fine, we will start looking for a suitable match for Viren. But you are next."

Arnav: "Di!"

Anjali just turned around and left.

Arnav: "HP? Where is he?"

Viren: "I don't know. Wasn't he just here?"

Maanvi: "He is sick of the two of you just like we all are! He left!"

Nani and Maanvi left.

Arnav and Viren looked at each other. They were standing alone by the door.

Viren: "At this very moment you are not my favorite, you know that?"

Arnav: "Oh don't worry, you will be fine. Just keep rejecting all the proposals! Let's go. I don't think we are going to get breakfast in this house today."

Viren: "I might. You definitely won't."

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